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Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 28, 2009 23:12:50 GMT -6
For years, Myths were passed down Generation to Generation. Stories to scare young children. Some meant to warn people. And Some meant to…Destroy . One myth created by the Mohawk Indians foretells the Arrival of “The Dark Ones” or “The Shadows” those that can move between the worlds. But their lands were taken over by the British Settlers in 1748. The chief cursed the colony, leaving them in fear for over 262 years.
262 years later…. Kingsville 2010
Lindsey Willows has just moved to the town of Kingsville and is expecting to make it big. After being fired from her old job she opens up a small store selling Antiques. The months pass and everything has been fine, On the job she meet Carson and Sarah and that’s when it all begins. Lindsey receives a Antique from a Native American that holds a dark past. His only Instructions “Not to Open the Box”. But when she opens it ,The Shadows Awaken from The Underground. The town goes to hell and everything is being over taken by darken and The Dark Ones are coming from The Underground. The Shadows are Coming….
Alison Lohman as Lindsey WillowsLindsey has just moved to Kingsville trying to start a new life after the death of her brother. She opens up “Willow’s Antiques” A small business that was once owned by her mother. She thinks her life is going well. Until she receives a box from a client. But when opened her life goes to hell. And the shadows are awoken. Amber Benson as Sarah IngersonSarah is the girl of the town that is always shy and never wanting to make friends. But one day when walking in the Antique shop she makes one. Her and Lindsey become good friends. But when the box arrives her gift comes into play. What is Sarah’s gift? O is this a Key to stopping the Dark Ones Christopher Gorham as Carson NelsonCarson is the heartthrob of the town. Once the jock of the High School and now the sexy man of the Fire Department. When meeting Lindsey they both have an instant connection a bond that will bring them together. But when he is put into the loop of the Shadows, everything is going to end. Kelly Blatz as Alec KlineAlec, a townie just getting into everyone face. Everyone hates him and has no respect for him. But his Girlfriend and Him practice Wicca they are put into the target of The Shadows. They both are trying to run but not everything will be the same. Chris O’Donnell as Paul LionsPaul, the town detective. He knows all the secrets about the town. But the one thing that has stumped him is the Myth of The Dark Ones. Everything he thought is changing. But when he comes into contact with the Shadows his life is put at risk. Brenda Song as Lilah SingerLilah is the girl of the town that everyone adores. She helps the people in need and is the one to go to for help. But when she applies for a job at Willow’s Antiques she becomes a pawn in the Battle of the Shadows. Can she get out or will life end her? Notes on the Movie This was a book I was Writing a while back and I decied to turn it into a movie. This movie will be a saga including four movies. They are currently being planned at the moment! Also watch out a Promo Script explaining the Movie in depth! Thanks For Reading Brian ;D
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Phoenix
Nov 28, 2009 16:21:50 GMT -6
Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 28, 2009 16:21:50 GMT -6
I like the idea but I just have the weirdest feeling that I have heard this before? But I am just unsure about it at the moment but It has Potential but I will wait for the pilot and see what to expect from it but I have the feeling this has been done before but I don't know but thats just me lol but I will stick around! Good Luck You do have to make msome changes to the cast such as Shia he is already in another pitch such as Bludhaven as one of the main cast members so for a bit of advice from experience ADVICE!1) Study the cast on exsiting shows on the VPN and also on pitches so you are not using other actors people want to use. 2) Expand on the descriptions explain more of the series like tell us what to expect get more creative thats what we love to see! Dont be afriad. 3) Lastly, try and get the stories all done before picking the people to play them. I ran into these problems in the past and with the advice given to me It helped me figure out how to do this and make it more awesome! To be honest I do like this but I really want to see more!
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Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 28, 2009 16:19:12 GMT -6
I do like this as well! Everything seems well thought out and you seem to be doing very well with getting attention! At first I did not get what it was but then as I read on I got it more! Very Solid pitch I am very excited for the pitch! Good Cast! I cannot wait!
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Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 27, 2009 20:14:49 GMT -6
****UPDATED****
Mark Harmon, Gina Torres and Channing Tatum joined the cast for later in the season
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Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 20, 2009 18:52:03 GMT -6
OMG OMG OMG OMGOMGOGMOGMOGMGOMGOGMOGMOGMOGMGOMGOGMGOMG
I have to agree with Chris on this one! This is a series I would tottaly read! I love the premise and Chloe has always been my Fav Character! I love her soo much and she has a lot of potential for a series and your giving that to her! I better catch up on Smallville so I know whats going on! LOL I love this! Keep At IT!
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Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 19, 2009 5:39:15 GMT -6
its an amazing Movie! I was on the edge of my seat watching it! Its a good movie you should watch it!
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Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 15, 2009 7:14:40 GMT -6
I to also use Celtx and I love it! It makes my writing so much easier!
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Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 13, 2009 5:27:39 GMT -6
I'm not trying to be mean I love The Amazing Race but Im just giving my thoughts thats all. I'll give the show a chance to see how you do it but in my Opinion I think Reality should be seen but thats just my thoughts LOL But Good Luck!
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Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 12, 2009 14:23:11 GMT -6
I can honestly say this is something I am not a fan off. Only because I feel the Amazing Race should be seen and not written. I think that Reality should be seen and not read. I am sorry but I just don't think this will work out. But thanks for pitching ;D
Also The Amazing Race is already a Show and that would be a bad thing because you would be copying it so....its not Original...
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Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 11, 2009 20:34:19 GMT -6
In the year 2120 the universe is in chaos! The Planet Alphania is threating to destroy Earth. The US government has been training special people called “The Protectors”. A group of Five trained to fight for Earth, and save it at any cost. Now the battle has began. And they will stop at nothing to save man-kind from Extinction! Julie Star is captain of the New York branch of The Protectors. She and 3 others are the only Protectors in the city. But when the Branch is attacked by Alphanians they have no choice but to run Giving the Alphanians an opportunity to begin their master plan. The world is falling apart. The government is falling and everything about Earth will change! They are our Last Hope...... Cast Portrayed by Katie Cassidy Julie star was just promoted to Captain of Earth Protectors. She and the four others are preparing to take down Alphania. But when the Alphanians attack first and kill Helena and Heron they have to run in order to save the world. Now she has to lead the team into the stars and save the world by finding the other protectors. Portrayed by Jamie Chung May is Julie's best friend and Pilot of The Ascension. Her brother Jack and herself joined the Resistance at a young age after the death of their parents. After being made a Protector her brother went to the Planet Kliment to fight a war. Her and the crew have a tough road ahead of them.
Portrayed by Chris Pine Linoel was always the bad boy, always getting FUI'S, Flying Under the Influence. His Parole officer sent him to the Resistance to change his character and it got it to becoming a Protector. Now that he is a trained Fighter he and the remaining Two Protectors go into space to fight. Portrayed by Bradly Cooper Mack is the tech guy on the ship. Once he was a Protector but when he was shot he retired and still works for the Resistance. He along with Amy have fled the Main Building and joined to assist The Protectors in the battle against Alphania. Portrayed by Dichen Lachmen A graduate from Harvard Medical has become the best Doctor in the World! From helping little children with colds to helping wounded Solders in battle. But when the Main building is under attack she runs to The Ascension to help The Protectors in their time of need. Episodes The Resistance is beginning to fall. The Alphanians are gaining speed toward Earth. But when they arrive a bit too early, The Protectors (Katie Cassidy, Jamie Chang, and Chris Pine) must fight. As the battle rages on, Assassians come down from the sky taking to the streets. But when Heron and Helena are killed, the other Protectors, Julie, May, Lionel, Brandon (Bradley Cooper) and Amy (Dichen Lachmen) escape to Pluto to the Earth Colony where the Alphanians only find them again and the battle continues. Meanwhile, the search for The Falcon continues; and the Alphanian leader Winda tries to seek revenge onto The Resistance for taking her sister. As the battle of Earth still rages on in the Solar System, the team enters the Nebulan Galaxy to find the remains of The Falcon and no survivors. As Julie (Katie Cassidy) mourns her father, she finds a key into unlocking Project X, A Powerful piece of tech that is able to destroy an entire planet in just one push of a button; Meanwhile, Swarms of Parasites, an alien bug that are able to control anything that can fully function, attacks The Team leaving them defenseless against the race of Parasites A Virus in the Main Frame of the Ascension leaves the team defenseless once more. As Brandon tries to fix it, he finds that not only is the Ascension losing power but that the life support is dying down. But as if things could not get any worse, A small league of Aliens called the Zerons, Small little creatures, their eyes black, faces pale. And the only thing standing between them and the Protectors is glass. As this goes on, Julie discovers that Project X is dangerous if put into the hands of Alphanians May (Jamie Chang) and Lionel (Chris Pine) leave The Ascension to explore the planet Lea where another Earth Colony is in danger from the tribe of Aliens Nabinis, but the one problem is the bracelets have died out and with the Nabinis being stronger then fifteen men combined this is the one battle that could end it all. Meanwhile Julie (Katie Cassidy) takes the Ascension and travels to the Windfall Galaxy to find Project X and learn all about its functions and what its meant to do. But when Henderson comes to take Project X, its a face off between Julie and Him. The Episode of the Protectors you will never forget! Travel back to the year 2084 to see how the battle started! Earth has just mastered Intergalactic Travel and many Species are wanting to make an alliance with Earth to make a better future. But some are not. A new force in the Galaxy is coming into play called The Goracks. A powerful race descended from Snakes The Galactic Alliance comes to terms to create Warriors called “The Protectors”. The First two Will (Jensen Ackles) and Jess (Ashley Greene). But things get out of hand when the Goracks attack the Alliance starting a universal war between many worlds. Opening Credits [video src="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m6bSR_O2WIk&feature=sub[/center]"][/video] OPENING BY CHRIS DAVIS! Guide to the Galaxy The Resistance: A Special Organization of Humans that fight against Aliens that seek out to end the world. Among them are The Protectors. But The Resistance is falling and The Protectors must travel to other galaxies and get the Good Aliens to help them defeat the evil in the Universe
The Protectors: A group of Five given a chance to Protect the world. Some are human, Some Alien some Both. But when the New York Branch is given DNA of Aliens making them the most Powerful Protectors in the history of the Universe. If all were to die at once, the new Protectors are chosen, but it could be too late.
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Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 11, 2009 10:31:10 GMT -6
Alright I am getting pissed off at people for thinking that vampires 'Sparkle'! I mean really? Im here to prove a point that Vampires are bad ass. When they go out in the sun they burn. Thats the question I ask! Wheres Edward burning? I would love to see that. LMAO! But well I'm going to ask what you hate about Twilight and What do you think of Today's Vampires? Leave a comment below!
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Savior
Nov 9, 2009 16:27:51 GMT -6
Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 9, 2009 16:27:51 GMT -6
Jack! Another Amazing series! I don't know how you do it! But this is just amazing! Me being a huge fan of Sci-Fi I cannot wait to see this and how you do it. The thing that sticks out the most is that you made it in 2012. Which is the "Apocalypse" but I like how you can make your own story out of that So KUDOS! I am looking forward to reading the pilot and see what you do with it!
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Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 4, 2009 20:50:03 GMT -6
Dollhouse Re-Imprinted was once an idea Me Chris and Jack had but the idea is now is dead but I made the VDVD so I thought I would Enter it! The First Season VDVD Set for The Path Not Taken A VDVD cover for the hit show GIFTED!
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Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 2, 2009 5:26:45 GMT -6
OK Forget it I'll drop it lol! thanks for the advice guys!
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Origins
Nov 1, 2009 14:21:16 GMT -6
Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 1, 2009 14:21:16 GMT -6
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Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 1, 2009 14:07:20 GMT -6
Ya I started storyboarding but I sometimes don't but I have lol!!!
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Origins
Nov 1, 2009 10:46:43 GMT -6
Post by Brian Melanson on Nov 1, 2009 10:46:43 GMT -6
ALRIGHT! I am not going to give up on this Series. I want to try everything to make it amazing! I am going to try and I am not going to give up! Just trust me!
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Post by Brian Melanson on Oct 29, 2009 4:49:09 GMT -6
1. Buffy the Vampire Slayer The first Joss Whedon show I ever saw and I loved it! I loved the characters the most, But my favorite of all time was Anya. But the thing that brought me in was the writing, the way Joss made Supernatural Drama and making real life problems into supernatural ones! This is number one!!
2. Ghost Whisperer A show about a sexy woman who can see ghost who wouldn't love that! But the show is very creative and has many stories to tell, not just the ghosts but Melinda and her figuring out who she is! It just entered its 5th season and I am very excited for the rest of it!
3. Dollhouse Joss how do you do it! I love everything about this show, Eliza Dushku, amazing plot lines and Eliza Dushku. Its very original where people can become other people and play other persona's! Now in its second season we can see Summer GLAU! and many other Buffy/Angel alumni!
4. N.C.I.S This was not my favorite show when it started but I gave it a second chance in season six and it was beyond amazing!!! I love it! I love Tony and Gibbs the most. They seem to have many stories to tell and I cannot wait until they tell them!
5. Harper's Island Even though the series was only 13 episodes it was beyond amazing! A wedding party on a island with a dark past. Them being killed off one by one it seems very original!! I wish that they would make a season two like thing on a different place. But one death made me cry because I loved the character too much!
Off the Chart: The Vampire Diaries, How I Met Your Mother, The Big Bang Theory, Angel, Mad TV, C.S.I, Flashfoward, and Survivor.
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