Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Jul 30, 2012 18:06:48 GMT -6
Thanks, Chris! I am having a bad day today and I really need some good news. As I said in the chat my hard drive crashed after having my computer for just a week. I lost all my files and I'm really upset. Everything for the mid-season finale is GONE and the new computer won't ship out until the 3rd of August. This means the next episode will have to be postponed. Right now I am on my sister's lap top, but I can't be on it all the time.
I cried when I found out my computer was ruined XD...and then when I was at the store getting a refund my sister pointed out to me that I split the back of my pants open and I had been walking around like that. Which just made me cry again.
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Post by Jamison on Jul 30, 2012 19:11:27 GMT -6
Awww, Kerry. I am soo sorry to hear that. The same thing has happened to me, more than a few times, so I know exactly how you feel. Damn. I have to force myself to make sure I back everything up on an external hard drive. It took me a few computer crashes for it to stick with me, but hopeful you can make these adjustments, and rewrite anything that you need to rewrite.
Again, sorry that it happened, but best wishes, Kerry.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Jul 31, 2012 10:24:39 GMT -6
We bought an external hard drive yesterday so it won't be happening again. I'm really sad because the mid-season finale was kinda complicated an I am not looking forward to re-writing it. I'm hoping I can do it all again. Even though I lost everything I am going to post the video trailer for the next episode just because I have been waiting to do it.
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Post by Brady Brown on Aug 3, 2012 18:26:14 GMT -6
Review: 1.03 "Who-Dunnit?"Sorry to point out something iffy within the first paragraph. XD But... KATRINA (CONT’D) We’re also gathered tonight in honor of Monsieur Pascal Dupont, our friend and guest from France. (she raises the glass of champagne she has in her hand) To Monsieur Dupont! The parenthetical could've been used as description. I know it's something very small and technical, but it sorta irked me, and took away from the flow of the script. Aaannnyywaaays, the murder was very well done, along with the Teaser all together. There were so many characters involved, but I didn't have to stop, go back, and re-read anything, minus what I mentioned above. John and Rose's intros to the episodes were pretty good, but could've been better. But still really good. Act 1 was pretty good as well. I enjoy Erich's enthusiasm with wanting to help Rose and John. The 'Study' scene with the three of them made the Act for me. It was really enjoyable. But I'm confused as to why Rose and John held hands, considering they told Katrina that they were brother and sister. Act 2 was good as well. Unraveling some more clues and things like that. XD Bunch of people hidin' some secrets. Not really much to say on that. Just gonna say something I was iffy about before I forget: the Professor's death was predictable with you telling us the scream comes from the direction he went. And with this being a "mystery" episode, I would've liked to be guessing a lot more. But other than that Act 3 was cool. Ingrid revealing why she's all jump and stuff was a nice twist, which is always great in an episode like this. XD Dun, dun, duuun. XD All these secrets being revealed in the last Act. Totally had some did-not-see-that-coming moments, which really make up for what I mentioned above. And I'm not too keen on Rose just giving Erich a cellphone, and not even explaining how to use it. I mean, sure he might figure it out, but they've never seen anything like that before That make sense...? XD So, all in all, it was a pretty good episode. Not as good as the first two, but certainly not bad. EDIT: Totally forgot to mention, but I wasn't the biggest fan of the whole "Scooby Doo" scene at the end. You know, where everyone kinda spills their guts, while one person tells why everyone is innocent/guilty. It just seemed very cliche to me. Sorry again, just forgot to mention it. XD 8/10 -- good episode with flaws the ultimately brought it down.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 3, 2012 18:42:53 GMT -6
Thanks so much for the review Brady! I have been dying without a review and even though you had a lot of comments I'm still glad. I see your point with the description there. I'm sorry it bothered you, but it really could have gone either way...it is a bit long for the parenthesis though. I'm glad you liked the teaser I was rather proud of it.
Glad you enjoyed Act 1, but before I comment on the other stuff Rose and John held hands because they are adorable and they always do. That is all XD. The scene in the study at the end of this Act was one of my favorite scenes. I can perfectly picture the exchange in my head so I am glad you liked it.
Sorry I ruined some of the shock for you about the Professor dying, but I am fairly certain the ending shocks are enough to make up for it.
I must point out that you are wrong about Rose not explaining the cell phone. On page 57 is says :
"ROSE nods, and the camera slowly ZOOMS OUT on them as she begins to show him how to work the phone."
Yeah you don't actually see it all, but she does it. As for her giving him the phone I thought the bond they made during the episode was enough to warrant it. Rose was comforting and protective of him through the whole thing and want to be there should he need it again.
Thanks again for reviewing!
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Post by Brady Brown on Aug 3, 2012 18:54:38 GMT -6
Oh, sorry! XD Totally didn't even notice that about the cellphone. My bad. HAHAHA.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 3, 2012 18:55:43 GMT -6
XD It is perfectly fine. I just KNEW I wrote it in because I was about to send it in when I re-read that scene and I went "I hate this" and re-wrote it right before sending.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Sept 1, 2012 11:42:28 GMT -6
I want everyone to know I am still working on this! I know things have been quiet recently, but that is because school just kick-started and I have to get acclimated. Expect more soon.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Sept 3, 2012 16:08:19 GMT -6
VOTING TIME I set up a vote for a villain in this season. No, it won't ruin anything knowing which one it will be, I have plenty of tricks up my sleeve for the finale. Please vote so that the writing and planning process can continue!
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Sept 3, 2012 21:19:06 GMT -6
Also I came across this today
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Sept 17, 2012 11:26:05 GMT -6
So far the Daleks and the Weeping Angels are tied for the vote in who will be a villain! Come on and choose your favorite and have it appear in season one of Bad Wolf.
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Post by David on Sept 24, 2012 18:21:07 GMT -6
Kerry I originally voted.for the daleks but I just watched the weeping angels episode ans I changed my vote!
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Sept 24, 2012 18:23:36 GMT -6
I just saw some pics and now I'm terrified to write one with weeping angels...but if I must then I shall XD.
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Post by David on Sept 24, 2012 18:35:23 GMT -6
SORRY!!!
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Post by David on Sept 24, 2012 18:40:56 GMT -6
The end where you see the montage with all the statues freaked me out!
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Post by David on Oct 1, 2012 8:38:00 GMT -6
After watching the season five episode with the weeping angel, Kerry, I'm sorry you have to write for them
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Oct 1, 2012 11:43:07 GMT -6
XD It's no trouble! They'll be in the show but there is stuff that will also be going on to make it awesome I think
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Post by David on Oct 26, 2012 6:00:08 GMT -6
Also I came across this today The first name on that list is the first companion of the ninth doctor and tenth, and the second on that list is the first companion of the first doctor.
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