Post by Brady Brown on Apr 17, 2015 11:31:11 GMT -6
First off, I really enjoyed Injustice: Gods Among Us, so I'm really intrigued by the idea; however, there needs to be more description, especially for the characters. We don't really get anything about them - will they be closely related to their comic book counterpart? Opposites? Also, there's nothing for their parallel super villain. Just something I think could improve the pitch.
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Post by peapotmaster on Apr 19, 2015 13:50:29 GMT -6
Better. This could work, but you could change some of the plots that aren't written by Ed Boon. Have you watched the justice League episode "A Better World," were the League became the Justice Lords? But that just my idea suggestion. It's up to you.
Post by Alex Matthews on Apr 22, 2015 15:18:52 GMT -6
Michael please go read the "How to Pitch" section, it will answer all your questions, and you might want to either remove or postpone the other movie pitches you've made until a decision has been made regarding it, or even though group them together as one large project of movie pitches.
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