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Post by MJ on May 23, 2011 22:45:26 GMT -6
So, I've written up the teaser for the first episode and placed it under the 'pilot episode' section of the pitch for people to view. Any opinions on the teaser/pitch in general are much appreciated and I look forward to reading your comments  |
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Amin
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Post by Amin on May 23, 2011 22:58:08 GMT -6
Loved the teaser, really sets the tone of the show well in just a few pages.
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Post by MJ on May 24, 2011 0:52:53 GMT -6
Thank you I was pretty happy with how the teaser turned out. Couldn't inject as much humour into it as I would have liked but I'm sure there'll be room for it later in the episode. The teaser does help to set up the hopelessness that Dave feels about his situation though. |
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Post by MJ on Oct 1, 2011 20:08:15 GMT -6
Just thought I'd make a quick update considering WTTSP has been rather quiet lately XD While EoV is my main focus WTTSP is still being worked on. Connor J. J. recently signed on as a writer and we're currently throwing some plot ideas around for the three empty episode slots of this season. I've made a few small updates to the pitch but for the most part am happy with it and am hoping to finish off the pilot episode soon for everyone to read |
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Connor J. J
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Poor Ryan, your life is so bad. Having to to decide: where should I buy coffee for the crap shack?
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Post by Connor J. J on Oct 3, 2011 9:57:48 GMT -6
Ooh, Just read the teaser! I loved the way you set up the characters!
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D.C. Jones
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I know something you don't know!
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Post by D.C. Jones on Oct 3, 2011 15:43:07 GMT -6
Just finished the teaser and I had to say how much I enjoyed it. I'm already totally loving Katelyn... she's funny for an "evil" little sister ;D
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