Thank you I was pretty happy with how the teaser turned out. Couldn't inject as much humour into it as I would have liked but I'm sure there'll be room for it later in the episode. The teaser does help to set up the hopelessness that Dave feels about his situation though.
Just thought I'd make a quick update considering WTTSP has been rather quiet lately XD While EoV is my main focus WTTSP is still being worked on. Connor J. J. recently signed on as a writer and we're currently throwing some plot ideas around for the three empty episode slots of this season.
I've made a few small updates to the pitch but for the most part am happy with it and am hoping to finish off the pilot episode soon for everyone to read