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Post by Antwan Eley on Apr 8, 2017 20:28:47 GMT -6
Okay sorry you feel that way. I can pitch it elsewhere or do a fanfiction.
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Post by Antwan Eley on Apr 8, 2017 9:33:57 GMT -6
Synopsis
(Mystic Falls. A town that has found itself in the foothold of the supernatural since way before it even became Mystic Falls. And for years now the town has fallen into a sense of peace with the reformation of the Founder' Council and the birth of the Salvatore School for the Gifted. Though now as the death of the beloved headmaster triggers a series of events and the return of Bonnie Bennett (Kat Graham) ensures that something very bad is coming. The old gang finds that they may haven't escaped from their old lives as they once thought and now they have even more at risk...their children.)
CAST & CHARACTERS
Antoine Bennet-Gorcon (Portrayed by Tom Williamson)
The primary protagonist of the story and the youngest son of Bonnie Bennet and Gervais Gorcon. At fifteen years old and a lot like his mother, Antoine is kind and a happy young man who believes in helping those around him. Wanting to be just as much of the warlock as his parents, Antoine has a habit of taking the world on his shoulders. Empathic and senstivie to the pain of others, Antoine has an natural affinity to empathy and has struggled with it for the majority of his life choosing to keep those around him at a distance and as he grew older he learned to just build up a wall to block himself from the trauma and pain of those around him. And now that his family is packing up and leaving Paris behind to relocate to the small town of Mystic Falls...Antoine finds himself faced with the greatest challenge of all...life.
Josette "Josie" Saltzman (Chloe Bennett)
The eldest of the Saltzman twins and the most responsible of the two, Josie is a young woman who always wanted a normal life for herself. Not wanting the unnatural life that came with her family and magic, she just wanted to leave a normal teenage life. And when she turned eighteen she finally got her chance to leave it all behind. Attending Whitmore and hoping to change the world in her own way through medicine...Josie left and never looked back. And now three years later she finds herself returning after the shocking death of her father...to find herself pulled into a fight she doesn't want to be in but unable to just turn her back on those she cares for.
Elizabeth 'Lizzie" Saltzman (Portrayed by Jennifer Lawerence)
Rebellious, careless and spontaneous with a habit of being a self proclaimed screw up. Lizzie is a firecracker who always has been drawn to the more edgier side of life then her sister. With a love of magic and a hunger for more then she have, she always has had a close reign on her thanks to her dad who didn't want her to follow in her uncle's footsteps. And now that her dad is dead and his murderer still being out there she finds herself filled with a vegeance and hatred that she can't control. Her whole world has been turned upside down and with the return of her sister she isn't about to let the 'good one' just take over after her father when she just up and abandoned them. Though is the whole leadership role really her thing?
Torrey "TJ" Salvatore (Portrayed by Dylan O'brien)
The eldest of Damon and Elena Salvatore's children and a handful to say the least. Vocal and tough. A young man who sees himself as the protector of those around him and with a desire to join Salvatore Boarding School for Gifted Youngsters task force. A bit crazy and more headstrong then he should be the soon to be eighteen year old doesn't like to be controlled and with a temper that could match his bite. Only those closest to him knows the real TJ and knows he really is one of the most caring guys out there. And when the ones he loves lives suddenly become threatend by the forces around him he finally feels as if he is coming into the destiny he always felt he belonged in.
Kate Lynn Salvatore (Portrayed by Britt Robertson)
]The younger sister of Torrey and a tomboy at heart, Kate is a spitfire and a lot like her mother minus her compassionate nature. She always has felt as if she didn't fit into the picture perfect Mystic Falls, far from being a Miss Mystic Falls. Kate doesn't mind standing out and actually prefers being her whole person. Finding a kindred soul with Antoine, she quickly becomes fast friends with the teenager. And as a darkness forms within Mystic Falls...and old Petrova curse finds it way and she finds herself pulled into danger as forces threaten to destroy or claim her.
Annalise Donovan (Portrayed by Katherine McNamara)
]The only child of Matt Donovan and April Fell-Donovan, Anna is a the headcheerleader and one of the most popular seventeen year olds in Mystic Falls. She loves attention and loves guys even more, the Caroline of the next generation. She is quite manipulative and have to her things her way or no way at all. And being a Fell and the daughter of the Sheriff she isn't above using her status to get the things that she wants. And Torrey Gilbert is one of the very object of her obsessions and has been for a while now. And with the lives of the townpeople in danger yet again...this ice queen is gonna be in for a rude awakening as her perfect little world start to go to hell.
Jamal Gilbert (Portrayed by Michael B Jordon)
]The son of Lisa Beth and step son of Jeremy Gilbert, Jamal is a asshole...pretty simply pu and is your typical jock. Best friends with Torrey and one of the strongest fighters of his class training to become a hunter and one day the leader of the Supernatural task force. With a friendly rivalry with TJ and a sexual relationship with Lizzie. He doesn't really care for the whole legacy that comes with being a Gilbert...he doesn't want a life in the reformed Council and just wants to kick vampire ass and protect the world...he sees a life outside of Mystic Falls. And hasn't really told anyone he isn't planning to stay upon graduating.
EPISODES
1.01 "Pilot" | In the series premiere, Mystic Falls is rocked with the gruesome murder of Alaric Saltzman and the tragedy once returns too the sleepy little town. Bonnie Bennett (Kat Graham) returns to Mystic Falls after haunting nightmares drawns her home and old enemies surfaces threatening the lives of the townspeople. Meanwhile, the Saltzman twins deal with the death of their father and the growing hostility that formed once Josie left Mystic Falls behind.
1.02 "It's A Mad World" | With the town still reeling over the aftermath of the events of the last episode, Caroline and Elena hosts an end of summer block party for the town in hopes of restoring some peace and happiness. Antoine meets a mysterious new stranger named Eric who he immediately feels drawn and Bonnie with the help of Lizzie sets out to find answers to what is coming. Meanwhile Cj learns a secret about himself and spirals down a dark path seeking him to gain the help of Antoine.
1.03 "The Lazarus Effect " | With the shocking return of Stefan Salvatore, Antoine becomes suspicious that the man may be hiding something and it's a feeling that he can't shake. Josie questions if she should stay in Mystic Falls or leave when things escalates between her and Lizzie. Kaitlyn goes missing and it's a race against time to find her before it's too late.
1.04 "Truth or Dare" | With the town's annual Founder's Party upon them, the gang tries to embrace a bit of normalcy after the current events of their lives. Kaitlyn confides in Antoine about the events of what she have learned and an old enemy returns just in time to crash the party. Meanwhile, Anna forms a plan to finally get TJ but finds herself pulled into danger forcing the other male to reveal his secret to her. The twins tries to put their past behind them and move on.
1.05 "Choices" | Antoine learns a shocking secret regarding Elena and Stefan that could change the course of their lives forcing him to confide in Eric. Anna finds sick to a mysterious illness and TJ makes a deal with the devil to save her. Kaitlyn finally begins to understand her power and what she is. Meanwhile, the Founder's Council finds themselves targeted by an old powerful enemy.
1.06 "How Did We Get Here Pt.1" | In the mid season finale all bets are off as the brewing war has begun and the twins steps up to reign in control of the Salvatore Boarding School as the Founder's Council goes missing. Antoine learns the shocking secret of Eric is forced to make a decision. Lines are drawn and the lives of Mystic Falls are changed forever. Meanwhile Kaitlyn embrace her power and takes a stand.
1.07 "How Did We Get Here Pt2" | Lizzie leads the charge against the threat threatening to tear their town apart. Antoine and Eric goes on the run hoping to escape their destiny. Cj, Anna and Jamar finds the Founder's Council and learns that one have met their end. Caroline works to keep the pieces of the Council together and Josie fears that Lizzie has made the wrong mistake in her quest to gain power to protect them all. Meanwhile, Kaitlin gains help from an unlikely face from the past.
1.08 "Title of Episode" | Description of episode goes here.
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1.10 "Title of Episode" | Description of episode goes here.
1.11 "Title of Episode" | Description of episode goes here.
1.12 "Title of Episode" | Description of episode goes here.
CREATORS NOTES
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Post by Antwan Eley on Apr 13, 2016 18:17:32 GMT -6
Just finished reading the pilot and it really was a good solid episode. It was a nice reminder of how much I enjoyed Smallville in the good old days and really I can see myself getting into this series as if it was really on television. Have to say that I love Wally already and quite interested in seeing how he will develop in this series and if he becomes The Flash. I really like the partnership between Maggie and Danny. And I always have been interested in Whisper in the comics so can't wait to see her and Intergang work as a villain. This really felt like an episode of CSI only dealing with the supernatural and i really like the vibe. And the nudge to the Isis Foundation and meteor freaks. So can't wait to read more of this season. Really good episode.
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Post by Antwan Eley on Apr 13, 2016 14:10:17 GMT -6
Omg i just finished reading the Lazarus and man...best virtual episode I have honestly read ever. Exciting and kept me reading for more. I have been long since wanting the time to get into and read this whole series but decided to jump in at this point and get caught up on the earlier episodes later and man i am glad i did. INCREDIBLE and well written. I knew Chloe had to come back so it was nice to see just how far Bruce would go for her and I am totally curious just as Lois to know what happened with her and Oliver since i honestly don't know as i haven't seen their break up yet and wow Chloe have a child. I am curious to know if Bruce is in her with her or if Selina is the woman who he told Talia he was taken by.
I really like Helena and Lisa and seeing her with a woman was surprising but it seemed kinda fitting. And I have to say that you have done well with making Bruce a character as no other media really have gotten to the man behind the mask. I'm not familiar with Vicki Vale but she is a character i totally wanna get into and seem a little like Laurel from Arrow which is good since i love Laurel and all. And yay Barbara. So hope to see more of her and man you scared me and I believed that Selina was dead but found out she wasn't at the end. So interested in seeing that story. And LOIS so hope she makes another appearance as I love seeing her without Clark and in her own thing rocking it. And Perry! I hope he isn't dead and seeing him kinda with his Watchtower on was cool. No idea who Holly is but i'm interested in the Hush storyline and seeing that develop and man! I definitely have to binge read this season and get caught up!
I feel like i missed something BUT overall man this is a great premiere to what looks like an exciting season.
OH Talia in Chloe and omg just seeing Chloe's progression this season will be so fun to read. And seeing if Oliver will return or hell where he is and where is the baby and omg. I have to get caught up. And i can't say omg anymore or i will go crazy.
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Post by Antwan Eley on Mar 18, 2016 20:36:33 GMT -6
Hey guys i haven't forgotten about this pitch and plan to get it all finish and a pilot up by summer. So sorry for the long delay.
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Post by Antwan Eley on Nov 8, 2015 15:14:47 GMT -6
Yeah i am pretty passionate about them both and have ideas for both of them but hmm City of Tomorrow is my baby and i have to get it up! Or it will keep nagging me haha. You should check out the revised pitch! it's much better and working on te pilot now or trying too if family would leave me be ha.
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Post by Antwan Eley on Nov 8, 2015 13:57:01 GMT -6
 Synopsis(Metropolis. The city of Tomorrow. A city where dreams come true. Where glamour and riches rule and the poor and weak lose. A city without a savior. Without a beacon of hope...that is until now. Ruled by various crime families and shrouded in corruption behind all the pretty lights and bliss. Beneath it the glowing radiance which is the heartfelt fast moving city lays an undertone of death, mayhem, sex and lost souls. A place named by the very substance which it is made up...Suicide Slums. A place no man wants to travel...yet no soul can escape. Until now it was a city without promise, a city that swallows you from the inside...until Clark Kent..our savior...our last hope makes his mark...yet is the world ready for a Superman?)CAST & CHARACTERS Clark Kent (Portrayed by Nicholas Hoult)A loner, an outcast and a young man who constantly searched for a place to belong, a reason for why he is here on Earth and to just fit in. Having wondered around the world in search of answers, Clark finds himself drawn to Metropolis after his family's farm is raided and the ship which brought him to Earth is taken by an organization known as A.R.G.U.S.  Alexander "Lex" Luthor (Portrayed by Evan Peters)One of the brightest scientific minds of tomorrow and brilliant twenty six year old who grew up in the suicide slums. Lex Luthor is no stranger to hard work and all his life has been bullied and tormented by his peers. A man with very little faith in humanity and believes only in himself and science. Having escaped the slums gaining scholarship after scholarship and a bachelors by sixteen. Lex lives for the future and never looked back once leaving behind his former life. One of the top notch scientists of Langtech, Lex cares very little about much except his ailing mother and teenage sister... Lana Lang (Portrayed by Aimee Teegarden)The small town girl with a big heart and an even bigger dream to make a name for herself. Twenty three years old, Lana is a young woman who just wants to find her own way in life. A girl who wants to be seen as more then just Thomas Lang's daughter. Having lived most of her life in Smallville, Lana finds herself relocating to Metropolis with boyfriend Pete Ross...a move she doesn't think she is exactly ready for especially with sharing a city with a father she can't stand and a legacy she wants no part of it. Felix Lang (Portrayed by Dylan O'brien)Younger brother of Lana Lang and the child prodigy of Thomas Lang, having lived with his father since the death of their mother five years ago. Shy and withdrawn from the world, Whitney always has felt as if he was meant for more in the world but always had been to afraid to embrace who he really is...inside. With his sister moving to Metropolis, he wants nothing more then to make his family an actual family...but with being groomed by his father...other plans may be set in stone for him then even Thomas can imagine. Lois Lane (Portrayed by Jessica Stroup)]The twenty five year old brash and tomboyish internet blogger known as Lois Lane, daughter of General Sam Lane and a young woman who believes the world has a right to know about the mysterious ongoings of Metropolis. Driven by a personal vendetta to expose the meta-community of the world after the death of her mother by the hands of a meta when she was six years old...Lois is dedicated, haunted and focused on her own agenda and won't let her views be swayed even when a superpowered Crusader surfaces within the city and she makes it her mission to unmask this vigilante. Peter "Pete" Ross (Portrayed by Michael B Jordan)]Formerly the best friend of Clark Kent before high school fame and popularity stole him away. Peter Ross is a selfish and brash jock who have found himself a new home with the Metropolis Sharks and yet is far from being the star athlete that he wants himself to be. The one thing he wants out of life is to be great and somebody and he finds that in sports until he falls in with the wrong crowd and a life which could threaten his career forever. Lena Luthor (Portrayed by Hayden Pannettiere)]The twenty year old younger sister of Lex Luthor, promiscuous and sensual who finds nothing more gripping then parties and the fast life. Quite the opposite of her brother, Lena have no desire to leave behind the Slums and finds it her own. Working as a stripper at Club Dessad, Lena is fiesty and passionate and does what she wants and takes whatever she wants out of life. Family means the world to her but at times she happens to put her own desires above everything else... EPISODES1.01 "Pilot" | Clark Kent finds himself returning home after an urgent call from his mother after the mysterious disappearance of the spaceship which brought him to Earth twenty three years ago. Meanwhile in Metropolis Langtech welcomes it newest scientist Lex Luthor just as Lana Lang makes her return to Metropolis City and Lex finds himself brought into a project that could make his career and change the world...in this series premiere allies are formed and enemies are created as the Crusader is born and a heroes legacy is created. CYTHNIA ADDAI-ROBINSON GUEST STARS AS AMANDA WALLER AKA MOCKINGBIRD. 1.02 "Leech" | Setting out to begin his life in Metropolis, Clark joins the ranks of Club Desaaid as a bouncer and learns that strippers are being targeted by a metahuman. Lex continues his work on the mysterious alien artifact from his past and enlist the help of Felix much to Lana's dislike of the idea of Felix getting pulled into it all. Meanwhile Pete tries to reconnect with Clark which doesn't exactly go as planned. NOEL FISHER GUEST STARS AS RUDOLPH JONES AKA LEECH. 1.03 "Brightest and Greatest" | When Thomas Lang (Julian McMahon) throws a charity event for the future scientists of tomorrow, Felix finds the spotlight thrown on him as the next brightest mind. Lena sets out to get Clark to have some fun but Clark learns that there is trouble at the charity event which Lana is attending with Pete. DANIELLE PANABAKER GRANT GUSTIN AS CAITLYN SNOW AND BARRY ALLEN. 1.04 "Quarantine" | Lois Lane arrives with a mission to find this mysterious Crusader that have surface within Metropolis just when a strange virus hits the city. Lex finds himself the first to fall ill to the virus and Felix learns that he seems to immunue to the illness. The city is placed under quarantine and Felix works against the clock to find a cure with unlikely help. Meanwhile Clark learns that his blood may be the cure to the virus but can he risk exposure to save millions? COLTON HAYNES GUEST STARS AS JASON HODD AKA RED ARROW. 1.05 "Choices" | After the aftermath of the virus, the city falls into a panic after learning that the virus was alien in nature after Lois leaks information on her blog. Detective Maggie Sawyer (Kristin Kreuk) forms a manhunt for the Crusader and Clark finds himself public enemy number one. Meanwhile Felix and Jason sets out to clear the Crusader's name forcing Lex to make a choice...his project or the Crusader's innocence. 1.06 "Last Son of Krypton" | Lex's choice bring disastrous consequences as he unlocks the secret of the mysterious alien artifact from his past creating a bridge between Earth and the Phantom Zone welcoming two kryptonian beings onto the planet. Clark comes face to face with his past and finds himself up against his greatest threat so far...but he isn't alone as The Justice League is formed to help protect their planet in this action packed mid season finale 1.07 "Title of Episode" | Description of episode goes here. 1.08 "Title of Episode" | Description of episode goes here. 1.09 "Title of Episode" | Description of episode goes here. 1.10 "Title of Episode" | Description of episode goes here. 1.11 "Title of Episode" | Description of episode goes here. 1.12 "Title of Episode" | Description of episode goes here. CREATORS NOTES |
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Post by Antwan Eley on Nov 8, 2015 10:43:03 GMT -6
Okay since this have gotten a lot more hype then my supernatural series i will focus on this and finally get it up. Thanks for all the feedback.
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Post by Antwan Eley on Nov 4, 2015 10:45:01 GMT -6
Thanks for the feedback and sorry for the long wait. Working at Walmart and with the holidays upon us it's like doomsday have arrived with Metallo and LEx Luthor in tow. But yeah i am gonna be revising this pitch and stripping it of the crossover stuff. Hopefully it'll come out stronger and better. *nods*
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Post by Antwan Eley on Aug 30, 2015 19:25:27 GMT -6
((Hey guys i know it been a while but work got pretty hectic and after much consideration i think I would be better off doing an paranormal series then The City of Tomorrow for right now anyway. This would be an 22 episode series and I plan to get at least te first chapter done first if this is picked up.  Working on the pilot now.)) The Supernatural Diaries
Premise
Life for Gunner Phillips (Dylan O'brien) had been pretty simple and ordinary for most of his life. The wallflower, shy and quiet and withdrawn from the world. And then he died...and through death he finally found life. Sucked into the world of the supernatural, Los Angeles had always been a becon for the supernatural. A paranormal hotspot that drew the attention of witches, vampires and werewolves and the like. And when an ancient curse that was born centuries ago due to a long forgotten unjustice an powerful force is rising in the city that could destroy the very city itself.
Main Characters
Michael B. Jordan as Gunner Phillips.
The main protagonist of the series and an eighteen year old who stop trusting the world a long time ago. Withdrawn and closed off, Gunner only wants to find his own standing in the world and finally be happy. And deciding to make a change in his life and attend college, he hopes to shred the pains of his past and start anew only to find his world turning upside down as he becomes a creature of the night...a vampire. Having once only wanted to escape the world he now finds himself forced to save the city...from itself and juggle the secret of being a vampire.
Britne Oldford as Lily Candace.
Outspoken, headstrong and brave with a bit of a rebellious streak. Lily always had been a bit of outcast who beat to her own drummer and a bit of a street smart wisecracker. Having grew up in various orphanages and having decided to make a life for herself and not let anyone hold her own. Intelligent and knowing it, Lily quickly befriends the less outgoing and quiet freshman and makes it her mission to teach the ways of being independent and outgoing.
Tyler Holechin as Paxton Jayden.
Popular, talkative and a college senior with his whole future ahead of him. Coming from a long line of hunters, Paxton only wants a life away from the hunt, a life without evil creatures that threaten the city. And that is why he is attending college to be a doctor and make his own impact on the world. The last thing he wants to be in the world is a hunter but as a Jayden and residing in Los Angeles...he may not be able to run away from his fact especially as he seems to be drawn to Gunner and finds himself pulled into his life despite fighting to get from under his own family.
Evan Peters as Blaze Anthony.
Womanizing and a big man whore who believes that everything should fall into his lap easily. Apart of the witch community of Los Angeles being the son of the witch Elder Krista Anthony, Blaze isn't above using his magic for his own purposes and is big into the black market. The best friend of Paxton and a easygoing guy entirely, the two could careless about the pressures of their families but both finds themselves unable to avoid the supernatural...not that Blaze wants too. And when the curse which haunts comes full swing, Blaze learns the shocking secret that his family has been hiding all these years...forcing him to pick a side which could turn the tides of the impeding war.
Milo Ventimiaglo as Leonard Abraham.
Private investigator of the Supernatural and a man in his early thirties who has long since felt connected to the supernatural ongoings within the city. Leo is tough and yet vulnerable and lives with a secret he is unable to escape from his past. Only wanting to help the city and learn the secrets which seem to haunt him, Leo takes it upon himself to protect the city and those who doesn't have the power to protect himself but when he learns he is a monster himself...he begins to doubt his whole purpose in life.
Erica Durance as Larissa Chloe.
Smart, independent and impulsive. One of the most top notch detectives for the Los Angeles PD and a woman who would need ten men to keep up with. And a woman who has made it her mission to expose the supernatural since the death of her husband. With a reputation of being the detective to go to for 'weird' cases. Ris is a woman who shouldn't be crossed and a woman who finds herself with dangerous enemies as she sets out to not only find her husband's killer but bring the supernatural into the forefront...even if it kills her.
Episodes.
Chapter 1: The Curse Chapter (Ep. 1-7)
1x01 - Pilot.
In the series premiere, an old enemy surfaces within Los Angeles of the Jayden family and brings up their painful past. Missing persons begins to surfaces around the city and Larissa sets out to find the perp before it's too late. Meanwhile Gunner starts his freshman year of college and meets Lily while finding himself pulled into the game of cat and mouse in the century long fued of the Jaydens the vampire which started it all.
1x02 - This is All For You.
Gunner tries to adjust to his new life as a vampire and begins to feel that he made the wrong choice. And when notorious bank robbers Joel and Marisol who happen to be apart of the supernatural world targets one of the biggest heists of their career which places Gunner's mom in danger, Larissa turns to Leonard for help. The beginnings Angeles Society forms within this episode.
1x03 - The Ties that Binds.
When it seems that Leonard is being framed for various murders around the city, Larissa learns of his shocking past and begins to suspect that he is not as normal as she thought. Gunner resumes his life in college with the help of Lily and grows closer with Paxton causing Blaze to make an unsettling discovery.
1x04- Human Nature.
Residents of the city begin to act unusual and the witches begin to suspect that something unnatural is at work and the university seems to be the epicenter. Blaze and Paxton sets out to discover what is going on exactly and Gunner begins to see just how dangerous he is now. Meanwhile Larissa keeps true to her promise to Leonard.
1x05 - Love The Way You Lie.
When Paxton goes missing, Gunner targets the witches as he suspects that they may be behind the disappearance forcing Blaze to make a choice which could change his life forever. Larissa grows closer to finding out what is really going on behind the darkness of the city and finds a target on her head.
1x06 - I Will Follow You Into The Dark.
The Angeles Society finds themselves up against a group of witches which is dedicated to resurrecting an powerful enemy. Blaze learn the secrets which his family has been hiding all along and learns that Paxton and Gunner are the cause. Paxton turns to his family for protection as things grows even more dangerous for him and makes a choice which could change his life with Gunner forever.
1x07 - Name
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Post by Antwan Eley on Apr 27, 2015 14:40:32 GMT -6
City of Tomorrow PLOTMetropolis. The city of Tomorrow. A city where dreams come true. Where glamour and riches rule and the poor and weak lose. A city without a savior. Without a beacon of hope...that is until now. Ruled by various crime families and shrouded in corruption behind all the pretty lights and bliss. Beneath it the glowing radiance which is the heartfelt fast moving city lays an undertone of death, mayhem, sex and lost souls. A place named by the very substance which it is made up...Suicide Slums. A place no man wants to travel...yet no soul can escape. Until now it was a city without promise, a city that swallows you from the inside...until a Clark Kent..our savior...our last hope makes his mark...yet is the world ready for a Superman? CAST & CHARACTERSClark Kent (Brett Dier)Sent into a world which could deny him yet raised by a family which loved him. Clark Kent is a young man, twenty one years old and really just starting his life. Having lived a solitary life in Smallville until now. With the death of his father and a promise to upon. He embarks on a mission to live his life, to do good...to find himself whatever that means. In all reality he is just a lost farm boy with incredible powers who suddenly finds himself on his own driven by his father's spirit and own inner values.Lana Lang (Nina Dobrev)Daughter of Thomas Lang and having left behind Smallville at the age of eighteen looking to follow her own dreams and to live after that tragic night of her senior prom. Formerly the girlfriend of Pete Ross and having traveled the world for three years now, this twenty one year old is caring yet intelligent with a natural gift for genetics. All she wants to do is to find her own way in the world and not be seen as Thomas Lang's daughter.And yet now she seems to have found her way back to a city which she never really wanted anything to do with and secrets which still haunts her till this dayPete Ross (Michael B Jordan)Son of the mayor of Smallville and a young man who always was forced to be perfect, to be a Ross. And growing up, Pete was the worse version of himself. An jock, an asshole, an alpha douche who was pushed by his father to be great and fearless. And yet that night of his senior prom changed his life and gave him a new outlet. A purpose. He survived for a reason, he should be dead but he's alive and he will make his life matter. Which is why he enrolled at eighteen into the Metropolis police academy and this twenty one year old is an an up and rising officer now with a mission to clean up the streets of Metropolis starting with the slums. Protective and headstrong, yet with a darkness inside of himself...Pete finds himself approached by a mysterious man after committing a gruesome homicide against a meta, given a promotion that could give him an outlet to that rage inside of him... Alexander Luthor (Evan Peters)One of the brightest scientific minds of tomorrow and brilliant twenty six year old who grew up in the suicide slums. Lex Luthor is no stranger to hard work and all his life has been bullied and tormented by his peers. A man with very little faith in humanity and believes only in himself and science. Having escaped the slums gaining scholarship after scholarship and a bachelors by sixteen. Lex lives for the future and never looked back once leaving behind his former life. One of the top notch scientists of Langtech, Lex cares very little about much except his ailing mother and teenager sister..that is until he is blown away by the beautiful and intelligent Pamela IsleyLois Lane (Jessica Stroup)The twenty three year old brash and tomboyish internet blogger known as Lois Lane, daughter of General Sam Lane and a young woman who believes the world has a right to know about the mysterious ongoings of Metropolis. Driven by a personal vendetta to expose the meta-community of the world after the death of her mother by the hands of a meta when she was six years old...Lois is dedicated, haunted and focused on her own agenda and won't let her views be swayed even when a superpowered Crusader surfaces within the city and she makes it her mission to unmask this vigilante.Thomas Lang (Julian McMahon)Charismatic, controlling and a chameleon, a man in his upper forties who had always considered science and his work was more important than his family in Smallville. A belief which was only amplified by the death of his first born son and since that fateful moment which Thomas Jr changed...and was no longer his little boy was the moment which he set out on a purpose to understand, control and destroy the metagene and thoses who possess it. EPISODES1.01 "Pilot" | In the series premiere, the city of Metropolis is thrown by a superpowered vigilante who prowls the streets at night protecting the innocent. And when a powerful metahuman with the power to cause chaos surfaces to disrupt the Crusader's good intentions...the world will never be the same in this action packed premiere as the Metropolis finds itself turned upside down as the Mikhail (Jared Padalecki) rises the meta-community up from the shadows. JARED PADALECKI GUEST STARS AS MIKHAI MXYZPTILK IN THIS EPISODE. 1.02 "Exposure" | With the world still rearing from the exposure of the meta-community, Clark (Brett Dier) fights to keep his innocence while protecting the city and begins to doubt if it is even worth it. Pete (Michael B Jordan) begins to rally up a manhunt for the Crusader forming an special taskforce with the Metropolis PD while clashing with new to the city Agent Diana Prince (Kristin Kreuk) of the D.E.O who is looking to bring in the Crusader. Meanwhile, Lois (Jessica Stroup) meets with Thomas Lang (Julian McMahon) where she makes a shocking discovery. 1.03 "PARASITE" | Lana Lang (Nina Dobrev) begins her new job at the Metro Strip and learns that strippers are going missing and turning up dead around the city. Lex (Evan Peters) and Thomas works with General Sam Lane (Patrick Dempsey) on an experiment with a terminally ill soldier that goes horribly wrong. Clark teams up with Lana to help her find out who is behind these killings who she believes is a meta. PATRICK DEMPSEY GUEST STARS AS SAM LANE AND NOEL FISHCER AS RUDY JONES. 1.04 "Passion" | Lois begins to investigate Langtech and turns to Pete for help when she realizes that she may be in over her head learning that the two have more in common then she thought. Lex makes a ground breaking discovery that causes Thomas to question the man's genius and Clark asks Lana out on a date which leads to a passionate night. 1.05 "Quantine" | When a metahuman releashes a deadly toxin into the city of Metropolis, Thomas brings in college botanist Pamela Isley (Holland Roden) into Langtech and its a race against time to save the city from certain genocide as she works with Lex to create an antidote. And when Clark learns that he is immune and that his blood could be an antidote he is forced to make an choice to give the man the one thing he wants...his blood. 1.06 "DARKNESS" | When Pete is approached by Thomas with an offer that he may not be able to refuse, Lana begns to worry that Pete is losing himself forcing her to wonder if she is as over him as she thought. Lex brings Pamela into a secret from his past and Pamela makes a shocking and horrifying discovery that could change her relationship with Lex forever. Meanwhile Langtech is broke into by a superfast individual and an important blood speciman is stolen. THIS MARKS THE EPISODE OF THE FIRST ARROW/FLASH VERSE CROSSOVER. 1.07 "Gangbuster" | Lois turns her unhealthy obsession with finding her mother's killer on the Crusader and makes it her mission to find and unmask him she finds herself throwing herself into danger but is saved not by the Crusader but a different masked vigilante. Thomas tries to repair his relationship with Lana but to her horror he seems to be just trying to manipulate her into taking over Langtech and she makes a shocking discovery while Lex grows closer to finding answers to the mysterious alien object from his past. 1.08 "Kill Lois Vol 1 " | When Lois takes to her blog targetting the meta-community she begins to put a target on her back. And when she goes missing, Pete must put his prejudice aside and turn to the Crusader to help. Lana questions her current choices in life and a shocking secret from her past finally comes to light as she must make a life altering choice. Meanwhile Pamela tries to stop Lex from unlocking the object which has haunted his past for years but learns she may be too late. 1.09 "Human Nature" | When it seems that the Crusader has turned against the city and the world is beginning to turn against him. The Flash and Arrow must make a choice...bring down the Crusader. In this acton pack episode, the beginnings of the League is formed as Oliver, Bart, Ray and Laurel take a stand and stand against the Crusader...and Lana sets out to prove Clark's innocence at all cost finding herself face to face with...a shocking discovery. 1.10 "Krypton" | In the mid season finale, Clark teams up with those who fight to protect their world in this dramatic mid season finale as three figures from Clarks past who could have all the answers about his past that he seeks. Yet there is only one problem, they don't care too much for the lower species and wants Clark by ther side as they take over and turn the Earth into their New Krypton. SARAH MICHALLE GELLAR GUEST STARS AS LARA-EL, PAUL JOHANSSON GUEST STARS AS JOR-EL, BRETT DALTON GUEST STARS AS ZOD AND FAMKE JANSEEN GUEST STARS AS FAORA IN THIS EPISODE. 1.11 "" | 1.12 "" | 1.13 "" | 1.14 "" | 1.15 "" | 1.16 "" | 1.17 "" | 1.18 "" | 1.19 "" | 1.20 "" | 1.21 "" | 1.22 "" | CREATORS NOTES(Okay guys here is my revise pitch! Gonna go for the full 22 episode season and here to it goes well! *crosses fingers* A few changes here and there took out Nathan from being a series regular for this season. He will most likely come into the second half of this season. ) |
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Post by Antwan Eley on Apr 27, 2015 13:01:47 GMT -6
okay oh my fricking god. i just finished reading the finale and haven't got a chance to read season 1 and 2 completely yet but wanted to get at least caught up and tune into season 3 and omg...this was a depressingly gut wrenching finale and omg i love it haha.
You really know how to pull at the heart strings with Chloe and Oliver and really i never been much of a fan of them but i had to admit i was feeling so sorry for Chloe by the end of this episode and then just to have her...oh my god. I so can't wait to see how she comes back cause oh my god she has to come back. And then i thought Dinah was dead but then she wasn't and working with the Suicide Squad now and wow Emil i so have to get caught up on this series.
Very wonderful dramatic and dark finale and it actually felt like it was watching it on television haha. And wow i really love Harley haha and the Joker. The Vicki moments was very nice and inspiring and i don't know much about her but she seems like a strong cool chicka and i want to get to see her story. So have to get caught up and poor Ollie. He's too hot to be a memory-less hunk of hotness...so much to look forward too next season. Killer great finale i give it five stars ha!
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Post by Antwan Eley on Apr 25, 2015 18:02:32 GMT -6
revised pitch coming soon
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Post by Antwan Eley on Apr 25, 2015 17:06:15 GMT -6
thanks for the comments Karl, means a lot! i'm currently am revising the pitch around a little. I am excited about this version of Lana as well. We both know Lana is my fav character so i must make her epic or fail trying HA. I don't want this to be the typical Superman story so i am gonna try to make him original and yet still true to what Superman represents.
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Post by Antwan Eley on Apr 22, 2015 10:52:03 GMT -6
Tottally i hated that they did that! I was looooving that couple and i wanted them to be happy but it just wasn't meant to be i guess. They need to do that bitch in! And tootally. I was actually liking her as she seemed like she was becoming her own character in the beginning and that changed of course with Damon having came back and ruined it. I totally ship Bamon too! i was an delena fan in season 1-3...then they got together and it seemed like they just lost the chemistry. I totally think Bonnie and Damon could actually be better and more interestng. And totally no new female! they tried that with April and now Sarah...just dont work haha.
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Post by Antwan Eley on Apr 22, 2015 9:31:14 GMT -6
I have to admit that i feel that losing Nina could help the show more then hurt it giving a little more freshness to the whole thing. And it could actually be fun to see Damon without Elena up his ass for a while...or on his lips.. or strapped to his arm or hanging from his neck. It could be interesting for Bonnie to be the lead female but i think that her and Caroline should share it but Bonnie need to actually become a character. I kinda like where she is going haha.
And omg ORIGINALS was killer this week! so much drama and omg i almost cried with the death of one of my favorite peoples but oh well...it was kinda expected. No one rides off into the sunset and live happily every after!
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Post by Antwan Eley on Apr 22, 2015 9:26:08 GMT -6
Gah i totally missed the last season. Clearly i got a lot to get caught up on. Once again...work sucks haha. Omg Eliza Dushku is joining the cast? Seriously? Don't play with my heart like this.
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Post by Antwan Eley on Apr 22, 2015 9:22:22 GMT -6
Star Trek. Just because i only actually has seen Star Trek haha.
Man of Steel or X-men: Days of Future Past.
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Working on the pilot now.))