Post by Jack Malone on Nov 21, 2009 19:59:31 GMT -6
This is a very undeveloped pitch, but a good start. I can see you know what you want out of this show, but in order for us, the Network Executives, to even consider if we like it or dislike it, we need more information. What you really need here is:
A) A FULL SEASON SYNOPSIS - You have to try your hardest to sum up your series/season in one massive paragraph, that tells us who the characters are, what the big issue of the season is, and maybe a few key storylines of the show that you want to get across. B) CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS - Yes, its a spin off of something that has had what, 3-4 movies? People may know the characters, others might not, so you need describe where they've been, where they are now emotionally and physically, and what their goals are, and possibly what they will do, and how far they will go, to achieve them. C) EPISODE DESCRIPTIONS - Titles mean nothing to us, really. Though, I must say, your titles are original and gripping, which make me intrigued. But I want to learn more about what the episodes are about.
You have one of the most original cast I've ever seen in a pitch. I give you props for that. Love the cast choice. Love the concept, but I need more to go off.