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Post by The Doctor on Jun 30, 2010 12:30:36 GMT -6
Actually yeah this review did take me hours
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Post by gamila on Jun 30, 2010 14:27:48 GMT -6
I really enjoy reading all your comments and replies....as you know english is not my mother language so sometimes it's hard for me to express my opinion and emotions...so reading your comments helps me a lot to understand better the episode... One thing...you said that Chloe loves Oliver...but in the same time there will be a triangle with Bruce..so how is that possible?? That's very interesting, as Oliver and Bruce are friends, and it will be nice seeing Oliver's reactions.... I also loved how you played with all story Canary Vs Chlollie...that was nice!! i never doubt about Chlollie's love but it was nice to point it out!! and I'm happy you will not bring Clark in the show....finally Chloe has the chance to shine by her own... 2 months before the next episode that's toooooo muchhh!!!!
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Post by Jack Malone on Jun 30, 2010 16:53:22 GMT -6
Thanks! Your english is getting better with each post. Its really good! I know I wouldn't be able to learn english if it wasn't my first language (its soooo hard to learn!). Well Chloe does have a connection with Bruce. Its not love, or not really leading towards that either, but there's a connection. However, I'm not sure yet how the triangle will play out yet. It may be more of a two guys after the one girl -- Chloe confused about what she wants as time goes on, anything. So yeah, I just think the triangle is going to be something new. It would definately bridge the two apart. Haha, thank you!! XD Yeah, I think Clark being in the show would take away from the spotlight (as well as the whole "lining up with the mythos" thing). I for one, wish that Chloe will be apart of the Superman mythos, in the Smallville universe. Well, she is, and Geoff Johns has even had many references to an "C. Sullivan" in the comics. But with Smallville not over, I had to tear Chloe out of that world. Depending on what happens in season 10 between Chloe and Clark, a reunion might happen, but its highly unlikely Hahaha! I know, I know! I'll try to reach the minimum. Just have to get as many episodes done before it returns
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Post by MJ on Jul 1, 2010 0:04:59 GMT -6
I'm really enjoying reading their interactions. I confess that Helena really bugged me in the first couple of episodes but I have a feeling that was because her character was a little all over the place then. Once she settled in as part of the team I want from really not liking her at all to loving the character (though not as much as I love Chloe ). Once I've made up my mind on if I like or dislike a character it's usually pretty hard to shift my opinion but you managed to do so with Helena and for that I applaud you I really can't wait to see Bruce become Batman. Batman is one of my favourite heros I'd like to see the direction you take with Chloe and Bruce's relationship when the show comes back. Even though I'm very much a Chlollie shipper I do love anything that involves Chloe and Bruce/Batman. In fact, I've read some very good fanfiction with Chloe and Bruce but yeah, it will be cool to see where you decide to go with this. Sound like it's going to be great I've been considering whether or not I want to read Trinity. It's not that I don't think Chris has written a wonderful series (which, from what I hear, it is!), it's just that I never was a big Lana fan. I might head over a check it out though, maybe she'll be easier for me to like in Trinity than she was in Smallville No problem, I enjoy writing them
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Post by gamila on Jul 1, 2010 15:40:00 GMT -6
You know at first i was just like you...i never was a Lana fan ..she was so annoying, boring..i was so happy when she finally left But reading Trinity has made me change my opinion....she seems really more mature than she was in Smallville..and with Clark not around i can really appreciate her more....i really suggest you to read it..it's really nice!!
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Post by gamila on Jul 1, 2010 15:55:12 GMT -6
ohhh thank you, you are a very nice liar ;D ;D it sound really interesting ohh i would love to see Ollie jealous And for Clark i think we will have to wait season 10 of Smallville to see how they will develop their friendship...if they continue the same road of season 9...well just say it's better for him to not show up in Watchtower
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Post by Jamison on Jul 20, 2010 5:08:53 GMT -6
Just finished "Offline" and one word I can use to describe it, was EPIC. You really went out with a BANG which makes me SOO eager for Watchtower to return next month. First, sometimes things must fall apart in every way before they're able to get better. Chloe's decision to face this thing alone wasn't her best choice. But I can understand why she did what she did. I can never really find myself to be mad or annoyed with anything Chloe does. lol Helena took it really rough, which is understandable. I really connected with her character in this episode. She reacted just like she should have and the whole note she left, saying "Huntress Offline" was amazing. Nice cliffhanger for her, though I'm pretty sure she'll be back in the next half of the season...or I hope so. Perry got the offer of a lifetime, but he's doesn't take it because he realizes what he's got there in Gotham. I liked that moment and I LOVED the moment right after. Him being kidnapped. You know me....I'm in love with that type of stuff. Cause I'm evil like that. LOL No, but really, I think that was brilliantly done. That scene was technically AMAZING as well. It reads very well with me, pretty much like every one of your scenes. Okay...is it wrong for me to point out that the intimate scene between out little Chloe and Ollie was effin hot!? LMFAO! I loved it! Loved how you made it visually real, explaining every single movement in detail. I bet you enjoyed writing that. LOL Okay, I'll stop. But seriously, very nice scene. It was very believable. You know that I love Chlollie. But...I can't help but love the idea of Bruce/Chloe. They may not be in love right now and they may not ever come to that but I love the connection they have with one another. It's epic. LOL So, Bruce is leaving for Japan. I can't wait to see his transformation into the Dark Knight, Batman. It's going to be a great story arc for the series. Emil is just our not so friendly neighborhood psychopath now isn't he?? LOL If he believes he is saving the world, that's what he must be. But, maybe not that Chloe has seen the future, she'll tell him that it's not what he thinks it is. Maybe that is what will change his character and finally give him a chance to redeem himself for everything he's done and all the people he has hurt. I loved the ending, with the flashes of what's to come. I can't wait to see the rest of your season so I can see where you'll take the show fro here. Ahh...this was a VERY great mid season finale. I think we can skip past the technical stuff because you always get an A++ when it comes to that. When it comes to the story and characters for this episode, OVERALL I get it a 10/10. The perfect rating for the perfect episode. Looking forward to reading episode 7! It should be a BLAST
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Post by Jack Malone on Jul 21, 2010 22:01:13 GMT -6
Just finished "Offline" and one word I can use to describe it, was EPIC. You really went out with a BANG which makes me SOO eager for Watchtower to return next month. Thanks, Chris! I'm excited to return too hehe. Yeah, what I wanted to do with Chloe was enter that aspect of her character where she sacrifices her life, herself, for others, as soon throughout the majority of Smallville. I'm happy you don't look at her in a bad way for that choice, although acknowledging it was wrong, but we'll see the implications of that when the show returns. Helena will definately be back. She and Chloe have hit a rough patch in their friendship, and overcoming that is a bit of a challenge, and whether or not they'll get there, will be shown in the next episode for sure! With this, I wanted to show that Perry doesn't always just look at the great opportunity, getting further up in his career. He cares about his friends, his job, his life, those in his life, everything. Originally, I had planned for Perry to leave mid-season, and begin his destiny, his mythology in the comics, as the editor-in-chief of the Daily Planet. But then, as I was writing it, I realised his connection with Chloe is an interesting one, a father/daughter one. Something the show needs. And with what's planned in the second half, its only going to get more intriguing between the two. Hehehe. That scene was added last minute, when I wanted to show more emotion between Chloe and Oliver, as there wasn't a whole lot of relationship stuff between them during the chaos. I wanted to slow it down, and show this scene between them, as it could have been their last moment together. Well I did promise a bit of a triangle, which scratched to the surface in this episode, but as far as triangles go, it won't be so dramatically cliche like in drama shows -- it'll be something different, something new. Haha. I wouldn't go as far as to call him a psychopath, but he's pretty twisted at the moment. Redemption is something that he'll be looking for -- but he's always had a different way of approaching things, and that'll be shown too. A lot of stuff changes will be happening with him in the second half, a turning point, that gets thrown on its head towards the last few episodes. Thanks for the amazing review, Chris!! XD
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Post by jamesford on Jul 26, 2010 15:36:31 GMT -6
just finished the first episode it was so good that bastard emil and how interesting its gonna be seeing whats gonna happen with chole ollie and bruce gonna read the next episode when i get the chance
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Aug 27, 2010 16:05:52 GMT -6
I plan to read and review the first couple of episodes tonight
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Post by Jack Malone on Aug 27, 2010 17:42:46 GMT -6
^^ Awesome! Thanks Jason! Can't wait to read some feedback from you
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Post by midnightquiver on Sept 7, 2010 18:50:45 GMT -6
What's taking so long? i miss watchtower! i really hope it comes back soon i'm such a sucker for this one mainly cause chloe rocks. she's like my fav. character here and from smallville so please start the second part of the season soon!!
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Post by Jack Malone on Sept 7, 2010 19:39:20 GMT -6
What's taking so long? i miss watchtower! i really hope it comes back soon i'm such a sucker for this one mainly cause chloe rocks. she's like my fav. character here and from smallville so please start the second part of the season soon!! I know, I'm sorry. Its starting up on the 20th of September. 4 days before SEASON TEN of Smallville starts. Thanks for the kind words: Chloe Sullivan DOES rock hehehe.
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Post by Jamison on Sept 21, 2010 15:26:37 GMT -6
Jack! I've just finished reading Watchtower and I must say...EXCELLENT work! People, this is how its done! haha Okay, here's my review for Awakened. So, you started the episode off with Mia, trying to get everything back in order. Then we go to Huntress, who I totally love. Your dialogue for her is great in this episode. Like "Guess I skipped that part of the memo over at registration." I don't know why, but that line made me smile, a lot She showed some vulnerability in this episode. Especially towards the end with the heart to heart she has with Chloe. Very interesting to see that side of her. Martian Manhunter! So exciting. Your characterization for him is PERFECT. I loved that he was there to help find Chloe. I loved it every time he appeared on Smallville and I hope to see him on Watchtower again soon. His dialogue with Oliver is great. When they're at Stacy's and then at Emil's. The scene where MM got that info from the technician is probably one of my favorite scenes with him. Great work with smart dialogue all around. It's kinda weird, me not starting off with Chloe but, haha. She was great in this episode. Totally bad ass throughout almost every other scene and that's what I love to see. That scene when she was fighting the thugs was written very well. I know you just had so much fun writing "Thug Talk" *holds gangster pose* lmao! Chloe made a bad decision in the last episode but I'm glad everyone's willing to look past it. That she's learned that she needs to ask for help and have faith and trust in her friends and overall, I'm really happy to see the gang back together again. Chloe and Oliver didn't have many scenes together, but we still see how much her loves her through his scenes with John Jones. Damn, those two are so perfect for each other. That Chlollie moment at the end was so great. I was giggling like a little girl. haha Emil. lol I just don't believe that it's all over. He may not want this thing to happen but, I can sense some funny business going on there. OMG! I was so scared for Perry when he was with the Mortician. I'm loving the way you wrote those scenes. Very realistic and...I'll just say it, creepy. I think I may have liked his plot more than any of the others. Just stood out a lot. I really liked the scene between him and Chloe toward the end. I wonder if he'll ever find out that she is actually Watchtower. That will be an interesting thing to read. WOW! Overall, this episode was PERFECT for a midseason premiere! Great character plots, dialogues, and moments that we'll have you wishing it was next MONDAY already! So, I give Awakened a 10/10. Can't wait for next week!
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Post by gamila on Sept 22, 2010 7:59:57 GMT -6
ohhhhh my God!! I've just finished reading Awakened...and I'm still excited...i loved it..really loved it!!I give it a 9 + ;D First of all i have to say i don't understand the meaning of M.I.A. referring to Chloe...what does it mean?? Then the Martian...ohh i really loved him...he is so funny, and the dialogues with Oliver are just perfect...they are so nice together...it's so sad he is not a regular...i really enjoyed all his dialogues.... Helena...i can really understand how she feels...she felt left behind....but I'm so happy she decided to return with the "family"...she is so sweet really Chloe made a very bad decision, so real to her character...but I'm happy she finally realized that nobody can'go it alone..i hope she has learned the lesson Oliver...i loved him, but they didn't share any important scenes...no problem, i loved how Mia teased him about their sexual tension....really fun Bruce, ohhh i think we will start to see the love triangle you talked about..I'm so excited about this... Perry..really played with fire here...thanks God nothing happens to him..i was really worried about how he was managing the situation... Thanks for this wonderful episode
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Post by Jack Malone on Sept 22, 2010 8:18:37 GMT -6
ohhhhh my God!! I've just finished reading Awakened...and I'm still excited...i loved it..really loved it!!I give it a 9 + ;D Thank you! Its an abbreviation for "Missing in Action". Wow, thanks! I really enjoyed having Martian Manhunter on the show; I'll definately try and bring him back as many times as the story calls on it (in the future). Glad you liked the Oliver/John interactions, hehe. Definately was a learning curve for a character who is always giving themselves up, and sacrificing themselves. Chloe did learn, and I'm happy you liked how it turned out on that front, and with Helena and Chloe. And yeah, I really wanted to tap into something more emotional with Helena, break down those walls she's constantly hiding behind. Hahaha. The episode needed a little "Chlollie" thing in a not-so-Chlollie-episode. You will definately see that triangle come into play here. The next two episodes, very much show the triangle take form, and play out. As for Perry, he's always been the sort of "damsel in distress" of late, that needs to be saved, but he's starting to really face his problems by himself. This is probably strange to hear, but I'm happy you were worried for him! The situation he was in was definately new, and as much as I didn't want to delve too far into a "zombie" storyline, it was definately something interesting for Perry to go through. The fear of "am I one of his experiments?" and yeah... No, thank YOU for this awesome review! Loved reading and replying to it. Hehe. Thanks again
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Post by julie on Sept 22, 2010 11:30:38 GMT -6
q is chloe still a megahuman?
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Post by Jack Malone on Sept 22, 2010 11:39:59 GMT -6
q is chloe still a megahuman? No. The experiment was extracted from her :)
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