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Post by gamila on Oct 6, 2010 0:05:18 GMT -6
And yeah, I just remembered, Chloe has a new power that can change any piece of clothing into a different colour. . ;D ;D ;D
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Post by maria26 on Oct 10, 2010 9:47:03 GMT -6
I have to be honest and say that I didn't enjoy Archer as much as I did with Trial but I gave it a good 7.
Bruce and Oliver made this episode for me. I really enjoyed their scenes together and their dynamic. The all Archer storyline was a little difficult this time to follow as english isn't my native language. The fact that I'm sick isn't helping either.LOL
I already said it but I love Chloe's relationship with Bruce. Bruce is only at ease when he's around Chloe and that's a side of him that I like. He can open himself to her and not try to hide what his feeling inside. So her showing up at his birthday was great. Is it just me or Bruce was sorta happy that she went to his party alone and that his supposed BFF wasn't there?LOL
The Archer entrance was awsome and I could totally see it in my head. Just like "Trial" it's like I was there.
Seems like Chloe and Oliver can't catch a break. They definitely need some time alone together and just do normal stuff. I'm a little bumped that Oliver tought for a second that Bruce could have killed someone. I mean sure he's track record isn't going for him but I thought he would have much faith in him. Thankfully Chloe was there to set the record straight.
Emil's got attitude and I like it. Love the way he responded to Eric while in jail but to think that his decision was a mistake? Did not see that coming!
Did I say how much I love Chlollie?LOL I mean seeing them joking around and sorta flirting even though they are about to go fight villains and save their friend...I just ADORE their relationship. Of course you already knew that.
The Archer sure is a twisted man with a twited mind. For him to play a game of one and one with Oliver and Bruce where only one of them could live was sick! I'm not sure Bruce wold have told Oliver about the kiss if the Archer didn't beat him at this. I'm glad Oliver knows and I have to say I was surprise that he asked Bruce to take of Chloe if he was the one to die. I mean Bruce did kiss Chloe behind Oliver's back, you'd think he'd want his girl to stay away from the man. But the ending od the fight scene? OMFG it was all a set up from the beginning. Bruce and Oliver worked together to take the Archer down by playing his rules and they beat him at his own game. It was FABULOUS! The idead of the bullet proof vest was amazing of you Jack. I wouldn't have thought about it.
I was also glad when Oliver talked about Roulette, it kinda brings me back to Smallville.
Perry isn't giving up on Watchtower now that she talked to him is he?LOL
The last Oliver/Bruce conversation just nailed it. Oliver talking about his experience and how he felt in love with Chloe and how he knew the effect she could have on people by helping them see the light was so real and true. Because that is exactly how Chloe is. Bruce was finally honest with Oliver by telling him that he does have a connection/feelings for Chloe but that he wouldn't act on it. The way Oliver talked made it seems like he thought that Chloe could give into Bruce and that's the part I didn't like. Maybe I see things wrong but as a major Chlollie fan, I do believe they're endgame. Their relationship is so special and what they've been through together / the fact that they know each other better than anyone else...well Oliver shoudn't even question that. He made it clear with Bruce that Chloe was his and that he wasn't gonna let Bruce take her away from him but he shouldn't have had to do so if he was 100% trusting Chloe and the love thier sharing.
Bruce is gone to Japan. I'm sad even though he's back for the finale episode. I'd like to see Chloe making it clear to him that the only man in her heart is Oliver. I mean I don't want to see her break his heart but maybe it has to be that way...but at the same time I enjoy their relationship and seeing more of Bruce's feelings for Chloe would be terrifying!
Can't wait for Vendetta which if I'm not wrong is a huge episode for Chlollie or at least more scenes with them are coming, lots of Perry/Chloe which is always a good thing and Helena is BACK!! ;D
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Post by Jack Malone on Oct 10, 2010 22:11:09 GMT -6
I have to be honest and say that I didn't enjoy Archer as much as I did with Trial but I gave it a good 7. Its cool! Thanks for the numbers Haha, you know, I wouldn't have guessed that English wasn't your native language. I'm glad you liked the Oliver/Bruce dynamic, the episode was theirs this week. This season, with Bruce and Chloe, in the cheesiest way I can explain it, Bruce is this dark character, and Chloe is this light character. So, in a way, when Bruce is with Chloe, it is balanced out for him, and becomes this grounded character. I'm glad you picked up on that. And yeah, he was definately happy about Chloe being on her own. Thats great! You are not wrong. They'll definately get a "cool down" when the parents show up. So that'll be a good breather for them. Oliver does see Bruce as a friend, but he also has his doubts about what he can/can't do. Luckily, Chloe is there to set things straight, and help Oliver see that, but yeah, it was mainly Oliver's doubt. Emil definately has a ... sense of humor. His attitude in jail was fun to write. He's not a pushover, and I didn't want him to seem like in jail he'd get pushed around, because he'd fight back. Hahahaha. Yup, already knew that! LOL That part was staged. Bruce and Oliver wanted the situation to seem real with the "if I die" part and everything. I don't think Oliver could picture Chloe with anyone else, especially Bruce, who went behind his back and planted one on her. But, he does know, by the end of the episode, his feelings are geniune and Bruce really does care about Chloe. And thanks! I'm glad you liked that twist at the end. I mainly did it for the start of the next act, where Chloe comes running and cradles him. I sort of pictured this scene on a television screen, where we'd have to wait till we came back from commercial, and everything would be getting more intense, before Oliver sort of reveals it was all staged. I'm glad you liked it! Don't you just miss Chloe on Smallville lately Good thing Oliver is saving that show from dying out. Just my opinion of course Hehe. You'll see more of that next episode. It really is the effect Chloe has on people. I think I referenced Davis Bloome there (just got home from school so I'm really buggered, can't remember much haahaha). And, yeah, I just wanted it to be clear that maybe Bruce feels this way because she saved him, and not because they have a deep connection, or whatever Bruce is feeling, but maybe Chloe's guidance into the light had made him feel that. So yeah, I'm glad you're picking up on a lot of deeper material I've put into the episodes. I can't remember word for word that whole scene, it was kind of long, but I know I didn't intend to write it as Oliver having lack of trust in Chloe. I think he's more looking out for her, and making sure Bruce doesn't try anything. The one thing I have planned out for the entirety of the series is the Chloe/Oliver relationship, something I feel is very important to both characters and their arcs. I will say that there is a lot of good/bad stuff coming up between them if the show manages to last as long as I would wish for it to, and have all that worked out. As for them being endgame, I don't want to ruin anything by saying something, BUT I do know where they'll end up by the end. So I've definately thought about how to wrap the show up (hoping I'll get as many seasons to get to do the ending I want hehe). Well we'll see Bruce in the finale, but the "present time" Bruce stays in Japan (unless we get renewed for a second season and I can bring him back from there). He's off to start his "Batman" training. Well I should say finished, he started during the hiatus between episodes 6 and 7. The Bruce in the finale is from "the future" parts of the crossover finale. Definately some funny/good moments of Chlollie, a lot more than we've seen lately. Helena is back! And yes, some great Perry/Chloe stuff in that episode. [/quote]
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Post by Jack Malone on Oct 11, 2010 0:02:53 GMT -6
PLEASE NOTEWatchtower will take an extra week off. A new episode will come next monday. School has just started up, and I have some things to catch up on that are due this week that I couldn't finish off at the end of last term due to sickness. I will post one or two preview scenes up of 'Vendetta'. The first will go up tomorrow, when Watchtower would usually air, the other sometime down the week. Again, sorry for the delay, things will calm down after this first week back. Thank you
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Post by maria26 on Oct 11, 2010 0:04:01 GMT -6
Don't you just miss Chloe on Smallville lately Good thing Oliver is saving that show from dying out. Just my opinion of course I do. But like you said Oliver is totally saving the show for me as well. He's keeping Chloe's presence alive and so far I really love the way they're handling her absence. I just can't wait for her to be back and for Chlollie to be reunited.
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Post by Jack Malone on Oct 11, 2010 0:06:13 GMT -6
Don't you just miss Chloe on Smallville lately Good thing Oliver is saving that show from dying out. Just my opinion of course I do. But like you said Oliver is totally saving the show for me as well. He's keeping Chloe's presence alive and so far I really love the way they're handling her absence. I just can't wait for her to be back and for Chlollie to be reunited. That scene is going to be epic. I mean, we got a reunion scene in "Checkmate" and that was epic, and Oliver was gone for only a while. Chloe has been gone for episodes, the reunion will be golden. Plus: I'll upload one of the Chlollie scenes tomorrow that I had fun writing. Its not a "big" moment, but its a funny conversation between them. Just to make up for the week off.
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Post by gamila on Oct 11, 2010 12:34:45 GMT -6
Don't you just miss Chloe on Smallville lately Good thing Oliver is saving that show from dying out. Just my opinion of course ohhh God I do. I really do miss her a lot Like you said Oliver is doing a good job, he's really saving Smallville in my opinion....without Chloe the show is really boring I want Chlollie reunion to be more than Epic ;D ....somenthing close to warrior flashback ;D
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Post by The Doctor on Oct 15, 2010 12:28:09 GMT -6
Jack . I am so sorry that i havent been able to write this. School is getting crazy and Im dealing with alot right now. But thankfully i have free time. SO i read Archer and It was a really good read . I give it a 10 . Oh and BTW i loved the promo for WT...the new one Everything that happened in the episode was amazing from start to finish. I loved how you worked this Archer into being the perfect mad-man and you added a sort of SAW type deal into the episode. Thats what instantly drew me in . I also enjoyed how you had Perry and WT talk to eachother. I rather liked that. I am also glad that the kiss between Bruce and Chloe was finally addressed to Ollie along with the Love Triangle that is perfectly in place now . Here is what i thought of each character: Chloe: As always wonderful and amazing. I miss her on Smallville right now . Its very depressing how she is gone. But it is doing a good job setting you up for WT . I loved how she and Ollie have such a deep connection with eachother and that she will do anything to save him and find him. I also liked how she disguised her voice and talked to Perry about being WT . That was the highlight for me Oliver: Okay I think this episode was good with him in it. I liked how he first lets Chloe know that Bruce getting kidnapped had nothing to do with him . Another thing I liked is how Archer kidnapped Ollie and had him and Bruce fight eachother. I also thought the elaborate plan was pretty epic . The talk between Bruce and Ollie about Chloe was nice. But i kind of wanted Ollie to kick Bruces ass first . Emil: He is someone i wouldnt want to screw with. I like how at the end he ends up killing the other guy. I liked it. I also enjoyed how Waller contacts him and tries to bring him back to the darkside. Very good bringing her back into the mix. Mia: Liked her small appearance. Made me miss her on Smallville . I hope they bring her back. Meanwhile....I cant wait for her final episode. I will dislike the episode if you try and kill her off. Cuz i will be expecting a guest appearance from her down the road. Perry: It is AWESOME how this guy is becoming more and more awesome . I love that he finally got to speak to WT. I think he has been waiting for that one. And his and Chloes scenes together always make me smile. And finally BRUCE: Now i like that this episode was an amazing turning point for him. It was epic that he had to go through all these trials. I at first didnt like Bruce but he gradually started to grow on me. The first trial was nice. I liked how you had to make him make a choice to sacrifice himself or let the people die. I thought that was really good. The scenes with Oliver were dare i say it......AMAZING . I mean i just loved the fact that the love triangle has started. And his voiceover towards the end....I understood exactly what he was saying. That was one of my favorite things in this episode. ALL IN ALL JACK....I LOVED the episode . I still give it a 10. Im putting my questions in the spoiler section
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Post by finnx202 on Oct 16, 2010 14:17:47 GMT -6
Hi there. I gotta say I love this series so far. I like the character Chloe, I'm doing my own Smallville rewatch (still on season one) and I read the recent episode "Awakened", which was pretty awesome.
I give the season and the episode a 10. Hope to hear more out of the series real soon.
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Post by maria26 on Oct 19, 2010 5:38:48 GMT -6
I give Vendetta a good 8.
So the big Chlollie moment was Oliver finally seeing the footage with Chloe revealing her feelings for him? I loved it. I wish the scene would have been longer but still it was very good.
Yay for Perry finally putting the pieces together and finding out that Chloe is Watchtower. I loved their scenes together and the fact that he wouldn't give up on Watchtower until he foudn out it was Chloe was awsome. Their relationship is such a freash breath of air in the show. Like father/daughter and I hope for more. I was so proud of him when he deleted the article and talked to Chloe about taking some time off without revealing to her what he knows.
As much as I love Oliver and Helens as individuals, their scenes didn't do anything for me. I love her friendship with Chloe but her scenes were Oliver were sort of boring.
Finally LOTS of Emile/Chloe. Chloe really sees the good in people and at the end it kicks her in the butt. She did everything to protect Emil from Deadshot and he just killed Zoe without any remorses. I think we lost the good Emil forever. Which is sad considering what Chloe has done for him.
What can we expect for next week episode?
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Post by Jack Malone on Oct 19, 2010 6:08:38 GMT -6
I give Vendetta a good 8. Thanks!! Something I really wanted to come back to. I felt that the scene in "Deadshot" was really powerful, and something Oliver needed to see. There were some "cute" moments between the two, especially with Chloe and Oliver on the phone talking about his obsession with cartoons, and stuff, that I had a blast writing, but this scene at the end was really great to put together. It really solidifies their relationship, and things will really begin to move forward between them. This was the thing I didn't want to spoil. I'm glad you liked it! It was something I knew would be a great milestone in their relationship, and its really something that had to happen. Originally, Perry was going to tell Chloe he knew, as soon as he found out. But, I didn't want to rush it, and I didn't want it to be revealed as soon as he found out. So, I've set that up for some development during the second season, which yes, I still don't know if we'll get. Signs indicate from the reviews, and the commitment from you awesome readers that it should happen, from that point of view, just need some more feedback on the story I've got planned. Chris is sort of MIA at the moment, very busy and trying to get Trinity back up and running, so it'll be a bit of a wait I think. But yeah, Perry now knowing the secret is going to be really interesting, and if I get the chance to explore that furthermore in a second season, it would be even better! Thats cool. I enjoy writing Chloe/Helena more than any other scenes Helena shares with characters - but I think Oliver and Helena really get that mentor/apprentice thing going on, where there's that struggle of "who is really teaching who here". One second, Oliver could be teaching Helena to stay out of harm's way, the next, Helena is teaching Oliver that there's more to life than being a vigilante. Its fun. It is sad. Definately downhill from this point on for Emil. The killer in him returned in "Archer" when he killed that inmate that threatened him, and here, it escalated. I really enjoyed writing this dynamic, and Chloe really does suffer from her good heart. A big episode for Mia, her last episode of the series (more than likely). Her character will get wrapped up. Perry will try to help Chloe out in the Watchtower business, secretly unbeknownst to her, and stumbles across the Fate helmet. And the Chloe/Emil stuff really tenses up as the finale comes closer and closer. Thanks again for the review! Loved it!
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Post by MJ on Oct 19, 2010 7:26:24 GMT -6
So, after a bit of a wait (which I totally understand as I am trying to write Edge of Vision with Uni exams coming up myself :/ ) I finally get to read and review 'Vendetta', Watchtower's tenth episode. Anyway, starting with the recap. I know it's all stuff we've seen before but I loved the snippets you chose and thought that whole part went together well. The teaser is quite good too, not much to say because it's pretty short but I do quite enjoy the description you give in you action lines Anyway, this review will be a bit different, I'll be writing it as I read the episode so hopefully my opinions will be a lot fresher in my mind when I write them down. The structure of the review might be a bit different from my usual ones too but I want to see if this works better for me or not when it comes to reviewing Now, act one. I like that we get to see a bit of Lucius Fox, I quite like his character so that was cool. The conversation that Chloe and Oliver had over the phone made me smile, it was cute and quite funny and it's what I love about them being a couple. While I did like the Huntress scenes in the first act the use of the word 'retract' during her fight really bugged me. Retract, by definition, means to draw or pull (something) back or back in but you were using it in the context of her taking something out or revealing something. It's no biggie but I thought I'd point it out to you that sometimes the words you use aren't the right words for the context they're being used in or their meaning is different than what you thought it is. Act two. Don't care much for Emil, like I said he's a bit of a 'bleh' character for me but Chloe coming in to save the day is always pretty cool, though I kind of have to wonder how she managed to get into a prison which is in the process of locking down even with all her Watchtower awesomeness.... Helena and Olivers scene, pretty much perfect. The start of it I absolutely loved. I could pretty much see it playing out in my head and it was awesome "If at first you don't succeed try something else, I guess..." Brilliant, I actually laughed out loud at that line. Chloe describing the death of Jimmy didn't quite hit the right emotional chords for me, well, the first bit anyway felt a little forced (Three years ago, my husband was killed. He fell to my arms and I watched him breathe his last breath. His eyes staring back up at mine with the life slowly draining out of them.). The second bit though (That sort of image doesn’t leave you. That feeling doesn’t leave you. But I didn’t put on a mask and start murdering people!) I thought was really great. Oh, and Perry hiding behind the door, totally guessed he was going to find out about Watchtower by hearing something he wasn't supposed too XD Act three. Ah, Helena you silly girl, you shouldn't be running into things all mad and not thinking Oh! Plot twist! I was wondering if it was the same Black Mask as before, glad that got explained to us as I was really starting to wonder about that. Haha! Roman calls her a silly girl too! I hadn't read that far when I wrote 'silly girl' earlier so I chuckled a bit at that XD These are some pretty interesting scenes for Helena, I'm enjoying them a lot. Act four. Back to where we started! I wonder now if Oliver will swoop in (hero's always seem to swop in don't they? I'd love to see one 'saunter casually' into a scene one day ) to save the day or if Helena will be able to get out of this herself. Kinda think it's odd that Oliver would be using a gun instead of his arrows. I can see why you did it for dramatic purposes but I still found it a little weird. Is it bad that I'm glad Emil's suffering? Awesome action scenes here, totally feeling the tension and excitement. The bomb in his neck though? Possibly a little far fetched but it works. Love Oliver's disappearing hero act at the hospital, made me laugh. God damn it Emil! Why do you have to be such an ass and kill everyone all the time? Don't know if that death scene was supposed to make a real impact because it didn't for me. Went a bit to fast in my opinion but still okay. Act five. Knew you wouldn't publish it Perry, not that kind of guy. I liked that scene between Chloe and Perry, really father/daughter like. Perry's not so subtle hints were kinda funny too. Great scene at the end there with Oliver watching the recoding and Chloe standing in the background. Fantastically written, i loved that scene so much Great episode overall Jack, I'm going to give it an 8.5/10. I really enjoyed it and can't wait for the next episode, as usual
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Post by MJ on Oct 19, 2010 7:29:08 GMT -6
My gosh I write long reviews. I don't mean for them to be so long I swear XD
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Post by gamila on Oct 19, 2010 7:30:50 GMT -6
Oh God i have this stupid smile on my face... ;D what I'll pay to have the last scene played on smallville ;D it was just beautifull... I'll give Vendetta 9 first of all i loved all chlollie scenes...from the first one on the phone, about cartoons (we just discovered a nice side of Oliver ;D), till the last one, about the footage of Chloe...really intensive and romantic what a nice surprise about Perry's discovering the truth..very good idea, i never imagine he was about to discover Chloe's secrets...nice twist Oliver and Helena...till now i don't understand why oliver took so much time to help Helena...what he was doing during the helena and black mask fight??? and why he wasn't side by side with Chloe while helping Emil to escape from Zoe??? Emil...he knows he will never turn to good side again..i guess Chloe need someone else sacrifice to understand it??? i really enjoyed reading like always...
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Post by Jack Malone on Oct 19, 2010 14:39:52 GMT -6
Thanks for the reviews guys! Heading off to school now (sighs) but I'll reply to them once I get home
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Post by midnightquiver on Oct 19, 2010 14:50:08 GMT -6
Okay now i am full up to date on the return and wha'ts happened. i was just sitting there in awe when oliver was watching chloe talk to him when he was out of it. it was tacky but it was that cute kind of tacky. as long as feelings are known i'm not so sure it matters whether you look like an idiot or not.and it was good to see helena and oliver working together for a change. speaking of little miss helena something i would find neat is if AC came into town and those two kind of had a thing form. it would be quite interesting. ihm being the laid back kind where as she is the intense in the moment kind. the episodes lately have been really good. but i can't fully belive that emil is all goody good again. its just really hard to. it would be cool to see a new character join the team though. make it someone challenging. bring in some new blood. then again i guess its something i can hope for in season 2. maybe get a young one that's in college that was born with an ability. but i have an idea all my own about a character so you don't have to pay attention to this part. lol i tend to ramble. but back to what i was saying. keep up the good work because this rocks:)
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Post by Jack Malone on Oct 20, 2010 5:47:28 GMT -6
So, after a bit of a wait (which I totally understand as I am trying to write Edge of Vision with Uni exams coming up myself :/ ) I finally get to read and review 'Vendetta', Watchtower's tenth episode. Thanks! I love the people on here! Thanks for understanding. The first week back at school was so overwhelming. We've got exams coming up in a couple weeks and they're packing all this homework on us - plus our schools were all given laptops for each individual student, and we're transferring a lot of our previous work onto that, while starting new topics! (sighs) Its really, really annoying this term. Thanks - I'm going to have a previously on for the remaining episodes. It just sort of helps me get straight back into the show without having to find inspiration and start writing, I just look at the storyline coming up, and find snippets to lead into that. It was fun, new, you know lol. Thanks, I had so much fun writing that scene. I was hoping you'd all enjoy it. And really? I'll have to see what I wrote, and how I used it. I know the meaning of the word and usually use it for retracting a weapon, or something like that -- have to see. Sorry if it sounded "off" and not in place though if it was Haha! Just like Smallville, a lot more interesting stuff happens in OffScreensville - this was one of those off screen things. Chloe breaking into the jail. In other words, there was really no way I could make it work and make sense at the same time... No, really, I just think that I could have had a scene with her doing her "thing" to get into the prison, but some things are better left for the imagination. Haha. Thank you Hahaha. Completely understand. When writing it, I wasn't trying to force the reference in to Jimmy, but I was remembering the imagery of "Deadshot" (this episode was very much a sequel to it), and remembered how I planned this scene where Zoe was talking about it, and I thought, wait a minute... this is similar to Jimmy's death and how Chloe cradled him to his last dying breath. As for the way it came out, I see what you mean. I'm glad you liked the second part of it though Definately going to work on trying to get the reference across without making it seemed forced, so to speak. Thanks Haha. Damn! That was meant to be unpredictable. LOL Glad you liked it! Since I finished writing the pilot for the show, and planned out the season, I realised that I couldn't find a way to keep Perry on the show for more than one season. Originally, I had him leave mid-season off to Metropolis, and start running the Daily Planet. But immediately, when I started getting feedback on what he brought to the show, and stuff like that, I really wanted to keep him on 'Watchtower'. That's when I overlooked the season, and went, well how about I give him some fun stuff in the second half (had already written the first) - I went with him investigating Watchtower, figuring it out, and then, towards the end, he'll get involved with the Fate Helmet (whisper: which will hopefully play a big part for his character in season two *fingers crossed*). So I'm really happy about keeping him around and I think, as a character, he brings a lot to the table Hahaha. Thats so funny because when I was like "Black Mask is coming back!" I was like ... didn't he get shot in the face? But it wasn't really said where he got shot, but I was already planning the "shot in the face" aspect. If I could go back and change it, I might have made it something with his chest, but I loved writing the imagery of what he looked like now -- really scary. Hahaha. Now that you've mentioned it, I definately have to have one of the heroes just casually walk in and save the day. Thats brilliant! About the gun/arrow -- it was for dramatic effect. I sort of got to that part where I had to tie it all back, and was like "Oh crap". I think for dramatic effect, it works, but in the "does it make sense" aspect, I should lose some points. Haha By this point if you don't hate him, then I'm going to have to make him kill the main character. No, seriously though, he is meant to be hated, he's meant to be the character you hate, even if its not a "love to hate" thing, he's in that position. That's not to say I don't love writing him, but Emil was introduced as THE villain of this season. And he's the character that, no matter what he tries to do, he can't escape that fate. What I wanted to do with him this half of the season was see if he could, see if there was a way out for him. He stopped the projects, yes? But was that enough? No. There's a killer in him now that he can't put to rest - and I think, Emil more than anyone, knows that he's beyond redemption. He's at the mindset now of: He can either embrace it, or die trying to repent for his sins, so to speak. Sorry, I'm sort of in a weird mode as this season comes to a close. I'm at that stage where I'm planning for next season, and I'm looking back and reflecting at the characters and just getting that "Awwww" feeling about them. LOL Hahaha. The best: "possibly a little far fetched... but hey, it works!" haha. Definately what I was thinking when I wrote it. First, I'm like: "it can't be in Watchtower, cause I can't blow that up." Then I'm all: "it should be in Emil!" The hard part was trying to think where, and how... Glad it still worked though Hehe, the disappearing act comes with the costume. No, the impact wasn't meant to be big or anything. It was more of getting the reaction of what you just wrote of hating Emil for killing people. He let Chloe down. Again. This time, Emil didn't even think about it, he didn't even have a reason. He wasn't trying to save Chloe, he wasn't trying to protect anyone, this was about him getting rid of the problem, and that problem was Zoe. Thanks! I will say that Chloe won't know Perry knows about Watchtower this season. There's too little time to just blurt it out, and I want to have fun with this (especially if I get to do what I want with the Perry/Chloe/Selina thing at Gotham Daily in season two). When I had him have that article on his computer, I was literally thinking to myself no, he wouldn't even try writing it, but thought about how much he takes his job seriously, and how objective he is. And yeah, I think him sacrificing that story shows that he does see Chloe as a daughter, as someone he cares so much about - he wants to protect her. Thank you! This second half has been lacking a lot of Chlollie, and I'm glad these scenes, and their relationship is still being followed and enjoyed! Thanks MJ! I loved this review! Really enjoy talking to you about the episodes, and love hearing what you have to say. Just so you know, you're very helpful, and I'm happy I have some feedback that helps me know what works and what doesn't. So thannkkkk yoooouu!
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Post by Jack Malone on Oct 20, 2010 5:55:19 GMT -6
Oh God i have this stupid smile on my face... ;D what I'll pay to have the last scene played on smallville ;D it was just beautifull... Hahaha. Chlollie FTW Thank you! Wow, now I'm smiling too haha. Thanks for that! XD Yes! Even though that final scene was amazing to write, I have more fun when it comes to the "cute" Chlollie moments. Just like convesations, flirting, etc. Hehe! That's great! I'm glad I surprised you Thanks! XD He would be trying to go through the old factory, and get to where Helena was. There were a lot of guards and yeah, I could have cut back to a point where he'd be fighting some more, but too much was going on already. But that's my explanation haha Helena ziplined away, and got into the vents. Thats a good question. In the planning process, he was going to go from the hospital where he delivered Helena, to where Chloe was and help her out, but I decided against it at the very last minute. It could have worked, but, the episode needed to resolve, and end both plots, the Helena/Black Mask plot, and the Chloe/Deadshot one. I didn't want them crossing and became blended into each other, as much as a lot of sub-plots do on this show. Its really disappointing, isn't it. The cool thing is, this episode was very much the "sequel" to Deadshot. In Deadshot, at the end of the episode, Chloe realised Emil couldn't be saved. And in Vendetta, she realised the same thing. In between there, she went from "couldn't be saved" to "maybe he's changed", back to where she started. And now... as we know the finale is on its way, the war is really coming, and it can't be prolonged any longer. Thanks! I loved your review too this week Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for giving me an EPIC rating! So happy you enjoyed it
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