Phoenix

[Hayden English]

Since the Dawn of civilisation, there has been the Phoenix Alliance. A group of Assassins so powerful that only those with 'Phoenix blood' could join. In 1823 the Alliance disbanded and was never heard of. Until now. Katie and Alice Giraud discover they have 'Phoenix Blood' and with their friends Paul Grant & Emma Kane they will use their newfound abilities to fight the evil in Preistonn. But will the girls be able to resist the Assassin in them?


Characters


Megan Fox as Katie Giraud
Katie is your average 19 year old except one thing since she turned 16 she's been having dreams of murdering people in different times. When she discovers that she and her sister are the last remaining heirs of the Phoenix Alliance. Katie decides they use their powers to help instead of kill. But when she accidentally kills an innocent man she just can't resist.



Miley Cyrus as Alice Giraud
16 year old Alice likes to rebel. But its not her fault. When she was 12 she was abused by her uncle. She hasn't told anyone. so when she and big sis discover their place in the Phoenix Alliance. she just has to take revenge. But throughout the series she will slowly go over the edge.



Kayley Cuoco as Emma Kane
Emma is the girls older cousin but on their father's side so she doesn't gain anything to do with the Alliance. At first she is jealous but eventually she's just happy she can help rid the world of evil. She isin love with Paul but he doesn't feel the same way. In a way she is the 'Anya' of the series


Will Smith as Paul Grant
Paul was the nobody. the loser. But when he met Katie he was treated like somebody. He believes himself to be the 'Brains' of the operation but it always Emma who comes up with everything.
He is loved by Emma but he only loves Katie

Episodes


1x01 The Alliance - In Preistonn, California. Katie and Alice Giraud are living with their cousin Emma and best friend Paul. When they discover their Mother has died and left them a fortune they find out all about their origins and the Phoenix Alliance.


1x02 Bad - Emma is jealous of her cousins abilities
so she uses Black Magic to prove herself. Meanwhile Alice hunts down the uncle that has made her life hell


1x03 Consequences - Katie is still shocked over the death of the man. She contemplates going to the police and even thinks about killing herself to even the scores. Whereas Alice is perfectly happy with her revenge, but how long will the satisfaction last

1x04 - coming soon

[The Doctor]

This looks really good. Although can you flush out the episodes and give more descriptions.
All in All it looks good

[Hayden English]

ill try and put as much in as i can without giving a lot away (so dnt hpe 4 loads)

[Brian Melanson]

I like the idea but I just have the weirdest feeling that I have heard this before? But I am just unsure about it at the moment but It has Potential but I will wait for the pilot and see what to expect from it but I have the feeling this has been done before but I don't know but thats just me lol but I will stick around! Good Luck

You do have to make msome changes to the cast such as Shia he is already in another pitch such as Bludhaven as one of the main cast members so for a bit of advice from experience

ADVICE!

1) Study the cast on exsiting shows on the VPN and also on pitches so you are not using other actors people want to use.
2) Expand on the descriptions explain more of the series like tell us what to expect get more creative thats what we love to see! Dont be afriad.
3) Lastly, try and get the stories all done before picking the people to play them. I ran into these problems in the past and with the advice given to me It helped me figure out how to do this and make it more awesome!

To be honest I do like this but I really want to see more!

[Hayden English]

TBH i dont really like Shia i only picked him because of his great on screen chemistry with megan in transformers

[Jack Malone]

Unfortunately you're going to have to change as someone else has chosen him for their pitch; and they did choose him first. I suggest going on www.imdb.com and find some actors. That's where I go to look them up. XD

[Keisha]

I like the concept. Miley strikes me as an odd choice but it should be interesting nonetheless. I hope this series works out for you.

[Hayden English]

well Miley is always doing comedy & and i've always wanted her to something dark so when i had the idea for Phoenix she was the first choice for Katie who was originally gonna be crazy as there was only going to be one Giraud but i decided to have sisters because everything that happens in the series would be too much for one person.

[Jamison]

When reading this pitch, the only thing I could think of was Charmed. Because of the three, powerful, girls that are in your series. Why don't let go of that idea and make it something new by making it 2 girls and a guy or something. Cause this reminds me too much of Charmed in that way. I'm not to happy about Miley being casted. It seems more like a "fan" thing and not a true, professional casting choice. I just don't see her in a series like this one. It just makes it look childish in my opinion.

I do like the concept of the show, it has potential but it's missing something. Not quite sure what right now. I would like, overall, more info about the show.

Good luck with this.

[Hayden English]

Well it isnt really about the three girls mainly just the sisters and see my reply to xxkeelimeexx for reasons for miley