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Post by peapotmaster on Jul 13, 2012 23:17:43 GMT -6
Okay. After some thought, I'm going to redo the Pilot again with more feeling. Tell me what you think of my Downtown Comics pitch, I was using it as a back-up plan.
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Post by peapotmaster on Jul 10, 2012 6:19:06 GMT -6
After the recent passing of my father, I had this idea in my head for a while set in a comic book shop. This was before Kevin Smith's Comic Book Men.
Summary: Welcome to Downtown Comics, the world's greatest comic book store in Indiana. Witness the days in the lives of the workers at Downtown Comics in and out of the store. Join Max, Sam, Joey, and Chris as they run the most popular comic book store ever, while dealing with homework, girls, and geek stuff every week.
Cast of Characters
Max: The head worker Downtown Comics, and best friends to the other workers in the store. He always tries to get the girl, but doesn't as well. (Voiced by Jason Marsden)
Sam/Samantha: The Daria of the group and the only female employee of DC. This purple haired goth isn't a goth stereotype, as she secretly has a crush on Max. (Voiced by Tracy Grandstaff)
More Later...
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Post by peapotmaster on Jun 11, 2012 0:09:32 GMT -6
Added Remaster Pilot. Got it fixed, and made it into a better script. Attachments:
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Post by peapotmaster on Jun 4, 2012 16:29:04 GMT -6
I'm reworking the pilot to make it more of a script.
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Post by peapotmaster on May 1, 2012 8:15:46 GMT -6
Thanks, VV. I'll redo the script this week and make it better.
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Post by peapotmaster on Apr 30, 2012 18:56:11 GMT -6
This first PR movie was fun, but Turbo lost the feel of a decent PR adventure. Rita and Zedd were wasted in Turbo in a lousy cameo. The main monster in the second film would be reused as Dark Specter for PRiS.
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Post by peapotmaster on Apr 20, 2012 17:20:51 GMT -6
Added Pilot. Attachments:
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Post by peapotmaster on Apr 11, 2012 20:12:50 GMT -6
I kind of wanted more of a Spider-Man type series, since DP is a nod to Stan Lee's run on the character. Danny will take on new versions of his classic foes. For example, Skullker will not be a little ghost in metal armor like in the cartoon, but more of a Frankenstein monster meets the Terminator. The Box Ghost will not be a annoying character, but more of a small threat with a comedic tone.
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Post by peapotmaster on Apr 9, 2012 8:14:27 GMT -6
Got started writing the pilot episode, and should be done and posted tomorrow.
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Post by peapotmaster on Apr 5, 2012 18:34:28 GMT -6
Any plans for Bulk and Skull to be in the series?
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Post by peapotmaster on Apr 2, 2012 17:04:13 GMT -6
Added Bios of Jack, Maddie and Jazz Fenton. Plus Summary for episode 1
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Post by peapotmaster on Apr 1, 2012 23:04:56 GMT -6
Thanks! I'll add bios of the Fenton Family tonight. I love to use the actor who played the Blue Samurai Power Ranger as Tuck, instead of Keenan. As for the ghost villains, they'll be CGI. I will post the descriptions of the first two episodes tonight as well.
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Post by peapotmaster on Apr 1, 2012 19:49:37 GMT -6
Title: Danny Phantom
Based on the Nickelodeon animated series by Butch Hartman.
Genre: Supernatural/comedy/action
Rating: PG
Summary: College student, Danny Fenton, is about to discover something his parents haven't told the truth about their secret jobs as ghost hunters. One night, Danny and his friends, Samantha and Tucker, discover Danny's parents secret machine that can open a portal into a ghost world. But when Danny goes inside the machine, it begins to transform him into a half human half ghost hybrid. Now Danny must control his new powers and keep them secret from the rest of the town of Amity Park. But, someone else knows about the Fenton's machine, and will do anything to get it's tech.
I know this is based on a kid's show, but after reading the pitch of Nichole's Power Rangers pitch reboot, I decided to use a popular show fans may know. I made a few changes to the web series:
Danny and his friends are in college, and do some work with Jack and Maddie Fenton on the side.
Vlad Masters/Plasmius is still the villain from the cartoon, and ghost villains like Skullker and Ember work for him. He's going to be the Lex Luthor/Norman Osborn of the series.
Jack Fenton will be not be an idiot like he is in the cartoon, but he''ll be a little clueless a few times.
Jazz Fenton, Danny older sister will be in a few episodes of Season 1.
Look for a guest appearance by Timmy Turner and The Fairly Oddparents in one episode, just to nod the series.
FoP and my DP will be set in the same universe.
CAST
Danny Fenton/Danny Phantom-James Garfield: Danny is smart and brash, as prepares to become the mysterious Danny Phantom. As Danny Phantom, his hair turns white with glowing green eyes, and has the power of flight.
Tucker Foley- Keenan Thompson: Danny's tech loving friend and resident ladies man. Tuck helps Danny in his fight against the invading ghosts with the help of the Fenton thermos.
Sam Manson- Miranda Cosgrove: Daughter of a wealthy family, Sam/Samantha doesn't want to be the perfect girl to her parents, that's why she became a Goth. She also helps Danny fight the supernatural.
Vlad Masters/Vlad Plasmius- Jason Issacs: Vlad was Jack and Maddie's friend, when they worked on the portal to the Ghost World. When the machine went bonkers, it almost killed Vlad. Many years later, Vlad is a millionaire, but secretly a ghost/human hybrid like Danny with his own vendettas.
Jack Fenton-Will Ferrel: Jack is the head of the Fenton Clan and is the owner of Fenton Works. With the help of his wife Maddie, Jack plans to hunt down ghosts than invade our world. Rumors are that Jack was the one who turned Vald into a human/ghost hybrid years ago.
Maddie Fenton-Holly Hunter: Maddie is one half of the ghost hunting team with her husband Jack. Maddie is the true brains of the duo in case jack screws up. Once Vlad was in love with Maddie in high school, until the day that changed his life for ever.
Jazz Fenton- Victoria Justice: Danny's Older sister who knows that Danny and the mysterious ghost teen are the same person. Now, if she can tell that to her parents.
EPISODES:
01x01: Going Ghost Pt. 1: The origin of Danny Phantom begins here, as Danny Fenton's life is changed.
01x02: Going Ghost Pt. 2
01x03: Beware The Skullker
01x04: Box That Box Ghost
01x05: Fairly Odd Crossover
01x06: Ember's My Name
01x07: True Lies Pt. 1
01x08: True Lies Pt. 2
01x09: Endgame Pt. 1
01x10: Endgame Pt. 2 (Series Finale)
I plan to stick with this project till the end, as I would love to stay on one project and this is it. I hope you like this pitch.
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Post by peapotmaster on Mar 24, 2012 2:08:11 GMT -6
While I still like this reboot of the Rangers, here's what the original pilot looked like:
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Post by peapotmaster on Mar 17, 2012 5:28:41 GMT -6
Title: The Shadow Strikes Genre: Action/Adventue Rating TV-PG Summary: New York is under the iron fist of Boss Tony Gothel and his men. Now, a mysterious hero has come to protect the city for the criminal element. He is The Shadow. Sorry, i posted this with more description but my internet screwed up and erased what I wrote. I've attactted the Pilot, and will rewrite the cast and episodes in edit later. Attachments:
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Post by peapotmaster on Mar 11, 2012 19:25:44 GMT -6
Is Lord Zedd going to be in the series? He's one of my favorite Ranger Villains
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Post by peapotmaster on Mar 9, 2012 22:06:00 GMT -6
Fifteen years ago, the world was filled with superheroes called Supers, until one indecent changed that when the Supers went into hiding.
Fifteen years later, Bob Parr/Mr. Incredible, has a terrible job, a loving wife and kids, and is a former superhero.
For those who seen the movie know about The Incredibles story by now. This isn't a reboot of the movie, but a continuation where it left off. The VS takes place a few years after the movie, as our heroes rebuild the return of the Supers. There are changes to my version that will be less kid friendly and more of a light darker series.
* Syndrome/ Buddy Pine is still dead after the movie.
* Mirage's fate will be reveled in S1.
* None of the BOOM comic stories will not be part of my continuity.
* No Disney/Pixar cameos or references will be in the series.
* Violet is still seeing Tony from the movie.
* New villains will be introduced to face The Incredibles, even evil counterparts of our heroes will be in the first few episodes.
* People will die in my series.
* There will be a little profanity to keep up the VPN rules.
* There is a 13 episode run for S1.
* Kari the Babysitter will still be a major character in the series, since Jack Jack is a little older after the movie.
* The series will be CGI animated like the film, with a TV-PG rating.
Cast
Mr. Incredible/Bob Parr played by Craig G Nelson
Elastigirl/ Helen Parr-Holly Hunter
Phantom/Violet Parr- Sarah Vowell
Dash/ Dashel Robert Parr-Spencer Fox
Frozone/Lucius Best-Samuel L. Jackson
Edna Mode- Brad Bird
Episodes
01x01-03: "Rise of the Destructos" Pts. 1-3: A new villain called Reflector unprecedentedly creates evil versions of The Incredibles, framing them in the process for crimes and attacks in Metroville. The family must stop their evil selves before it's too late.
01x04-05: "Only A Mirage" Pts. 1-2: Mirage is back in the Parr's lives, but is she on the side of the angels or back to her villainous ways after Syndrome's death? Also, why is she linked to the mysterious vigilante known as Black Swan?
01x06: "Teen Warriors Go!" A band of teenage heroes come to Metroville to recruit Violet to join their team. Will she leave the Incredibles forever?
01x07: "Traitor" The aftermath of the first three episodes has left a bad feeling in Mr. Incredible, as he is about to find out that one of the members of his family is a Destructo undercover.
01x08-09 "Into the Looking Glass" Pts. 1-2: Mr. Incredible teams up with Reflector to go into the alternate Metroville to find the real member of his family who was replaced by his or her evil counterpart.
01x10: " A Super Holiday": In this Christmas episode, the Parr family meet Santa Claus and battle an evil toymaker all on two days before Christmas.
01x11-13 "Legacy" Pt. 1-3 (Season Finale) An old enemy is back from the dead, but with a new person in the outfit. Can our heroes stop the new and deadlier Omnidroid from destroying Metroville. Note: A major character dies.
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Post by peapotmaster on Mar 4, 2012 7:22:30 GMT -6
Thanks, I'll rework it this month and send it back to you.
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