Post by peapotmaster on Jul 10, 2012 6:19:06 GMT -6
After the recent passing of my father, I had this idea in my head for a while set in a comic book shop. This was before Kevin Smith's Comic Book Men.
Summary: Welcome to Downtown Comics, the world's greatest comic book store in Indiana. Witness the days in the lives of the workers at Downtown Comics in and out of the store. Join Max, Sam, Joey, and Chris as they run the most popular comic book store ever, while dealing with homework, girls, and geek stuff every week.
Cast of Characters
Max: The head worker Downtown Comics, and best friends to the other workers in the store. He always tries to get the girl, but doesn't as well. (Voiced by Jason Marsden)
Sam/Samantha: The Daria of the group and the only female employee of DC. This purple haired goth isn't a goth stereotype, as she secretly has a crush on Max. (Voiced by Tracy Grandstaff)
Post by Jack Malone on Jul 13, 2012 23:24:13 GMT -6
It would be of great use if you looked over a lot of the successful pitches that have made it in the past, and try to mirror their layout and the way they've approached getting their ideas across. It would really benefit you. At the moment, like Kerry said, there isn't much to sort of comment on. If you're really passionate about this series, we would love to see a further developed, more structured pitch.