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@katq wow thank you for you kind words. A lot of people prefer the idea of having them live separate lives but i feel my mind just cant handle it. I've try it so many ways and it doesn't seem to be working out. So the best thing is to settle them down in the town of Black Creek which i now have more of a reason for putting them there. I have plans to introduce other supernatural creatures such as vampires and witches but i'm not completely sure if they will make an appearance in season 1 (maybe witches but definitely not vampires). In season one my main focus is the battle between the hunters and the werewolves so when i do introduce these other supernatural characters it would more likely be in season 2. Thank you for your support .

@brady Haha its ok, it pretty far from done anyway. Thank you i'm really happy that people think that this pitch is that creative and interesting i didn't expect to get this sort of feedback since its my first pitch and I've never done anything like this before. I'm glad you like the characters, i have made all of them have very different personalities so they could bounce off of each other, and put them into all sorts of situations. They didn't choose to be together, the Alpha chose them so of course their not going to be alike. Thanks for taking a look at my pitch & leaving feedback it really means a lot. I hope to get the pilot started ASAP. I have most of the story lines for season 1 its just a case of putting them together and what episodes they should happen in. ;D

oh does it have to be living actors, sorry. I just think he was a great actor that could totally pull off this roll. RIP Andy

ok i'll choose someone else..



KEVIN MCKIDD. He's ginger and a pretty good actor.

"The Following" looks really good, i'll add it to my list. At the beginning i thought it looked awfully like the movie "Prom Night" but as the trailer progressed i can see that its not, and it looks so much better.

I'm in the same boat as you Jason. I love Teen Wolf even though most of the time it can be absolutely terrible. Its majorly cliche and cheesy but i cant wait to see the next episode each week. Stiles is definitely the best character of this show and to be honest he's probably one of the reason most people are still watching it. But season 2 looks awesome and it looks like they've upped their game. I'd like to see this show become a bit more darker and less cheesy. But i guess we'll see soon enough. Fingers crossed.

Revolution is the show i'm most excited to see this year! But i'm also looking forward to "Arrow", "666 Park Avenue", "1600 Pen", "Cult" and "Beauty and the Beast".

2012 seems to be a good year for TV.

if no ones gonna take the next one i will x]..

Amazing as usual. I'm in love with this VS! lol

So i finally got around to reading this pitch and the pilot and i gotta say, I'm hooked already!

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The structure of the script is great, its so easy to follow. I loved the way you told the story throughout and how you introduced the characters as they came into a scene. The werewolf attack scenes were written perfectly they definitely kept me on the edge of my seat. I would change anything about them.

I love all the characters. Elizabella and Milo have to be my favorites. I find Elizabella so evil and bad ass, she just seems to be the perfect bad guy. And as for Milo he's pretty mysterious and i really wanna know more about him, i mean what the hell did he do to those viscera's?! Gwen and Will are awesome you can tell there is tension between them as they seem to disagree a lot but you can still tell they love each other and they've got each others back's. I feel like i don't really know much about Sara. I feel like i got a taste of everyone's personality except her's, i don't know maybe that was just me. I like all the characters you have in this series which is weird because there is usually someone i don't like. I even like Abigail she seems fun! Jeremy however seems pretty boring but I've still to see more of him so who knows.

The only thing that i kinda felt wasn't right was how quickly the relationship between Will and Sara was moving. I mean they're the main couple of the story and it feels like they've already established a full relationship in one day. They hung out, they started to like each other, they almost kissed, then they had a falling out, and by the end of the episode all is well (kinda). I would have liked to see them grow more and their feelings grown through a few more episodes. Because reading the pilot i felt like their relationship was already formed.

But the whole plot seems so well structured and i really cant wait to see more. I am really intrigued with the whole Viscera mythology and who Elizabeth is and how she knows Will and Gwen. The ending was a bit of a shock it was a really nice twist because i wasn't expecting that coming.

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Even though i was really confused as to why you killed of Elizabeth in the first episode. But i'm so glad she's still alive.

I am so rooting for this to get picked up. I absolutely love it and will tuned in every week to read it! And with the pilot being this good i cant wait to see what else is going to happen throughout this series.

P.S. poor Alfred i actually really liked his character :( i hope he's OK. Because i'd like to see more of him! I think he's be a great character to have around especially to help Jeremy with his 'lady' problems. lol :)

Overall i would give this episode a 9/10