Post by Verbal Vegetable on May 3, 2012 14:25:32 GMT -6
Thank you folks! I am sorry it took so long to respond. I wasn't paying attention to my own forum. XD But yes, thank you SO MUCH for the vote of confidence. It is greatly appreciated. I am about 80% done with the pilot and about 40% done with part 2. So hopefully I will have more for you guys to see in the coming weeks to follow.
Post by Verbal Vegetable on May 2, 2012 14:02:46 GMT -6
I played Diablo the first game, when it was considered, "bad, or geekish," to play video games. I was harped on for SO LONG for playing the first and second game religiously. ANYONE who wants to play Diablo 3 because of the trailers and stuff, is a band wagon fan and deserves to be shot. Mainstream can eat its own ass. XDDDD
Post by Verbal Vegetable on May 1, 2012 2:42:37 GMT -6
I have read a few of your other scripts before, along with some of the reviews that you were given for those scripts. I still find it very hard to read through your pilot because of the format. It's like reading chat dialogue, if that makes any sense. Not only that but the cover page is still connected to the actual script itself, which, I am not sure if anyone here minds that, but to me, it is just something that I feel can be easily fixed and would make your script look even that much better.
I still feel that you should REALLY, REALLY run your script through an editing program before posting your pilot. As it has been said before that your pilot is what you use to really wow people. But if they are fighting through spelling errors and rapid changes in tense, it becomes a battle to read through. I really want you to succeed and do well, so my advice to you is go back, try and reformat your script. Along with editing for grammar and tense changes from past to present. Once then, I think it would be a lot easier to review. Good luck to you!
Post by Verbal Vegetable on Apr 29, 2012 12:21:15 GMT -6
If Zoe Saldana plays Sheva I will blow my brains completely out. I am so TIRED of that woman, it's not even funny. The woman who played Sheva looks like her exactly, and, also, might I add has her voice and is an actress. SHEEEEEEEE should play Sheva.
Post by Verbal Vegetable on Apr 7, 2012 22:13:34 GMT -6
Euphie: -eyes- Kristen, I am pretty sure, some where, in like an alternate universe kind of deal, that we discussed how we are on a first name basis.... -opens up script- Yeah, see? Right here. -points to it in the script-
Tabbie: Let me see that! -snatches- HEY! WHY AM I NOT IN THIS!?!
Post by Verbal Vegetable on Apr 5, 2012 23:16:16 GMT -6
This is my all time favorite show.....of all time. Double NEGATIVE! Because it is just that freaking good. <333 First season was the best, for absolute sure. However, second season was a GREAT follow up. I just like that first season had a lot more creatures and second season had a lot more pathogens. However, both are spectacular in my eye.
Third season? ...... -sighs- I am not sure what they are thinking, but I REALLY hope this is all a means to an end. Cause so far... not impressed. In fact... I am kind of.... I don't know, I feel let down. These aren't the characters I fell in love with and know. They are different, because they are from a different time-line. So I don't connect with them like I did the first and second season. I want them to either get Peter back or give us some kind of freaking closure. FOR GOD'S SAKE!
Post by Verbal Vegetable on Apr 4, 2012 18:50:49 GMT -6
Hey Brady! I don't know if we have ever really talked on the VPN... but... Hello! XD Anyways, I MAY not be into Drama, even for a second, however, I think your pitch is really wonderfully done. And what Kat said, not something you see every day on virtual scripts. I believe that that is going to be your money maker, if not the fact that acting is your dream. So giving the characters the right drive for this line of work is going to come naturally to you, and I am a hundred percent sure, will reflect in their actions and speech.
The other thing I enjoy, is that college students, tend to look like freshmen in highschool. That is a serious turn off for me, however, I feel your characters appear old enough to be in college, and so the actors chosen I have nothing to complain about. (Which is funny, because I complain A LOT) Great work on casting.
I think the only criticism I have is the title. It felt so... I don't know what the word is... no spice. But honestly, I think you can play with that a great deal. Some of my favorite movies have titles I just look at and go, you could have named it this, or that or something else. But I end up loving it because it becomes the shows/movie's identity. Simple or not, after reading through a few more times, Audition plays to this very simple fact that most of the people in movies and TV we love, started at a single audition. Once I put that into perspective, changing the name would be stupid. Audition is the basis for all people wanting to make something of themselves in Hollywood, and the simplicity of it really brings out the ingenuity of your pitch.
Stick to your strengths and your own determinations and I think you can make this a success. That is a POWERFUL tool you have on your side, so use it to your advantage, exploiting it whenever possible. I wish you the best Brady, not only with this script, but with your own ambitions. :3
Post by Verbal Vegetable on Apr 4, 2012 18:17:00 GMT -6
I just came back from this movie. Hands down, best action film I have ever seen. These people REALLY know how to do hand to hand combat right. It was so flawless. Epic. And GOD!!! IT WAS SO ****ING GOOD! OMFG GO SEE THIS MOVIE!!!!!!! DOOOO EEET! DOOO EEEET NOW!!!!