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Post by peapotmaster on Jul 25, 2012 5:04:30 GMT -6
Here's a better version of my pilot. I hope this helps? Attachments:
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Ms. Kerry
VPN Community Member
Fight the good fight, Tony, I hate nap time too.
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Post by Ms. Kerry on Jul 26, 2012 15:31:34 GMT -6
I highly suggest looking into the helpful guides Chris has been posting lately on the VPN. Also take some time to read other people's scripts. Take what they're doing and try to see if your script is of the same caliber, if not then go back and make changes. This needs more work and you really do need to spend more time perfecting it and making it better.
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