Post by Chris Davis on Jun 7, 2010 15:36:04 GMT -6
I'm surprised at this because it's more original than I thought it would be. A story about a werewolf and a hunter...sort of new, but there's something missing. I think what this plot needs is an extra concept, which I think it what you attempted to do with stating how they would be going through college by day, fighting demons by night. Which is good but I'd like to see how deeper you can go. Maybe it would work better as more than just a Supernatural series. That being said, I'll wait for you to add more about the plot, characters and episodes before I say anything more. But nice start.
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