Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 9, 2012 23:47:10 GMT -6
Well trying to mess with Brady aside I shall make a list as well.
Trinity Cynthia and Hank Lana and Quentin
Edge of Vision Tori and Llyod Tori and Adam Cassie and Everyone
Audition Michael and Paula ( I wanted them too!) Alisha and Alex
Leaving off Outcasts until the Re-boot
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 9, 2012 23:35:12 GMT -6
Actually, I was just trying to playfully harass Brady, but he didn't understand what I was talking about.
You're right they could definitely be only friends or more than.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 9, 2012 19:23:37 GMT -6
Review 1x03 - "Acting 101"
Okay so I really liked how the episode started, I thought it was very nice and funny. Paula again being Paula was wonderful and I liked the interaction with everyone here. I also really like how Alex and Alisha handled themselves in the class. Good for Alex sticking up for her!
However, I did have one issue this time. I didn't like our evil pair in the class, especially Angela. I know they are supposed to be the stereo typical jerks and all but their dialogue was very...blatant and it seemed a little unrealistic. I think that could have used some fine-tuning.
Other than that it was good and I can't wait to see what else happens.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 9, 2012 18:54:52 GMT -6
I'm saying that OF COURSE you listed none romantic relationships because you listed John and Rose.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 9, 2012 18:50:13 GMT -6
Obviously it has to be friendships too because Rose and John are never getting together. Sorry to burst anyone's bubble.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 8, 2012 20:15:28 GMT -6
Good to hear!
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 8, 2012 10:56:30 GMT -6
I have finished the Teaser to episode 1x06 "Game World" and I am thinking of releasing it to be read after my editor takes a crack at it. Mainly because it has taken awhile for me to get it up due to re-writes and computer failure.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 7, 2012 17:53:15 GMT -6
Uhm...Just one, unless you want to retract the one you have and send in a new one.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 7, 2012 16:12:49 GMT -6
XD true 'nuff
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 7, 2012 15:11:30 GMT -6
I'm submitting my own too, just for fun. For the Outcasts Reine Breaux The sexy Cajun girl from New Orleans, Reine (aka Gambit) is on the run from both her family and her ex. The card shark settled down in New York city hiring herself out as a an expert thief. He most recent job? Breaking into the Xavier Mansion to retrieve information. With this wild card in the mix, somebody's luck is going to change.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 7, 2012 14:57:38 GMT -6
Same as Brady XD I was always an advocate of him putting on the clown make up and being the Joker because he looked sooo much like Heath. I actually think I won a round of this game last year suggesting him to be the Joker....hm...But being the new Batsy is good too.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 7, 2012 14:41:14 GMT -6
I 100% agree with Krysla! I always thought this too.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 7, 2012 9:45:56 GMT -6
Truth there is she probably hadn't gone to bed yet. XD She sleeps all day.
PS: Lets not even go into what her REAL name is muahahaha. That its right Aims....I went there.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 6, 2012 20:00:34 GMT -6
This is one of my favorite shows! It reminds me so much of "Catch Me if You Can" but it is able to have fresh stories and really real characters that you see week to week instead of just one movie. Neal and Peter are a great team and I love all their side characters too!
Not to mention Matt Bomer is AMAZING, a Texan, and sexy, with a great singing voice. I love watching that man every week XD.
Anyone THINKING of watching it SHOULD.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 5, 2012 19:23:09 GMT -6
I have to say re-writing something sucks...A LOT and I am having a hard time finding the desire to do so.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 4, 2012 17:56:57 GMT -6
This could be really interesting with some re-working, In my opinion. The main thing I don't like is you have basically stolen characters from other people's stuff and re-named them. You even used the exact actors that played them. Make these characters unique since this will be a unique story.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 3, 2012 18:55:43 GMT -6
XD It is perfectly fine. I just KNEW I wrote it in because I was about to send it in when I re-read that scene and I went "I hate this" and re-wrote it right before sending.
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Ms. Kerry
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Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Aug 3, 2012 18:42:53 GMT -6
Thanks so much for the review Brady! I have been dying without a review and even though you had a lot of comments I'm still glad. I see your point with the description there. I'm sorry it bothered you, but it really could have gone either way...it is a bit long for the parenthesis though. I'm glad you liked the teaser I was rather proud of it.
Glad you enjoyed Act 1, but before I comment on the other stuff Rose and John held hands because they are adorable and they always do. That is all XD. The scene in the study at the end of this Act was one of my favorite scenes. I can perfectly picture the exchange in my head so I am glad you liked it.
Sorry I ruined some of the shock for you about the Professor dying, but I am fairly certain the ending shocks are enough to make up for it.
I must point out that you are wrong about Rose not explaining the cell phone. On page 57 is says :
"ROSE nods, and the camera slowly ZOOMS OUT on them as she begins to show him how to work the phone."
Yeah you don't actually see it all, but she does it. As for her giving him the phone I thought the bond they made during the episode was enough to warrant it. Rose was comforting and protective of him through the whole thing and want to be there should he need it again.
Thanks again for reviewing!
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