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Post by Jason T. Davis on Feb 2, 2011 15:59:23 GMT -6
Updated Title Graphic. Made by the AMAZING Krysla. Thanks!
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Jan 16, 2011 12:41:38 GMT -6
Lex Luthor is returning!? I cannot believe you didn't tell me that. The finale should be a great read, I'm looking forward to it
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Jan 16, 2011 11:34:01 GMT -6
Favorite Season: Season 2
Favorite Character: Kahlan
Least Favorite Character: Darken Raul
Favorite Episode: Tears
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Jan 16, 2011 11:33:08 GMT -6
Favorite Season: Season 2
Favorite Character(s): Topher
Least Favorite Character: Boyd
Favorite Episode: Stop-Loss
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Jan 16, 2011 11:31:15 GMT -6
Favorite Season: Season 2
Favorite Character: Angel
Least Favorite Character: Connor
Favorite Episode: The Shourd of Rahmon
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Jan 16, 2011 11:24:06 GMT -6
I'm sorry I haven't updated in a while. I've got up to the mid-season finale in episode summaries. The remaining six episodes will be added soon. I am currently outlining the pilot for the 3rd time. I want to get this perfect so, please bear with me. Hopefully it will completed and written to its full capacity very soon. Wish me luck and I hope you all continue to support the show  |
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Dec 23, 2010 16:55:03 GMT -6
I must say, season ten has been a bit of a disappointment. There we a few great moments, but overall, it has not lived up to my expectations. Though, the season isn't over and there's always room for improvement.
Here's hoping!
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Dec 23, 2010 16:50:57 GMT -6
this will definitely be my new fave show if/when it gets picked up! this is by far the best pitch i've read on thevpn well done! Thank you, SOO much. That means A LOT |
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Dec 23, 2010 16:49:47 GMT -6
Definitely Hogwarts!
Would you rather have telekinisis or the ability to change shape and form?
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Sept 21, 2010 9:57:02 GMT -6
Okay, so I'm REALLY excited that Trinity has returned! I couldn't wait to get the chance to review the series' return. So, lets get this review stared I'll start with the plot. There have been reports of some really horrible murders, and the team knows who committed the crimes. So the whole episode is about finding him and helping him to control his new powers. It was an interesting story. Judging by the title of this episode, it could have probably been a little more "chaotic", But still, it was a hell of a great way to open the series back up. I think I liked everyone in this episode. Lana and Quentins plot was great. They're like Trinity's version of early Chloe and Clark, going off on investigations together. It was just too cute and I cannot wait until they finally get together. The two have had a MAJOR connection since the series began and I'm glad that after all that's happened in only half a season, that connection is still intact. Jake & Pete are really cool. I'm glad you found a way to add them to the episode and have them talking and getting to know each other better. Also, it let us learn more about them both as characters instead of just "sidekicks". I'm really starting to like Pete. Jake on the other hand is really scaring me. I don't know if this "asshole" thing is going to last long. Judging by the revelation at the end, I don't think so but, I'm hoping he becomes more likable overall. and QUICK. Surprisingly, Cynthia is still impressing me. I'm really beginning to like her a lot more. Maybe her getting away from Lana and the others is a GREAT thing. Something her character really needed in order to grow. Love the way you've introduced this "League focused on Justice", through her. Perfect set up, and we got to see STEEL! Very interesting, the way you went about that. Amanda, yet again, is amazing. Though she wasn't all evil and bad throughout the entire episode, we saw a softer, more vulnerable side to her. But, never was she weak and that really shows what kind of person she is. Always able to stand her ground and that is EXACTLY why we all love her so much. The introduction of the White King was eerie. I'm looking forward to seeing more of him. Finding out who's behind that little mask of his. Also, Sasha is great in this episode. Please, bring her back! What surprised me is...you didn't end the episode on a cliff hanger. I was like "WHAT??" A normal ending for once? Did Chris REALLY write this episode? HAHA. I think it was a smart choice for the series return. Gives us some time to relax instead of always being on edge. Though, I'm still super excited for the next episode. My episode, of course. Hehe. Which will be ending on a major cliff hanger. Just thought i'd throw that spoiler out there The episode overall was fantastic. I'll give it a 9/10 because I did like the finale a bit better. But still, GREAT way to bring it back. |
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Sept 11, 2010 9:03:14 GMT -6
Ya know, I think I like this quite a lot. The idea is great, while similar to Supernatural in some ways, it isn't to a point where I can say its a carbon copy of the show. There are lots of differences which still makes this very original. Just based on your overall synopsis, I can sort of feel how the show would work and I like it so far. Good cast and great characters. A perfect balance between the two, to keep the show interesting. One thing I'm not too fond of, its the title. But, who knows, it may catch on for me. Anyways, I'll look out for the episode guide.
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Sept 6, 2010 0:26:18 GMT -6
Like Chris said, It's great to see an original series. It takes a while for someone who has been making spinoff after spinoff to finally grow out of that and get on to bigger and better things. Glad to see this happening now, with you As for the series itself, the plot seems kind of forced. I'm sensing this being more of a drama, so I don't see where the supernatural side of it comes in. The main character is a struggling teen, who just lost his mother but oh, he has telepathic powers? In some ways, it can work but in others, I sounds like a really good dream that a teenager would have. I admit, I've had a couple of dreams where I suddenly had super powers. It's a fun idea, but maybe something to keep in the dream world. I guess what I'm trying to say is, it seems slightly unrealistic. I know, it's based on your life, which is very much real, but mixing the real in with the imaginary sometimes causes the balance of the genre to go haywire, which I think may be the problem here. It takes LOADS of writing experience to successfully make a supernatural drama series, where there's a perfect balance between the two genres, like Joss Whedon did with Buffy. LOL I know its definitely something I cannot do yet. Moving onto the characters...them seem to be okay. The main character being gay is kind of new to me. I'm open to it, but it'll probably take some getting used to. lol The others are pretty realistic, interesting and they have a lot to offer to the show. At a first glance, I think this series would actually work better if you make it a pure drama series. The supernatural bit sends out a slight hokey? vibe. Anyways, good luck with the show. |
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Aug 29, 2010 9:33:44 GMT -6
Do you know how good that is to hear!? HA HA! I wanted to create a show that was similar to Supernatural/Buffy in its own right, while creating a new feel and tone to the show to enhance the originality. I'm so glad I was successful in doing just that!
Oh yeah, they're gonna be all around the country/world! This is going to be so fun to write. All the cultural landmarks and things! Wow, that's a lot of research. Better get to it then.
I was never a big fan of HUGE casts. I wanted to follow in the footsteps of ANGEL (S1) or Supernatural. 2 - 3 main characters, then maybe as the series goes on, I'll add one or two more. I think it's better this way. Oh, and about the cast! Thanks so much xD I knew I was going to use Rhona Mitra. But I got really stuck on who to cast for Michael. Then I thought...Oh My Goodness...Spartacus/Gabriel! DUH!! HA HA!
Nah, I'd never do that. What people don't realize is that episode titles are supposed to project the tone of the show. With Buffy, they got any with using some humor in their titles, but hey, it was as much as a comedy sometimes as it was a supernatural drama. So, it fit. Here? Demons killing of the entire world? What's funny about that? lmao. Not to say I'll be a total buzz kill and not crack a few jokes here and there.
That's a great idea. I should be finishing the full episode guide sometime today or tomorrow. At least that's what I'm hoping. Then, I can't wait to see what you think of the fulls season.
That means so much! And my first pitch! Just...thanks xD
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Aug 27, 2010 23:15:10 GMT -6
J.T, this is just about as amazing as it gets! It's dark. It's about Angels, which is a mythology I LOVE going into. Plus! It's got two of my favorite actors/actresses as the main stars! It can't get any better! The premise is AMAZING! The whole "2012" idea is brilliant. Makes me wonder. So, demons from hell have risen to the surface and are out to kill mankind and these warrior angels have been sent down to stop them at all cost. Epic idea. Your characters have been set up extremely well and I don't even think we've seen all of them judging by what you told me earlier. With Michael being the one that's slipping away from his destiny and Gab in her attempt to bring him back, while combating the forces that are out to destroy them at the same time. It's really a story about inner struggles, as well as the other dark things they are going to face on their journey. An all around EPIC! Series. What gets me excited, is that it's soo original! I've never seen this done before and I have total confidence in you! I've seen what you can do. You're producing skills are amazing and your writing skills are amazing as well! You'll make this series the best show on VPN! I'm rooting for this to be picked up. Write the pilot of your life little bro! Thank you Chris. You always inspire me. You know that. Thanks for the feedback. I attempted to make it as dark was possible without making it overly depressing. I mean, it is about Angels and light defeating darkness. You'd think it'd be a light show. LOL But no. ha! I should this finished within a few days time. |
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Aug 27, 2010 23:12:34 GMT -6
Jason....I have to say for your first pitch...... A.M.A.Z.I.N.G The best I've seen! It is so original everything about it makes it amazing! The one series I am excited for! Love that you used the 2012 aspect and made it your own way that my friend is GENIUS! THE BEST! I mean WOW! I was blown away! I cannot wait to see a pilot from you and see what you can do with this show! I have total confidence in this show and I feel it will be an amazing addition to the VPN family! GREAT JOB! Can't wait for more updates on the series! Thanks a lot Brian =D I'm glad you think it's so original. I tried my best to come up with an idea that nobody had used before. It kind of turned out a little like Supernatural, only not really. But I'm sure some people will compare the two somehow. LOL Anyways, thanks so much and I cant wait to finish this pitch for you all. |
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Aug 27, 2010 21:06:05 GMT -6
Amazing Graphic by Krysla Background 2013. Chicago, Illinois "Two weeks ago, God allowed his most valued creation to perish. Whole cities were destroyed during the battle. Hundreds of thousands of lives, taken by the dark ones. Hundreds of those things, broke into our streets, our homes, our towns. Smashing through the concrete ground and rising up to the surface. I could just hear the screams, coming from everywhere. It was unbearable. After the rampage was near completion, the light shone down upon us. Like a beacon of hope...then came the angels." The Synopsis
On the day of December 21st, 2012, the world began to have sudden tremors. Strange. Every major city of the world, having tremors at the same time? An event that proved to be unimportant after what soon followed. As the sun went down, the earth began to crack, releasing the demonic souls from the underworld into our streets. Vicious, demented creatures that called themselves "demons". Many were killed that day, hell, more than many. They took out more than 75% of the Earth's population. But, right when the world lost all hope, the light came from the sky, banishing the demons from the Earth. Or, so we had thought.
Two weeks later, the demons return to once again raise hell throughout the world. But this time is different. This time, we have someone to protect us. The archangels.
This story follows the journey of two angels. Michael (Andy Whitfield), Gabriel (Rhona Mitra), along with the humans, demons and other angels they meet along the way. As the travel around the world, preserving life and slaying as many demons as they can, they find out that this war will go on longer than what was planned.
When they discover that Lucifer was behind the attack, as they suspected, they set out to find him at all cost. They must ban together with the remaining humans to fight a war against the demons that threaten all existence. It'll take some time for the humans to prepare, but the war against man, angel and demon has begun again. Are you ready? Main Characters  Michael (Andy Whitfield)The Archangel, Michael. He is strong willed, determined and all about the service of god. Of all the angels, Michael is known as the most powerful and most respected. Some may call him heartless, but others realize that he is focused on the mission that was handed down to him. But when he arrives to Earth, he finds that it's slowly, but surely, changing him. For better or for worse? We cannot tell, but however he's changing, it will have a major effect on earth's fate. Gabriel (Rhona Mitra) The archangel Gabriel, has been known by many faces & bodies, male and female. She's the exact opposite of Michael. True to her destiny, but willing to see other ways of solving a problem, which due to Michael's closed mindedness, may get her into trouble with her leaders. She keeps Michael grounded and sane throughout the journey and as Michael begins to change somehow, she finds herself slowly becoming the one in charge of their mission.
Episodes 1x01 | The Journey Has Begun (Pilot)On December 21st, 2012, the earth began to crack, releasing the demonic souls from the underworld into our streets. Vicious, demented creatures that called themselves "demons". They took out more than 75% of the Earth's population. But, right when the world lost all hope, the light came from the sky, banishing the demons from the Earth. Or, so they had thought. Two weeks later, the demons return to once again raise hell throughout the world. This time, we have someone to protect us. The archangels. When Michael & Gabriel arrive to Earth, they go straight into the mission to save Earth when a small suburb in Chicago has been attacked by demons. Also, within the area is one of the many leaders of this attack. As our duo questions him, he reveals the true force behind this all, starting an entirely new war. Read the official Pilot Prologue here: archangel-thevs.weebly.com/uploads/6/8/3/8/6838324/archangel_-_pilot_preview.pdf1x02 | The FallenWhile fighting a group of demons in the city of Columbus, Ohio, Michael and Gabriel both experience vivid flashes of a prophetic man who claims that he is an angel that has fallen from Heaven and is trapped on the Planet Earth as punishment for his sins. They set out to find him only to discover that a group of reapers, vicious demons sent from the pits of hell to capture any and all lost souls that walk the Earth and banish them to the underworld, is searching for the fallen angel. Normally, archangels could care less about the fallen, but this time is different. Why would the creator send them visions of him? What's so special about this man? That is the question the two ask themselves as they attempt to find him, before the reapers do. If you thought that hordes of demons was bad enough, well then you'd be wrong. 1x03 | RampagersWhile fighting a demon horde in a small town in West Virginia, Michael and Gabriel comes in to contact with a very unique and dangerous race of demonic being. Rampages. Violent bastards, usually over 6 feet tall, four-hundred plus pounds, and a tendency to destroy anything and everything within its path. They don't care about good and evil, all they do is destroy. If a demon gets in its way, then it's dead. When they discover that a pack of Rampagers are out seeking death and mayhem, they must stock up on weapons and whoever or whatever is willing to help take them down. 1x04 | RebirthingAs Michael & Gabriel cross the Atlantic, they end up in the great city of Beijing, China, where they hear of a ancient Chinese cult of demonic worshipers who plan to resurrect their spiritual god, the Pixiu, that has been described by most to be a very large, winged lion. On a search for the cult, to keep what they plan from ever coming to pass, they discover an increase in the murder of children and pregnant mothers. Sickened by the news, they must split up to conquer both problems but they soon realize that the two may be connected. 1x05 | InfectionA demonic infection spreads across an town in Saudi Arabia, that transforms countless people there into vicious, undead monsters; Michael and Gabriel travel to the the city in hopes of finding the source of the outbreak and curing it before it spreads farther, but when they begin to notice signs that the both of them are infected as well, they question if the Creator remains on their side. 1x06 | Far From GraceMid-Season Finale.When Michael and Gabriel search for answers to why and how they are becoming more and more human, they are confronted by a female witch doctor who shows them more than they asked for, when she traps the two inside a dream realm that brings out the memories and fears of the people the two angels now embody. 1x07 | Endless WarSYNOPSIS, Coming Soon1x08 | RaphaelSYNOPSIS, Coming Soon1x09 | Shroud of LeximasSYNOPSIS, Coming Soon1x10 | NephilimSYNOPSIS, Coming Soon1x11 | Warrior's CrySYNOPSIS, Coming Soon1x12 | When the Storm EndsSYNOPSIS, Coming Soon NoteSo, here's my first pitch to this network. I was thinking all day about an idea for a series and came up with this. Archangel, if picked up will have a very DARK tone and a high maturity level. The pitch is not yet complete. I should be finishing the episode summaries soon! But for now, tell me what you think of it so far. |
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Aug 27, 2010 16:05:52 GMT -6
I plan to read and review the first couple of episodes tonight |
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Post by Jason T. Davis on Aug 27, 2010 15:59:02 GMT -6
I wish I could complete this stupid ANGEL video without giving up for the day and starting a new video project.
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