Ultimate Spider-Man

[peapotmaster]

ULTIMATE SPIDER-MAN

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PLOT

In a world of Avengers, Fantastic Family, Green Giants, Guardian Devils, and a new species that will be hated for years to come, one person will learn to use his new gift to help people with great power and responsibility.

Peter Parker is about to become a hero with his gift and curse as he protects the people of New York from criminals and super villains. A hero is not made, but reborn.

As Spider-Man, he fights for truth and justice after what happened to his Uncle Ben. He's not Amazing...He's Ultimate.

CAST & CHARACTERS

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Peter Parker/Spider-Man (Andrew Garfield)


Bitten by a radioactive spider during a filed trip, Peter is gifted with his new power that come with a price. He is a genius and a great photographer while working at the Daily Bugle's online division. Peter must use the words his late uncle said to him...With Great Power Comes Great Responsibility. As Spider-Man, he continues his fight after his Uncle Ben's death as a superhero.


Eddie Brock (Zac Effron)


Like Peter, Eddie lost his parents years ago and lives with his Aunt, but Eddie has a deep dark secret that his parents never told him before they died. Eddie is Peter's best friend and love interest to one of Peter's childhood friends. Eddie is brass, a rebel, but he does have a kind soul. But one day, all will change.



May Riley Parker (Sally Field)


May Parker is kind hearted woman to Peter after Ben's death, as she must deal with Peter being Spider-Man and not knowing about it. May also has a secret she can't tell Peter about that could change him forever. This version of Aunt May is not frail like in the comics, but she still worries about Peter much.


Norman Osborn (Arron Eckhart)

Norman is the Lex Luthor of the Marvel universe and will do anything to get his way. As the head of Oscorp, Norman has an iron fist of power over New York. There are rumors Osborn is working for a mysterious faction that plan to take over the city. What dark secrets is Osborn really hiding?

Otto Octavius (Michael Keaton)

Otto is a teacher a Peter's school who is also a genius. As a mentor to Peter, Otto helps Peter in his problems in his studies, but one day these two friends will become bitter enemies in the near future.


EPISODES

1.01 "Pilot" Half a year has past since Peter debut as Spider-Man. Now, he takes on his first major villain...Electro!

1.02 "Cat Scratch" New York get a new burglar in the form of the mysterious Black Cat, while Peter meets his new teacher, Dr. Otto Octavius.

1.03 "Monsters" Mac Gargan is tired of being a punching bag, until he starts taking a special drug called Scorpion that makes him into a real monster.

1.04 "Goblin Pt. 1" After tangling with super villains and small time crooks, Peter takes some time off being Spider-Man. Not knowing a new threat has risen in the form of Hobgoblin.

1.05 "Goblin Pt. 2" Spider-Man and The Black Cat team up to fight Hobgoblin, but Hobgoblin has a trick or two up his sleeve that could cost someone's life.

1.06 "Who Is Marvel Girl?" (Mid Season Finale) A strange caped super female has come to town, and Spider-Man doesn't trust her when his Spider Sense pops up.

CREATORS NOTES

I wanted to reboot Spider-Man after reading some great Spidey VS on certain VS sites that gave me the idea to do a Spider-Man series. My series will mix the talents of Stan Lee, Steve Dikto, to Brain Bendis and Dan Slott in storytelling.

I know many fans didn't like ASM 2, so I decided to make my take of Spidey more of a decent superhero series with action and drama mixed together. I'm not going to have a villain of the week angle, but I'm going to mix old and new villains into the series.

Doctor Octopus will start off as a supporting character and a friend of Peter's, before he becomes the villain that he was meant to be. The Hobgoblin will not be who his under the mask in my series, but a mystery to the readers.

Don't look for MJ or Gwen Stacy in Season 1, but they will have bit cameos and hints in Season 1.

The only Marvel guest stars I will have in the first season is Punisher, Nick Fury, Iceman, and Firestar. I would like to do Captain America and Iron Man for Season Two, but we'll wait and see.

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[Carey]

This pitch has got the same problems all your others do. It's bare-bones, poorly thought out and far too vague on just what exactly you're trying to do with the series. The characters barely have any description, and what little focus you do have is on the villains. For a newcomer, they're not gonna have any idea on what any of this means.

Look, I'm not trying to be a prick, but your pitches have not shown any sign of improving over time. My advice is to hold off from pitching, think about these characters and who they are rather than their superhero status. Think about the different kinds of stories you could tell rather than who Spider-man is going to fight this time. Think about the story you're trying to tell, and if there's a more unique way of telling it.

Just think and come up with new ideas rather than pitching something that is way underdeveloped.

[Brady Brown]

My comments echo what Carey said. Don't just pitch anything and everything you come up with - plan an idea out. What's the basic story? What are these characters going to go through as the season progresses? Get and idea, stick to it, and see how what comes out of that.

[peapotmaster]

Okay! I'll stick to one thing next time. I'll work on one idea and some scripts or do one movie here than just a series for now. maybe I can get my TMNT movie off the ground for here.