Post by peapotmaster on Mar 15, 2018 20:27:04 GMT -6
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Inspired by the MTV animated series "Daria") Written By Patrick Moore 2. 01X01 "WELCOME TO LAWNDALE" Pt 1 3. We open as we fade in to a blue car with three people inside in the form of father, Jake Morgendorffer, and is two daughters, Daria and Quinn. The song playing is "Pretty Woman" on the car radio, as we see Daria changes the station to "Beth" by KISS. JAKE Daria, I wish you shouldn't do that. I like Rob Orberson. DARIA Dad, I know you like that song, but I want to hear this. Quinn frowns, as she turned the knob to play The Spide Girls. DARIA AND JAKE (IN UNISON) Dammit, Quinn! QUINN (Frowns)Daria changed the knob. DARIA I did it so I can get four minutes away from country muisc. You on the other hand... The car stops in front of Lawndale High School, as Daria and Quinn got out of the car. Jake waves goodbye to them, as he drives off to his job. We see STACY ROWE, a teenage girl with brown pigtails, short, blue pants, and a red shirt with a picture of a kitten sleeping on flowers. She waves at Daria and Quinn, as she walked towards them. STACY You guys must be new here in Lawndale. I'm Stacy Rowe, treasure of The Fashion Club. DARIA Why do I have a Heathers vibe as a forshadowing? QUINN Stay out of this, Daria. Popular girls are talking here. 4. Daria frowns at this, as she felt like strangling Quinn in the way of Homer Simpson doing Bart in her head. Quinn and Stacy continue talking, as Daria walks off to look around the school yard. She soon spot someone familiar walking within the other teens. Daria felt a hand on her shoulder, as she turned to see Quinn behind her with a frowned look on her face. QUINN Daria, what are you doing? DARIA I thought I saw someone I met before. Don't you have Pippi Longstocking to bitch with? Quinn gives a huff and walks off like the brat she is. Daria continues to looks for the girl, but she was nowhere to be found. We cut to black, as we see the "Lawndale" title simular to Riverdale, as we hear "You're Standing On My Neck" by Splendora in the background. Ext. Morgendorffer Residence-Day We see Helen Morgendorffer, wife and mother, paying the moving men who were done with putting the rest of the family's stuff in the house. The moving men drive off, as Helen takes out a cigarette case from her pocket to take out a brown ciggarette and lights up. She takes a few puffs off her cigarette, as she taps it off with her shoe. We soon see AMANDA LANE, a woman in her late forties with long, blonde hair, and dressed more like a hippie with square shaped glasses. AMANDA LANE Hello, new neighbor. I'm Amanda Lane from across the street. HELEN MORGENDORFFER (Smirks) I'm Helen Morgendorffer, as I just moved in two days ago. The moving men just brought the rest of our stuff from Highland, TX. AMANDA LANE I didn't know your family are from Texas. I heard about these two boys in Highland... 5. HELEN MORGENDORFFER I don't want to talk about them. They're a bad influence to my oldest daughter.
Post by peapotmaster on Feb 22, 2018 19:33:33 GMT -6
You're Standing On My Neck
SUMMARY: Welcome to the suburban town of Lawndale, USA. Where anything can happen, than the cynical teenage girl who make everyone miserable. Daria Morgendorffer is the new girl in town, since she and her family moved from Highland, TX. But Daria is going to find out that everything is not what they seem. The death of the school's Queen Bee leads to a mystery that will take Daria into a mystery that hasn't been solved in five years. Daria and her Goth friend, Andrea Lewis, must deal with brain dead jocks and cheerleaders, girl clichés, strange teachers, and the town itself to solve the greatest and strangest mysteries in Lawndale ever.
REASONS: I wanted to do a new take on Daria from her MTV series and do a mystery series, similar to Riverdale is now. As Daria is a animated sitcom where most of the teens are idiots and ego makers, Lawndale will change most of the Daria characters in a different way for this dark take of the MTV show. Jane and Trent Lane will be in the series, but in a smaller role in season 1. Daria's friend will be Andrea, the Goth girl from the show. I hope to add other familiar cast members in future episodes, like Mystik Spiral and Aunt Amy. The webisodes will be almost half hour, as I want to condenses to story without spoiling the mystery. Season 1 will be six episodes, and will extend if the first season does well.
Chris Pratt as Timothy O'Neil: Unlike his cartoon counterpart, Tim in Lawndale is the school's English teacher who helps Daria with the death of Queen Bee, and has to deal with certain students. Tim also is keeping secrets as well, as Daria can either trust him or not.
Margret Cho as Principal Angela Li: Li is also different from her animated counterpart, as she has lots of skeletons in her closet. Li appeared to the school after the death of Queen Bee, after the last principal disappeared after the death. Li hoped to make Lawndale High stronger than ever, but what is she really up to?
Amy Jo Johnson as Claire Defoe: The school's art teacher, Claire is the youngest teacher next to Tim in Lawndale High. She is the daughter of hippie parents, as she isn't like doing the hippie ways like Peace and Love. Claire has problems with her parents a few years ago that led her becoming an art teacher. She is one of the few people linked to the Queen Bee death, but she might have a dark past she wants to keep secret from who.
01X01-"Welcome to Lawndale" Pt. 1: The Morgerdorffers has come to Lawndale, after moving from Highland, TX. As Daria and her sister, Quinn, get fit into their new school, Daria learns about what happened five years ago with the death of a girl named Queen Bee.
01X02-"Welcome to Lawndale" Pt. 2: Daria meets Andrea Lewis, a Goth girl who knows about Queen Bee. Daria also encounters Kevin and Brittany, two teens with two brain cell between them. As Quinn encounters The Fashion Club and becomes a member
01X03-"Mystik Spiral:" During the weekend, Daria and Andrea meet Jane and Trent's band, Mystik Spiral, at the nightclub known as The Zen. Until the bar fight happens.
01X04-"Blast from the Past" Pt. 1: A three part flashback story with Daria's final encounter with two certain teenagers. Plus, we see Highland High trough the world of Quinn. Guest Staring Mike Judge as Beavis and Butt-Head in animated form.
01X05-"Blast from the Past" Pt. 2: What happened five years ago in Lawndale, when thing happened one week before the death of Queen Bee? Guest Staring Kristen Bell as Amy Barksdale and Mark Hamill as Anthony DeMartino.
01X06-"Blast From the Past" Pt. 3: As Angela Li becomes the principal as she meets Queen Bee, but thing begin to change for the worst.
01X07- (Season Finale)"Fall of the Queen:" Daria is about to learn the truth of Queen Bee's death, and everything is coming full circle. Daria is about to find out that there's a mole in the whole town that will betray her and the fate of Lawndale itself will be changed forever.
Post by peapotmaster on Dec 4, 2016 21:33:37 GMT -6
TITLE: Batgirl: Gotham Knight GENRE: Animated Web Episodic Series/Superhero/Detective RUN OF EPISODES: 13 RATING: TV-14
SUMMARY: Set three years after Justice League Unlimited ended, Barbara Gordon has been patrolling the streets of Gotham City as Batgirl. Now she must face a major turning point in her life as she must face defending a Gotham without a Batman, as the Dark Knight as mysteriously vanished, and Wayne Enterprises is under the watch of Tommy Elliot, an old friend of Bruce's. Now Batgirl, with the help of Gotham's other heroes must protect Gotham from the crooks and super villains who walks it's streets, and find out what happened to The Batman.
NOTE: This is a one season series as I want to focus on just Batman's supporting cast than just him like Batgirl. I had the idea setting this in the Timm DC animated universe where Justice League Unlimited left off of what happened to Batgirl and the other Bat-cast within the show's three seasons. You will see classic villains like Joker, Harley Quinn, Two Face, and others show up in either roles or cameos as the series will focus on newer villains with Hush and Black Mask coming into the picture. I do want to have other DC superheroes making cameos in the series as well, but I'm focusing on the Bat-Family right now. If Batgirl: Gotham Knight is a hit, I like to do a web episode series in the Superman DCAU with Supergirl.
Note 2: Will post Cast later. I'm hoping to get started on the pilot script first before I do the casting.
Post by peapotmaster on May 18, 2016 19:44:03 GMT -6
There is Son Of Zorn that could be interesting, with a He-Man/Conan animated warrior in a live action world 21st century. I hope this will not share the fate as other shows like Bordertown, Allen Gregory, and Napoleon Dynamite TAS. I just want something the edge out what Family Guy is now after it became to dark.
Post by peapotmaster on Apr 16, 2016 5:32:25 GMT -6
I just had some thought on what Jon said, and he's right. Maybe it's time to do a better take on Superman than just a reporter than just do the origin story over and over like in other superhero reboots. Spider-Man had his origin told twice in an half hour and we didn't need to see unfold in the reboot. Man of Steel did the same thing with the end of Krypton. If I did a new origin for Superman, I do it like Batman, as Bruce Wayne is Batman disguise. Meaning that when Bruce's parents died, Bruce died with them and Batman took over. Clark is Superman's disguise as Superman is his own persona. Superman's costume is the same but without the cape, as a certain movie states a no capes rule.
The Toyman will be the main villain in the film, as the other films had only Lex Luthor, General Zod, and Richard Pryor. I wanted to use a villain that could be a threat to Superman and Metropolis, and Toyman in the 90's was a complete Psycho. He was Superman's Joker, a man who uses toys and turns them into killing machines for revenge. As for the second villain, I decided on Live Wire, a villain who debut in Superman: TAS. Her role in the film is secondary to Toyman, as she was a intern at the Daily Planet when during Superman's battle with one of Toyman's killer toys is electrocuted almost to death only to gain electrical powers and white skin.
If I can get the script together by around June, maybe it will be better than what I said here.
Post by peapotmaster on Apr 9, 2016 19:20:48 GMT -6
After many fans had some mixed thoughts on a certain movie, I wanted to do a better take on The Man Of Steel I had in my head to see what you guys think of it.
PREMISE: A mysterious fallen angel has arrived and is saving people left and right and fighting criminals, as Daily Planet reporter, Lois Lane, is sent to find out about this mysterious man she decides to call Superman. Lois soon meets Clark Kent, a man from Smallville coming to get a job in Metropolis, not knowing he will be working with her at The Planet. Meanwhile, a mysterious rash of killings with twisted toys begin to happen to people under the watchful eye of the mysterious Toyman, a figure with a dark past for revenge and madness. Now Superman must battle the villainous Toyman to save Metropolis and a mysterious other player helping in this evil plan.
NOTE: After getting tired of Lex Luthor as the villain of every movie, it was time to bring someone from Superman's gallery of villains that no one ever used. I chose Toyman due to his portal in Superman: TAS, but he'll be human in my film and will look like what he was when he killed Cat Grant's son in the comics. I don't plan on using Lex in the trilogy, as I wanted to use other villains in the Superman lore than just him.
The second film will involve Batman meeting Superman for the first time, and the third will intro Darksied and the forming of the Justice League after a two year gap.
I have not cast anyone yet in the roles, as I have picked Henry Cavil as Superman and Amy Adams as Lois Lane. I will come back later to cast Toyman.
Post by peapotmaster on Feb 15, 2016 5:37:08 GMT -6
A Urban legend that began with a young boy's apparent death at a pizza place known as Fazbear's Pizza, now began a rash of mysterious child killings within a small town. Now in present day, the daughter of a police detective is sent to reopen the murders of the mysterious Purple Man after the murder of security guard at Fazbear's Pizza, only to find out that not all things are what they are.
A/N: This is a virtual mini series based on the popular "Five Nights At Freddy's" series, as this series focuses on the events before the games with new characters setting the tone for the first two games. Don't worry, Freddy, Chica, Bonnie, Foxy, and the rest are in this mini. The series will have the feel of the game series with jump scares and all.
01x01: "Bite:" A young boy is traumatized on his birthday, when his older brother and his friends take him to Fazbear's Pizza for a party. This leads into a tragic result that will change everyone forever.
01x02: "Purple:" A mysterious man in purple has been keeping a secret, which has something to do with the mysterious disappearances of children in town; as a young boy finds somethings behind the scenes at Fazbear's.
01x03: "Grand Reopening:" Years Later, Fazbear's Pizza is reopened after years of unexplained events, and the killings have begun again.
01x04: "Five Nights At Freddy's:" A security guard is getting ready for the night shift, but strange things start happening at midnight as the animatronic band seems to be moving by themselves.
01x05: "Puppet:" A female detective is sent to solve the murder of her brother who was the guard from the last episode. Now to finally end to nightmare that began in 1987, the only clue that can end this is a mysterious white faced puppet that was found at the scene of the crime.
01x06: "Snaptrap:" (Finale) The thrilling haunting conclusion as Detective Braxton confronts the real killer behind it all, but are the other animatronics on his side or against him?
JERI RYAN as Detective Janet Braxton- When her brother is killed at Fazbear's Pizza, Janet Braxton decided to reopen a murder case that happened years ago at the same place. Now she must face a greater evil that she will ever face to avenge her brother.
Post by peapotmaster on Aug 13, 2015 9:27:40 GMT -6
Time travel could be a great idea, having the FF meet their past selves before the events that changed them. I chose the Wizard as the Villain as many fans are tired of Dr. Doom as the villain of the films. I'll rework the pitch to your idea.
Post by peapotmaster on Aug 12, 2015 23:22:37 GMT -6
Reed, Sue, Johnny, and Ben are four friends who have been chosen to be part of a experiment known as the Kirby Project. When the experiment goes wrong that alters the four with strange powers, with Reed with the power to stretch his body, Sue to become invisible and create force fields, Johnny to control fire and become it, and Ben a orange monster known only as the Thing.
Reed and the others aren't the only ones with changes, but Bentley, a genius like Reed, has the power of flight and the power to blast beams from his hands. Also, a man calling himself Mole Man who works for Bentley, has created an army of creatures from the underground and plans to unleash them to the surface.
Now Reed and the others must join forces to battle The Wizard and Mole Man to save New York from the two villains. This is a retelling of Marvel's first family, before they became what they are now.
NOTE: After hearing about the new FF movie flopped, I thought I would pitch a better version of the FF without a certain Doctor as the main villain. Every version made has been about FF against Doom, but what about other villains like Wizard and Mole Man? This is where my movie comes in as I wanted to do a origin story of the FF before they were popular and became a family. I kind of wanted this to be the first of a Marvel Trilogy with F4, Spider-Man, and X-Men ending the series.
Jennifer Lawrence as Sue Storm: Daughter of a wealthy scientist, and sister of Johnny Storm, Sue is a strong woman with martial art skills. But after the Kirby Project incident, Sue can use the power of invisibility and create force fields. Sue will play a major role in the film.
Drake Bell as Johnny Storm: Hotheaded brother to Sue Storm, Johnny is into extreme sports and race cars. He joined his sister in the Kirby Project that made him into a living fire known as The Torch. Still hotheaded with his powers, Johnny still need to work with the team.
Liam Hemsworth as Ben Grimm/The Thing: An old friend of Reed from childhood, Ben got an offer to join Reed in the Kirby Project that turned him into an orange rock monster Bentley calls The Thing. Ben hatred for Reed makes him leave, until he meets a blind artist named Alicia Masters. When the Wizard and Mole Man attack New York, Ben must decide to fight or stay hiding.
Note 2: I Haven't cast Reed, Wizard, and Mole Man yet. All I can say is that you will see monsters in this film like in the Lee/Kirby comics.
Post by peapotmaster on May 27, 2015 21:37:40 GMT -6
TITLE: The Punisher GENRE: Comic Book/action/adventure/drama TYPE OF SERIES: Webisode RATING: TV-MA for violence, blood, gore, and strong language
SUMMARY: Frank Castle has returned to New York City after two years in Iraq to see his family again. One day, things changed for Frank when his family is gunned down in Central Park during a mob hit. Frank changed that day as he went into depression until he knew what he had to do…Revenge. Now taking the name that he took at the war in Iraq, Frank Castle died, and The Punisher is born to take out crime his own way.
WRITER’S NOTES: I kind of wanted to do a crime noir series without the likes of Spider-Man or Daredevil within this version of the Marvel Universe. The first Punisher comic I read was the Garth Ennis/Steve Dillon arc “Welcome Back, Frank,” as the first season will be based on that comic book arc. You will see Joan the Mouse and Mr. Bumpo in this season, as well as Ma Gnucci as the main villain of season one. I didn’t care about the original and War Zone of the Punisher on the big screen, as I like to make Frank into a avenging angel that people like as a antihero. The first season will consist of six episodes, as this is a webisode series.
Frank Castle/The Punisher (Tom Hardy) - Frank Castle has returned home after being in Iraq fighting the war to be with his family. Things changed, as Frank’s family is killed during a mob run in Central Park, leaving him into a dark depression. Now Frank has regained himself with vengeance against crime and lowlife criminals with punishment. Taking the name he was called in the war, The Punisher is born for revenge with his own brand of justice.
Ma Gnucci (Glen Close) - Female head of the Gnucci crime family, Ma is a threat to all who get in her way. Rumors are that it was her sons who killed The Castle family in Central Park that will lead The Punisher into his war on crime. Ma fears no one; even her men are incompetent to fear her.
Martin Soap (Adam Carolla)- Detective Martin Soap is a slacker of a cop who some say is bad luck. Some say Soap had sex with his mother who became a hooker. Soap regains himself as he is sent to turn in the mysterious Punisher.
Mr. Bumpo (Kevin James)- Bumpo is a heavy set man who lives with Joan The Mouse in a rundown tenant house, until Frank came alone leading them into his war on crime when he’s the Punisher. Bumpo and Joan don’t know that Frank is The Punisher.
Joan the Mouse (Jennifer Laurence)- Joan is a girl who lives with Mr. Bumpo, and is a shy person who ran away from her home after a fight between her parents. She makes ends meet working as a waitress in a diner. Things change when Frank came alone and changed everything.
01x01- “The Bad Death Of Frank Castle:” Frank Castle has returned home to be with his family, until one dark day things changed and The Punisher is born.
01x02- “Punishment:” The Punisher begins his war on crime that leads to Ma Gnucci to take on this mysterious vigilante.
01x03- “Soap Opera:” Meet Martin Soap, a detective who has been sent to do The Punisher case with his lesbian partner. Plus, Joan and Bumpo learn about their new tenant…Frank Castle.
01x04- “Top of the World, Ma:” Ma Gnucci and her gang take on the Punisher personally, but Punisher has other plans.
01x05- “Standoff” Pt. 1: Two weeks have past after the last episode, and Ma Gnucci has had enough of the Punisher, as she sends hired guns to take him out once and for all. Also, Soap gets to meet a certain Marvel character in a cameo appearance.
01x06-“Standoff” Pt. 2 (Season Finale) This is it, the final battle between The Punisher and Ma Gnucci in this double length season finale to the first season. To save Joan and Bumpo, The Punisher must make the ultimate price or let innocents die at the hands of a madwoman. And a surprise guest that will change everything.