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Post by Brady Brown on Nov 8, 2014 22:08:34 GMT -6
"Explanation" ReviewAudition is back baby! *cries* So excited! LOL. Planning this sequence out, I looked back and noticed that David and Alisha have really only had tender, sweet moments up until this point. Don't get me wrong, I love writing those cute Dalisha scenes, but I love writing conflict between them as well. This is very much a Dalisha relationship-oriented arc, and I'm very excited to see your thoughts on how it'll all play out. Alisha, herself, is in a very complicated situation, not just because kissed Robbie, but because of something more that will be revealed later so I'm just going to shut up about it   I'm trying very hard to create a new and unique take on this situation, lol. I don't know how well I'm going about that, but I guess we shall see! haha. The kiss is definitely going to play a huge role in this arc, but in what context, I shall not say All I'll tell you is that Alisha is going to have a lot to deal with. *cries* there was a reply here but it went into the great unknown, so I'll just try and put little tidbits of it: I really like writing Judy/Michael and Judy/Paula lmao. I hope you like what's to come for all of the characters and relationship, especially Maula. Hopefully I don't screw them up one day, HAHA. Also, funny you should say "even if it will probably kill me"I'm really excited for Rose this arc. She has a lot of emotional moments, and you're right - she's been pretty much in the background since her introduction, but I'm hoping this storyline will cement her as one to remember! She has pretty pivotal scene in the next episode, where she talks about what happened at the end of arc 1. Can't wait to hear your thoughts! OH MY GOD. Can this be a regular thing? You know... if there are even any quotable lines in the future episodes, LMAO. THANK YOU, JACK! It feels good to have Audition back, and it's even better knowing you're reading it! Can't wait to see what you think of the rest of the episodes! PS/ Sorry this reply was crap. Half of it got deleted (idk how technology really does not like me) and I'm a lil rusty when it comes to this sort of thing. Plus this format BBCode nonesense hates me as well and I JUST DON'T KNOW I'M SORRY *cries* PSS/ I just realized how shitty and short this looks. This forum hates me, I s2g. |
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Post by Matthew James on Nov 9, 2014 19:17:47 GMT -6
"3.07 | Explanation" Review I'm thrilled to have Audition back, I also loved the episode but found it a little bit on the shorter side. It was totally an "Aftermath" type episode, which I also love. Everyone had something going on in this episode (even if they didn't know it) and I can totally support and understand you wanting to give Dalisha a little friction, don't get me wrong I love them, but like you said they've only really had sweet loving moments not to mention I felt the series has been lacking on David lately ever since the movie started filming. So if this serves to give him more story I'm all for it. This could be the situation that will either make or break "Dalisha". I like to think that Maula is a slow burn relationship, Paula has a such a big personality  she's very pushy and all though Maula is another story I'm still looking forward to, I still can't understand why Michael puts up with her lol. I like to think part of it is that Michael is to nice to say anything to her and the other part is that I'm sure he sees that she has a BIG heart. Now it's really just about getting Michael to look past all the annoying parts of her to see that heart. It's kind of like Elena looking past Damon being a serial killer.. lmao. But I'm willing to wait I like Jace also, you haven't made him out to be a villain... yet.. so it's hard to root against him. I'm very conflicted. Lol. It's like watching season three? of Grey's all over again.. watching Meredith go after Finn (Chris O'Donnel), but knowing Derek would eventually win out.. the Difference here is that I actually like Michael. I think you've done a great job at casting the whole Smith family, and we haven't really seen enough of Judy yet to really make a decision on her, the one thing I like about her is that she's very direct. lol. And for Alex and Rose, we didn't really get very much of either, but I like that Rose is broken up over her actions, and I'm interested in seeing where you decide to take this story, and what Alex will say/do when he finds out. I'm going to give this episode a 10/10 I thought it was a nice return and created lot's of drama to build off of, and I can't wait to see where all these stories go  PS oh did I mention that I'm thrilled that our Aud gang has returned
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Post by R.A. Picking on Nov 10, 2014 12:20:13 GMT -6
Episode 302
Where the heck have I been? I don't understand why it's been so long getting back to this. I've always enjoyed reading this and I really wanted to stay on track. I guess I saw the updates about the episodes and I thought the season was just starting up - I have no idea - anyways. As always, this is a cute little story that you can't help but enjoy, even with it being a shorter episode style, it's still enjoyable to come in and take a glance. It's that kind of story. You kind of get a glance at these characters and you feel for them and whatever they're going through. I'm excited to see what happens this season.
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Post by Brady Brown on Nov 10, 2014 21:13:55 GMT -6
Thank you both for leaving reviews! I'll try and leave responses to them later this week, but I just wanted to let you guys now that I've read them and appreciate them! |
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Post by Brady Brown on Nov 11, 2014 21:51:42 GMT -6
"3.07 | Explanation" Review I'm thrilled to have Audition back, I also loved the episode but found it a little bit on the shorter side. It was totally an "Aftermath" type episode, which I also love. Everyone had something going on in this episode (even if they didn't know it) and I can totally support and understand you wanting to give Dalisha a little friction, don't get me wrong I love them, but like you said they've only really had sweet loving moments not to mention I felt the series has been lacking on David lately ever since the movie started filming. So if this serves to give him more story I'm all for it. This could be the situation that will either make or break "Dalisha". Thanks for the review, Matt! Yeah, looking back, this episode was a little shorter than the others. Definitely an "aftermath" episode. This arc will see a lot of David/Alisha friction and will really put their relationship to the test. Yes, their relationship will be make or break! I really love writing the Michael/Paula friendship! Their scenes are always so fun for me, but I also love Paula/Jace scenes. Ugh, I'm conflicted! Plus, Judy is so much fun as well. I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DOOOO, HAHA. *cries* I also love writing Alex/Rose scenes, LOL. Alex is definitely going to be the shoulder Rose needs in this arc, and their friendship grows because of it. Thank you again for the review, Matt! It's really appreciated! PS/ Sorry for this crap reply, not really feeling so hot right now. lol |
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Post by Brady Brown on Nov 11, 2014 21:54:15 GMT -6
Episode 302 Where the heck have I been? I don't understand why it's been so long getting back to this. I've always enjoyed reading this and I really wanted to stay on track. I guess I saw the updates about the episodes and I thought the season was just starting up - I have no idea - anyways. As always, this is a cute little story that you can't help but enjoy, even with it being a shorter episode style, it's still enjoyable to come in and take a glance. It's that kind of story. You kind of get a glance at these characters and you feel for them and whatever they're going through. I'm excited to see what happens this season. 8/10 Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm really happy you're enjoying what you've read so far! Hopefully you enjoy what's to come, because the sequence gets a lot darker by the end! Can't wait to read your thoughts! |
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Post by Jack Malone on Nov 14, 2014 17:53:28 GMT -6
"I'll Carry You" Review
The first thing I want to talk about in this review is what the title links to the most and that's probably got most to do with Alex and Rose, and their little moment in this episode. I remember I said last week that I loved the creative choice you made to sort of not really tell us what was going on and keep us in the dark a little bit with it and in this episode we learn from Rose that she did sleep with Brian, and that she's incredibly distraught over her actions. I was legitimately shocked (in the best of ways, of course) and while it could have been expected I didn't realise how shocking it would be until it was said out loud. I think Alex's speech gave me mixed feelings, and read a little over the top for me purely because I think I haven't connected with Rose enough to believe what he is saying is one hundred percent truth and while Rose hasn't done anything questionable up until now, she hasn't really been on my radar so I think a lot of her scenes and moments throughout her time in the series hasn't glued in my mind as much as the others. So that's just me coming into this scene with my perception and experience with the characters. Other than that, I loved what it did for these characters. For Alex, I think it really demonstrated how much of a good person he is and why he is the protagonist of this series. He's had his struggles in the past, and we've gone through a lot with him in these three sequences, and I love that he remains very passionate about his friendships and his friends well being and so it was definitely a highlight for him in this episode to see him support and try and lift Rose up. As for Rose, I've been saying it for a few episodes now that this storyline has a lot of potential for her and already she's been sucked into my radar for the rest of the sequence. I want to know where she goes from here. I want to know more about this situation and how she is going to break out of it, or how its going to escalate, etc. It's just a really good, dark storyline for a character who has sort of been on the straight and narrow since her introduction and so this moment, and this particular episode for these two characters was a definite highlight for me.
This episode also solidified the characters of Robbie and Mia as well as their agendas. I think there was this running question throughout the episode of where Mia's intentions were while it was quite obvious that Robbie's were kind of innocent in the sense that he does appear to have feelings for Alisha. I think what is conflicting for me - in the sense that its perfect for a drama series - is that part of me feels bad for Robbie because he does have genuine feelings for her but then the other half of me hates him for trying to get in between a committed relationship. I think he could potentially have a place on this series outside of being an antagonist and I think its kind of easy to sort of relate to someone who has feelings for an unavailable person and how he must be feeling, whilst watching him serve to be quite a threat to "take out" this sequence. I feel like he has a lot of potential. As for Mia, I just fell in love with her by episode's end. I think the whole time- and I even wrote it in my notes- I was convinced she loved Robbie. There could still be something there- if not feelings then definitely jealousy. I think that's what her entire being is made up of in a way: jealousy. I think she sees Alisha as someone who is getting all this attention that she craves but doesn't receive and then there's Alisha who has a boyfriend, who has a best friend who is a male which she perceives as Alex having a thing for Alisha, and then there's Robbie who is her friend but is head over heels for Alisha. Her line at the end of the episode made me sit back and go "oh my god, I love her. She is awesome." She's a total antagonist for this sequence but one that I actually don't hate. I think it's cool to see a character caught up in their own insecurities and project them in a way that she's going to want to take out another character. I think there's a lot of potential here as this arc takes us into the final episodes of the sequence. It's really, really exciting stuff. I also look forward to what Mia has planned, and I think my biggest question about her is: does she have feelings for Robbie or Alex or is it just the fact that she's jealous they *could* have feelings for Alisha? Does it have more to do with Alex and Robbie, or has it got more to do with Alisha? I'm looking forward to seeing that play out and have these episodes answer those questions for me.
Moving on, I wanted to just say that Alisha and David are the most adorable couple ever. I adore them. I think David has fast become my favourite character, and I loved their little scene at the start. It was kind of hard to see him discover Robbie's name on her phone, and know that Alisha still hasn't told him but at the same time I can completely understand why Alisha hasn't told him what happened because there really is nothing to tell. At least I hope there isn't. Alisha didn't want to be kissed, and she didn't want to have this thing with Robbie happen. So I can completely understand where she's coming from but I don't see anything good happening in the future of these two at this point. I'm a little worried this is heading into a pretty dark territory for the couple and we haven't seen them have to sort of fight for their relationship other than deal with long distance (which they excelled at by the way). So I think... going forward with this sequence, their dynamic is definitely my favourite and I'm excited to see what comes of this particular storyline for those two.
Lastly, there is of course Paula and Michael. The double date? Really, Brady? Do you want to fight me bruh? But seriously, this just goes down into the long list of many twists and storylines that are completely unpredictable which I praise you 110% for, I mean seriously! I didn't see this coming to fruition and its shocked me. I think Jace is a nice enough guy, and I think he and Paula have had quite a handful of sweet moments, and I'm willing to see what comes out of this Michael/Judy storyline. I think it's definitely got potential to spark some conflict between all four parties? I mean, I don't legitimately know if they have any underlying feelings for each other. There are moments within the show that makes me go "I love them and I want them to be together", but there isn't enough there for me to say with complete clarity that they have something there for each other. So again, I have no idea where this is going. Despite the ships, the most important thing about Judy coming to town was telling Paula about their mother and what surfaced was kind of heartbreaking. I loved when we got to delve into Paula's past a bit, and it was really shocking and having to see something surface in real-time right now is really going to allow Paula to develop even further and sort of grow from what we've known her to be for two and a half sequences. I keep saying it but I'm just genuinely excited for more and more episodes of this show. I love it. Every storyline has me hooked.
Quote of the week: "Why am I dating you again? Oh yeah, you're hot and smart. And you're actually willing to date me. You're like an endangered species. Or a species of one, really."
9/10 - Seriously loved everything in this episode. Alex's speech threw me off a bit; despite it making me appreciate his character more I just felt it was a moment that could have come a lot later once we sort of grew with Rose's storyline for a little longer. Still an amazing episode!
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Post by Brady Brown on Nov 15, 2014 19:20:54 GMT -6
"I'll Carry You" ReviewThe first thing I want to talk about in this review is what the title links to the most and that's probably got most to do with Alex and Rose, and their little moment in this episode. I remember I said last week that I loved the creative choice you made to sort of not really tell us what was going on and keep us in the dark a little bit with it and in this episode we learn from Rose that she did sleep with Brian, and that she's incredibly distraught over her actions. I was legitimately shocked (in the best of ways, of course) and while it could have been expected I didn't realise how shocking it would be until it was said out loud. I think Alex's speech gave me mixed feelings, and read a little over the top for me purely because I think I haven't connected with Rose enough to believe what he is saying is one hundred percent truth and while Rose hasn't done anything questionable up until now, she hasn't really been on my radar so I think a lot of her scenes and moments throughout her time in the series hasn't glued in my mind as much as the others. So that's just me coming into this scene with my perception and experience with the characters. Other than that, I loved what it did for these characters. For Alex, I think it really demonstrated how much of a good person he is and why he is the protagonist of this series. He's had his struggles in the past, and we've gone through a lot with him in these three sequences, and I love that he remains very passionate about his friendships and his friends well being and so it was definitely a highlight for him in this episode to see him support and try and lift Rose up. As for Rose, I've been saying it for a few episodes now that this storyline has a lot of potential for her and already she's been sucked into my radar for the rest of the sequence. I want to know where she goes from here. I want to know more about this situation and how she is going to break out of it, or how its going to escalate, etc. It's just a really good, dark storyline for a character who has sort of been on the straight and narrow since her introduction and so this moment, and this particular episode for these two characters was a definite highlight for me. The Alex and Rose relationship is something that's going to continue to develop throughout the rest of the sequence and into the next one as well. Rose's arc really dives into her emotional state and how she handles it, as well as how Alex can help her through this tough time in her life. Regarding Alex's speech - sorry it was mixed for you! I can see where you're coming from. I just needed a place for them to have a deep conversation, and this is where it happened to end up. A lot goes on in the next couple of episodes, and putting it their would have been awkward and disjointed, in my opinion. I'm really happy Rose is slowly solidifying herself into the main cast for you, and hopefully her character, and her relationship with Alex, will continue to grow to your liking! Oh wow! I'm legitimately shocked you love Mia, HAHA. I honestly never expected a reaction like that towards her, but, hey, I'll take it! Anyway, I don't want Robbie to be considered an "antagonist" of this season - I believe that would be solely Mia, for now at least - but I would say he is a catalyst for a lot of things that are going to happen, all because he has feelings for someone who has a significant other in their life. *cries* Makes me sad, LOL. In regards to Mia, again, I'm shocked! Mia is a very jealous character, and during these last few episodes we see her slowly unravel into a pit of rage that will definitely label her a force to be reckoned with. HAHAHAHA. Glad you love David/Alisha (or Dalisha, but that's an ugly name, but whatever you prefer)! I really love to write their adorable moments, because they're so different from one another and that leads to some really fun moments, like in this case giving David a nickname. Alisha does something in the next episode in regards to the information she has been keeping from David that will really propel a development for a lot of characters. A lot happens. *evil laughs* *cowers in the corner* Please don't fight me! *cries* The relationship between Judy and Michael (or the lack thereof) will really have no real development, LOL. Judy will always find Michael attractive, but in regards to a romantic relationship brewing - there won't be one, I'm saddened to say. Judy and Paula will go and visit their mother in the next episode, which leads to some scenes that develops Paula's character, as well as Judy's. Also, YAY FOR EVERY STORYLINE HAVING YOU HOOKED. *happy cries* Thank you, Jack!! I always love your reviews, and I'm so happy you're such a big fan of the show! I hope you enjoy what's to come!! |
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Post by Jack Malone on Nov 21, 2014 2:22:02 GMT -6
"Mommy Dearest" ReviewTo put it simply: this episode comes at the time our characters need the one thing that is going to make them feel a lot better about what they're going through-- a mother's love. However, it's not all sunshine and rainbows, even with their mothers in the picture and that all comes down to each character and their respective storylines and/or decisions to open up; which is the case for Rose. Rose has been the character for me that has only just started to hit her peak and become more solidified within the cast, and the story. In this particular episode, she shared a really nice scene with Alex that made me - dare I say it - really see a spark between the two in a "could be more" kind of way. I think this moment felt more earned and was more genuine than the previous episode and I really believed the exchange between the two characters. I think Alex's stems more from his kind-hearted nature and ability to really cheer people up and care for those in his life that he holds close to him. I saw a little bit from him that could suggest feelings are involved but - this may sound weird - I think Alex has a chemistry with majority of characters on this show because of how nice he is and because of how much he cares; it almost has this consistently blurred line - even with Alisha - where I legitimately can't tell if there's something more there or not and so I wanted to come into this review saying that I think it'd be great and I see it going somewhere but knowing this show and how unpredictable it can be at times (in the absolute best of ways), I was thinking how stupid I would look seeing something that may not actually be there. The other part of me thinks that there's a beautiful friendship here and not even male/female friendship needs to go from platonic to romantic: so either way, I am happy with the development between these two. *finally spits it out* The introduction of Rose's mother was my absolute favourite. I adore her. Cassandra seems like the kind of cool mum that you can just talk to about anything and she's obviously very affectionate and a very passionate woman and so I was confused as to why Rose would be so hesitant to talk to her about this situation. But then if you look at it from Rose's perspective, she probably feels ten different kinds of levels of shame, and embarrassment, humiliations, etc. Either way, the moment between them was a really nice scene - it was both really sweet, but also painful in the sense that you can feel how hard it is for Rose to both bottle this in, but also not be able to spit it out and connect with her mum, and let go of how much this entire thing is killing her on the inside. Paula's arc has just been incredible to watch play out this sequence, and I think the introduction of Judy has really allowed us to delve deeper into this character and add some more layers -- now we have her mum too? It's exciting. I think the really cool thing you did in this episode was- well, we've only ever heard these tragic things about Paula's mum and we have seen flashbacks before but we haven't been able to do something like this episode before and so when she answers the door... I'm kind of expecting this broken, shell of a woman who is not a ray of sunshine but just a storm-cloud that is so torn up and decaying but then she answers the door and we get: "Aw, look, it's a Smith family reunion." She becomes human, you know? She becomes a person and suddenly we're invested. We know that she's so far only been this idea in our head, and this story from Paula's perspective, and now we see her and she's a mum, she's a normal human being... she's just got this inner sadness within her that is a lot stronger than she is that has worn her down over the years. I loved her speech to Paula, and for a moment I thought that it was basically suggesting that Paula is the odd ball of the bunch and she's just this giant ball of sunshine that Judy or Savannah could never really relate with or see where it came from. However, I think Savannah used to be like that and I think Paula walks a very thin line of possibly following in her mother's footsteps and I think Paula has an inner sadness about her too that just hasn't gotten the best of her yet, you know? Paula's a lot stronger than whatever demons she's battling with at the moment and I hope this situation doesn't wear her down to be overwhelmed by those demons. Also: Judy redeemed herself for me in this and earned herself quote of the week- Quote of the Episode: "I'm not here to chat. I'm here to say one thing. Think about what you're doing before you do it. Don't be the person who dulls her shine, do you understand me?"
Last but not least, there was of course Alisha's role in this episode. I'm actually so bummed out right now and did not see what happened coming. I've totally been pulled out of her mindset, and I'm just... gah, I hate cheating. I hate it. I especially don't see it as a mistake, I see it as a choice and I think we all do bad things but to actively choose to betray someone like that, and to break a trust... ugh. And then she made it even worse by not only not telling David that first Robbie kissed her, and not telling David that she now made-the-hell-out with him, but then at the end of the episode she goes back to David and basically goes to bang him?! I'm just so disappointed in Alisha right now. I'm so gutted for David because I was sort of... this whole time I was just Team Alisha and now I'm looking back over the course of this storyline and she's never really said "I don't want to do this with you" or "I don't want you to kiss me" or anything of that it's just been "I have a boyfriend" which... gah! You're a monster, Brady. You're a monster. I hate cheating and I love this relationship and I don't know if they can come back from this storyline or if I want them to come back from this storyline and I'm just bummed out. *cries* 10/10 - thematically, the episode joined all plots together under a similar concept that was executed perfectly, and while I'm uber miserable and annoyed, that was the creative objective of the episode so I can't fault it for doing its job. *drowns in pool of tears*
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Post by Brady Brown on Nov 21, 2014 14:07:28 GMT -6
"Mommy Dearest" ReviewTo put it simply: this episode comes at the time our characters need the one thing that is going to make them feel a lot better about what they're going through-- a mother's love. However, it's not all sunshine and rainbows, even with their mothers in the picture and that all comes down to each character and their respective storylines and/or decisions to open up; which is the case for Rose. *takes deep breath* Here we go. Alex and Rose definitely have a relationship brewing, and whether or not that ends in a romantic way or in a platonic way will become apparent later on. It's all a matter of if Rose is ready for a relationship or not after what she put herself through. I really try and have Alex reverberate Michael with some of his scenes, especially with scenes were characters are seeking comfort or advice, and it's really great to know that his chemistry is shining through with all of the characters! But yes, you'll have to wait and see if Rolex (GET IT? I'm sorry.) will become romantic or remain platonic, which is something that won't be answered this season. HAHA! Yay! I don't really include Cassandra in the show that often, but when it comes to having her in episode and writing her lines, I always get a kick out of it. Rose's decision not to tell her mother strictly stems from the embarrassment and guilt of the entire situation. So yes, you hit the nail on the head with that one! I love that you're enjoying Paula's arc so much! I'm really trying to strip away her bubbly persona (which will always be there, don't fret) and find out who she is on the inside. Savannah was really tricky to write, because I was never sure how I wanted to approach her until I started writing her scene - did I want her dreary? Crazy? So it's awesome to know she came across in such a human manner. Look out for a talk with her bestie next episode *cheers violently, flails arms, screams to the heavens, falls over* *cries* I've been trying to mentally prepare for your reaction all week, and I don't think I've succeed LOL. I knew people would immediatley disconnect with Alisha after this episode, probably even start to hate her. She does have a reason - something that definitely does not excuse what she did, but does add layers to her character and as to why she did what she did - which she'll talk about in the sequence finale. As for right now, Alisha's just confused. She had this talk with her mother, and she's still just so freaking confused, and all she could do to try and keep her relationship with David was to go and sleep with him. *cries* I'M SOOORRRRRRYYYYYYYYY *sits in a corner for time out* Despite sending you into a depressive state (I'M SORRRYYYY), I'm glad you enjoyed this episode! Hopefully you're heart won't be crushed too many more times throughout these last few episodes! |
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Post by Jack Malone on Nov 30, 2014 22:11:28 GMT -6
"Ruined"
Dude -- I just want to start this off by saying that you are a phenomenal writer. You have all these individual storylines for these characters, but all of them always seem to interlock with a theme for that episode, or the entire sequence, and it's all different storylines but they connect in some bigger way that just adds to the tone so well and I needed to tell you that straight off the bat finishing this one.
One of the things this sequence has lacking - which I didn't realise until we got it - were scenes between Michael and Alex. Opening the episode with these two was a nice little bit of fresh air because it's felt so long since we've had it and it's not a negative to say that we've lacked it this sequence - because the story doesn't really call for those two with what's going on right now - but it's nice when you get scenes that just show us little everyday things or remind us about how some of these dynamics are and the father/son dynamic between Alex and Michael is just beautiful. Their moments are understated and just perfect for me so I loved it.
Speaking of Michael, he gave one of the best speeches to Paula. I don't want to bring personal stuff into this review but I just wanted to say that everything he said sort of struck a chord with me and it's taken me a while to sit down and read this episode and I just love how when I finally do it has something in it that I needed to hear right when I decide to read it, you know? I just loved it. Also, there have been quite a few memorable speeches this sequence, and some that have been a bit hit and miss for me and I just want to say that this was done so seamlessly and there was no forceful push for Michael to say what he did - it just spilled out and flowed and was exactly what was needed.
Jace is starting to worry me. I think the themes of jealousy this sequence which have definitely been tackled more-so with Mia's character are sucking Jace into it too - with reason, though. I think it's easy for me to sit back and dislike Jace for bursting in and having that outburst but when you take into account that this women he's with is confiding in another man and hasn't spoken to him for days, and hasn't talked to him about all of this stuff then you can understand why he's upset so I like that this show is able to make you understand instead of jump between hate or love, like or dislike, etc.
Rose has definitely become one I'm excited about now. I think there was a period when I didn't really remember her all too well, or didn't really go into an episode thinking "I wonder what Rose will be up to in this one," and this sequence has just flipped that on its head. She has really grown into a - as David would say - "hella" character. I think when I talked earlier about this storyline showing a lot of potential, it hit something in this one which exceeded my expectations. I didn't see there being a power-play between her and Brian, and a way to go - you know - you can't tell the world about me to ruin my career and I can't do the same for you. They're stuck at this checkmate right now that's really interesting. I don't know if this is where that story ends between them and if it's just a parting of ways now (with a nice slap to the face too - go Rose go!) but whatever the case this was definitely an unpredictable outcome and milestone within Rose's storyline and journey this sequence that I absolutely loved and appreciated.
As for the way this episode ended: holy plot twist, Batman! I knew Mia was going to do something, and I half expected her to just blurt it out so again... I just love how I don't see these things coming. I loved that she was more manipulative, and more scheming. It makes her more interesting, and it makes this storyline even more interesting than it already is. I don't know what David is going to do from this point onwards and I don't know what to think about Alisha/David. It is obvious to me that she loves David so I think it's just a matter of digging into her mind, and her justifications and reasoning and things like that which I hope are coming to fully understand how she could have done this, and whether or not I think David and Alisha should stay together. Either way, this was such a nice way of having shit hit the fan and now I'm looking forward to see that shit spiral around and f*ck the room up before someone comes in and cleans in. *pats back for making ridiculous poo in the room analogy*
Quote of the episode: Other than the entirety of Michael's speech; "That would be hella." "Did you just say-" "Hella? Yes, yes I did. I'm widening my horizons."
Another 10/10 for obvious reasons: in that the whole damn thing was f-cking perfect.
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Post by Brady Brown on Dec 1, 2014 18:37:27 GMT -6
"Ruined"Dude -- I just want to start this off by saying that you are a phenomenal writer. You have all these individual storylines for these characters, but all of them always seem to interlock with a theme for that episode, or the entire sequence, and it's all different storylines but they connect in some bigger way that just adds to the tone so well and I needed to tell you that straight off the bat finishing this one. *cries* Oh my God, this literally made my entire life. THANK YOU! Seriously one of the greatest compliments I've ever gotten. Evah. Yeah, I recognized that too when I started writing the episode. In fact, the last real scene where it was only Michael and Alex was when he was in the hospital, so it was nice to have a light-hearted scene between the two of them, which is something I definitely want to try and include more in S4. *wipes away sweat* THANK. GOD. HAHAHA. I'm always nervous when I have characters give other characters advice, because I'm 99.9% sure I'm going to screw everything up and cause the world to blow up. So, thank youuu! Paula has gone through a lot emotionally this sequence and when she was faced with the possibility of losing a loved one, I thought a talk with her bestie Michael was in order. Glad you enjoyed it, and that it really resonated with you, omg, I'm seriously so glad it helped in whatever capacity it did! Jace has a lot to deal with in these final two episodes, and we really see that expressed in the next one, so I'll let you wait and see what happens! As of right now, that's the end of Rose's story with Brian; however, if I can find something to bring him back in with, or if I can expand on her story, then I'll definitely jump at the chance. This was really about Rose accepting herself and realizing that, yes, she made a decision that had negative consequences and she had to learn how to deal with that, and confronting her demons - in this case Brian - really concluded what was going on with her. Now, she'll definitely still feel the guilt, which will also stem from slapping Brian, and that will be peppered throughout episodes to come. I'm seriously so glad I'm able to surprise you so much! HAHA. I don't think I'm clever at all, so that's really a compliment. Mia makes a lot of confrontations, especially in the final episode, and it really pulls away the horrible-attitude she has and shows how she has been affected by the Hollywood scene. It'll be explored more in S4, but for right now, I'm gonna give you a little taste, HAHA. As for David, you'll have to see what happens in these final two episodes HAHAHA. Literally my favorite part of your reviews! Thank you SOOOO much, Jack! Always love to hear your spectacular thoughts! |
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Post by Jack Malone on Dec 5, 2014 4:22:58 GMT -6
"Tears Dry On Their Own"
Holy shit, did things go down in this episode or what? From Mia and Rose crossing paths, to the much anticipated confrontation between Alisha and David... this penultimate episode was bound to be amazing from start to finish and if that wasn't enough we were left on quite possibly the biggest shock/twist of the sequence (so far).
First and foremost, I want to talk about Rose and Alex. I think for a few episodes now we've sort of seen this connection between them that - to put it in the simplest of terms - I really dig. I think they've got something there that should be honed in on whenever the time is right because I feel like it could blossom into another power couple for the series.
Speaking of Rose, it was kind of heartbreaking to see Mia read her so well and figure everything out and regurgitate what she's gone through this sequence back out at her and to see Rose crumble to pieces like that especially after witnessing her put those pieces back together in the past two episodes with the help of Alex. I think we could potentially be looking at a dangerous turn for her in the finale and I hate myself for even thinking it but there's got to be a follow up to this, right? There's something coming out of the Mia and Rose confrontation.
As for Mia, I still love her as an antagonist. I think it's been fun to watch this character who is so insecure about herself use those insecurities to start tearing everyone around her down. I think it's very human and a very real threat on the show and you don't stray from highlighting those insecurities and reminding us that despite Mia's strength and her power as an antagonist for the sequence she is still very much human and very much hurt deep down so it creates a lot of internal conflict that she tears out and uses to "attack" others. I have no idea where things are headed for her in the finale but maybe it's time she and Alex had a good one-on-one? I don't know. It seems to have moved past primarily Alex and into a sort of... *holds mirror up* look at what you're becoming, Mia type thing perhaps. Again, I don't know and it's exciting as much as it is infuriating to not be able to figure out this direction for her.
Paired with this particular storyline we finally had the big confrontation with Alisha and David. I think less is more when it comes to moments like this and I love that it was just a matter of him basically coming out and saying "No, we are done" that just drove a knife straight to my heart. I was rooting for him. I was rooting for the couple as well. I was waiting for an explanation from Alisha. You've got two of the most lovable characters on this show in a relationship together that just found its first second big source of drama which could potentially end the couple (and seemingly did) and it splits you down the middle because you still love them both, you know? If I was looking into parallels here, I would say David and Paula might just be headed on a similar path. In the same light that Paula's mother has the ability to "dull her shine", I think this entire storyline for David is what might dull his and it's absolutely heartbreaking. I think what also hurts is that there's a moment in that scene where he's so fixated on comparing himself and Robbie where it kind of feels like he almost expected to be left behind because he's not like all the other high school guys, and he's not every girl's "most wanted" and so I feel like there are some insecurities within his character, and his confidence and belief in himself that Alisha's betrayal just enhanced for him and it hurt to see him so hurt.
Onto the shocking twist of the episode: Jace has a mugshot?! Jace is going to kill Michael?! What the hell, Brady?!
As shocked as I am, it finally adds a much needed layer to the character of Jace who was feeling a little underdeveloped at this point in the series and I feel stupid for not questioning this character, and not trying to ask more about him and figure out his story. I always just sort of saw him as a walking love interest, you know? I just thought he was here to be with Paula and it would add some sort of strife for what I hope is building towards the epic love story of Paula and Michael, and so I was totally blinded by shipper eyes for those two that I didn't even think there could be more to Jace. I applaud you for not allowing your audience to get comfortable with a character as just an embodiment of a storyline, or a specific "role" and I love that there is more to this character that I can't wait to see play out in next week's finale!
Quote of the episode: "I thought he would've already bought me a dog. That's what guys do, right? They... they buy dogs?"
All in all this was another 10/10. I think it started scratching at the surface of what could be an even better finale than the previous two sequences and the shocking twist at the end just made it even better!
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Post by Brady Brown on Dec 6, 2014 19:04:50 GMT -6
"Tears Dry On Their Own"Holy shit, did things go down in this episode or what? From Mia and Rose crossing paths, to the much anticipated confrontation between Alisha and David... this penultimate episode was bound to be amazing from start to finish and if that wasn't enough we were left on quite possibly the biggest shock/twist of the sequence (so far). WOOOT! Rose and Alex (Rolex? Are we gonna go with that? Sure.) will continue to develop throughout the next sequence, which you'll just have to wait and see if it ends romantically or not There's no immediate followup to the Rose/Mia confrontation, but it will come. Just not in the finale. A lot happens in the next episode and it didn't structurally fit in, so you'll have to wait a little while! Also int he next sequence, we'll definitely see a lot of Mia and how being born in Hollywood affects someone and how that differs from Alex and Alisha. Anyway, more Rose/Mia coming soon. Probably the s4 premiere LOL. YAY! Mia is so interesting to write. She is in the finale, and I don't want to say too much about it because I don't want you to know ANYTHING! *evil laughs* Alisha and David will share another scene in the finale, which will include Alisha attempting to explain herself. Won't say how it all ends, for obvious reasons *evils laughs until Thursday because I can't wait to see how the finale utterly destroys you and rips your heart out* I mean... um... thanks? Yes, THANKS Thank you sooo much, Jack! Sorry this reply was so short, I just really don't want to give anything away for the next episode, which I hope you enjoy! Can't wait to hear your thoughts! Also, still loving your "Quote of the Episode". |
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Post by Jack Malone on Dec 12, 2014 3:08:28 GMT -6
"The Devil Within"
It's the sequence finale time, and things are ending with a bang! I feel like there were two biggest questions going into this finale that made it "on-the-edge-of-your-seat" thrilling, which was: who is holding the gun, and who isn't going to survive to see the next sequence? As the events played out - cutting back and forth between characters at the height of their sequence-long story arcs - the questions narrowed down into finding their answers and we were left with one of the biggest shock endings of the series so far.
The episode opened with Paula being the first to be cleared from harm. After Judy finally gets a hold of her, we learn that Paula successfully ended things with Jace and isn't in any harm whatsoever. I thought it was clever to start us off with learning more about these charges in Jace's past: they were assault charges against his ex-girlfriends. I was honestly relieved to have Paula be immediately cleared from the looming threat of whoever it was wielding the gun because she was a high contender after the situation with Jace in the penultimate episode of the sequence. So that's one down to safety!
As that was playing out, we also had the arrival of Michael at the set of Alex's film, which provided a bit of light-hearted humour to the finale which I think was needed. It was nice to see that amidst all this chaos that was forming in the background, we could still have a bit of a laugh, and a bit of happiness before it all went to shit. So I definitely commend you for finding another angle, and another story built into the high-stakes of this drama to give us more than just complete anarchy (of which I remember last sequence's finale exhibiting).
At the film set, Rose and Alisha crossed paths. It was nice to see that Rose was able to turn her experiences into a way of helping someone else, however it was clear to me that Alisha wasn't that someone else that her story could save. Despite the embrace that followed, I think it felt like this interaction sort of helped Rose overcome her struggles a lot more than it did calm things for Alisha and what she was yet to face (a confrontation with David). I think those lines at the end of Rose's speech tried to tie it back into their interaction a little more, but rather than having a large impact, it sort of just demonstrated a nice bonding moment between the two. It was nice to see a friendship between these two women, and I think it's a connection and a dynamic I want to see explored more in the fourth sequence.
From here, we were given an intense confrontation between David and Robbie. At this point in the episode, I started to question who was the one with the gun, and this scene started to make me think that it could quite possibly be David. There was so much rage and so much aggravation and hurt behind David's words and actions that it made me question if he would be the type to turn to violence after such a heartbreak. Ultimately, he crumbled to tears at the scene's conclusion and it squashed my fears of this direction. Other than being terrified of seeing my favourite character go down that path, I felt that Robbie was so genuine in his reaction, and so genuine in his feelings that he didn't deserve to be the one with a gun aimed at him (not that anyone does). I feel like Robbie's feelings for Alisha were true, and honest, and the fault in the downfall of David and Alisha's relationship comes down to Alisha's choice to act on whatever it was between them.
Speaking of which, the explanation was finally given and while it doesn't justify Alisha's actions, it certainly shines a light on the motivation behind them. Alisha isn't the popular girl at high school, and she isn't this "whore" that Mia paints her as, and so when she's shown affection by another guy, and flirted with... she doesn't know how to take it. That doesn't make her a horrible person - what she did was bad but you genuinely have to feel for the girl because up until now she's done nothing wrong, and I think it's a perfectly understandable perception she has of herself and how it could mutate into this really horrible thing. I think this sequence has done a good job of focusing on the insecurities teenagers can have, and what they have to go through during that period of growing up. Everyone is insecure about something and I think if there was ever a time to explore that in a destructive way, this sequence was perfect because it has been a more emotionally driven story than the previous two.
While on the topic of emotion, it was heartbreaking to see that final scene between David and Alisha. I think it was already painful to see them fighting in the first place, but to have David about to leave and Alisha calls him Aquaman?! That was just like you reached out of the page, ripped out my heart, and put it in a blender cackling (weird imagery I'm sorry). It was such a well written moment though because you feel the history between them, and you realise that innocence and that adorableness about them has just been tainted by this horrible situation and David has to walk out because there's no healing these wounds - they're still so fresh. I think the moment David said he wishes Alisha stayed with his mum was the moment I realised that there was no turning back from this. At least not anytime soon.
Things progressed, and we got a nice little moment between Rose and David before all hell broke loose. I honestly felt like Rose was the perfect person for David to speak soon and was upset that it was cut so short. I think she would have been able to help calm him and that's the tragedy of it all because that's when the shooter comes in and nothing can be properly resolved. The shooter is Jace, and he's come for Michael. However, when he pulls on the trigger, the only one going down is David, and I did not see that coming. The second Michael is shown to still be standing, and unharmed, and charges for Jace, I'm sitting here going "WHAT?! BUT HE FIRED THE GUN?! WHAT?!" And that's when you read: "David lies on the floor, his shirt covered in bright crimson
BLOOD." ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!?!
Out of all the characters who were going to fall victim to something as tragic as that this sequence, I did not even think about it realistically being David. I'm in shock man. So much so that I read this episode about 6 hours ago, and I'm only just writing a review for it now. I can't believe its David. He better be alright, man. He better live through this.
Quote of the episode: "Things will be fine" BECAUSE ITS SO FLIPPING IRONIC TO SAY THAT IN THE SAME EPISODE WHERE MY SHIP GETS BURNED TO THE GROUND AND MY FAVOURITE CHARACTER IS LEFT BLEEDING ON THE FLOOR, CONVULSING. THINGS ARE NOT FINE ROSE, THEY ARE NOT FINE AT ALL!
*breathes*
10/10 - I enjoy a finale that has a really intense story and raises the stakes and while it's great to have character beats within finales (which you did have) I much prefer the big events, and the massive confrontations, and life and death drama and so I appreciate that this had a lot more of it than I was expecting. As for the character beats, they were a lot more subtle and sort of reflected a sequence's worth of development for some of these characters in the smallest of scenes which showed so much more than the scenes would run for and that's a testament to your writing. Well done to another fantastic sequence, Brady, and may the fourth sequence open with David restored to complete health, Jace resting behind prison bars, and a beautiful reunion between David and Alisha. *cries*
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Post by Brady Brown on Dec 13, 2014 11:14:18 GMT -6
"The Devil Within"It's the sequence finale time, and things are ending with a bang! I feel like there were two biggest questions going into this finale that made it "on-the-edge-of-your-seat" thrilling, which was: who is holding the gun, and who isn't going to survive to see the next sequence? As the events played out - cutting back and forth between characters at the height of their sequence-long story arcs - the questions narrowed down into finding their answers and we were left with one of the biggest shock endings of the series so far. WOOOOOOT!! In all of the madness, Paula didn't really have a set role to play, other than just be the window into the audience knowing about Jace's past. She'll do more in the s4 premiere, when she learns of what's happened and what exactly Jace has done. And I thought I'd just give you a little relieve before all hell broke loose I will always squeeze in some Michael/Alex scenes if I ever get the chance! I don't like completely depressing things, and since this show is a dramady, I try to never forget the comedy aspect of it, even if complete madness is running a muck. Rose and Alisha are gonna have waaayyy more scenes in s4. I realized that was lacking in the third sequence. I mean, Alisha isn't as close to Rose as she is to Alex and David, and vice versa, so there's definitely going to be some female bonding coming up. Rose is going to take her experiences and try and do some good with the people around her, haha. *REDACTS all David talk in fear of spoiling his fate* But in terms of Robbie, he will be in s4, but in what capacity, I have no idea. He's going to have a scene with Alisha in the premiere, but dats all I'mma say. Alisha's insecurities have been slowly building throughout the entire series' run: she started off being called out on her quietness with Angela and Jordan and put up with their ridiculing for 2 sequences, and during this third sequence I really wanted to show those insecurities. It'll continue into the s4 premiere, as she starts to feel extreme guilt for what's happened to David and she's going to have to try and figure all of that out. *laughs evilly* There's definitely no turning back if one of the two are dead... buuuuttttt.... er hem. Yeah, basically what I said above - Rose is all about using her experiences to help people now. HAHAHA YES FOR CONFUSION AND SHOCK! I'm so happy I was able to shock you! Always awesome when that happens HAHAHAHAHA OH MY GOD. Thank you soooo much for the review, Jack! Again, sorry for my crap reply. I'm so glad you've enjoyed this sequence, and I hope you enjoy the next one just as much, if not more! |
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Episode 4 - "There's Something About Leila" - Out Now
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Post by Jay Paterson on Apr 22, 2015 20:36:30 GMT -6
Seeing as I wanted to get back into reading, I thought I'd catch up on the only show I read on theVPN before I jump into others. So here's my reviews of the first 10 episodes. I will most likely read and review the final 2 tomorrow. But for now I leave you with this.
3.01: Over the Love
When did Audition become so dramatic?! I know it had its moments in the past but damn that episode was up at 100 from beginning to end. And I liked it. So this is the episode we say goodbye to Jordan and Angela, which is probably for the best because their story has come to an end. But I do hope to find out what they’re up to in the future, like does Jordan recover? Is Angela done with acting for good? I do think it’s more than just the being rejected from roles that did that to Jordan. Just from the way he spoke to Angela about stopping the hurt that he causes her by killing her? Like that boy has to be mentally unstable in some way. And just when you though all that drama was enough, that ending?! WTF! Sad there was no Paula/Michael interactions, but I’ve still got a whole Sequence to catch up on. Great episode, Brady. 10/10
3.02: Father Knows Best
This one seems more like the Audition I know. Even though I never usually like hospital scenes or episodes you still managed to make this one fun. As usual Paula made me laugh, I buckled when that woman shouted shut up! David also got my with his one-liners, gotta love those two. Nice little father and son moments in there. And finally, we got more storyline with Rose! I’ve been dying for you to dive into her character and I can already see great things to come. 10/10
3.03: Reading Time
Everytime. Seriously, everytime Paula just steals the show. Lol. I always crack up during her scenes and that wrecking ball scene I think is my favorite to date. Still a little weary of Jace, maybe because I still don’t know him that will and Paula pretty much does all the talking. Nice little insight to Alisha and Alex’s first day, I can see it getting a little messy with this new Mia character. AND OMG OMG! Was that is? Did I just read what I think I read? Is this the moment I have been waiting for since Audition started? Did Michael and Paula share, a moment? 10/10
Christmas Special: Nativity Disaster
What a fun read, everyone was funny. From David gluing his beard on to Paula stealing a baby. Haha! Not really a fan of festive episodes so I wasn’t looking that forward to jumping into it but it turned out to be great and really funny! 10/10
3.04: Bitter
And we’re back at the film set for this episode. I’m enjoying these new characters on set. I feel like Robbie is going to come between David and Alisha and I’m okay with that. I mean I like her and David together but I always get more laughs from reading David when he goes solo. Lol. Speaking of David that scene with him and ‘Papa B’ pretty great. Haha. I feel bad he feels like Aquaman. Definitely not keen on Brian that scene with Rose was a little awkward. Jace and Paula were cute, why are you doing this Brady?! You go ahead and tease us Maula then you shove Jaula back in our faces. Lol. Anyway, 10/10
3.05: Day-Off
Oh I knew it. Robbie only says hi to Alisha and there’s already trouble in paradise. So Mia likes Alex? I honestly didn’t see that coming. If anything I thought he would have the hots for her and she’d reject him but she wants to ‘bone’ him? Lol. Its nice to see Alex and Rose’s relationship evolving, I think they’re my next fave paring to Michael and Paula. Speaking of, that shower scene was HILARIOUS! My jaw dropped when Paula flashed him. And she didn’t even cover the fact that she saw his manhood either like any normal person would. Haha. I hope she stays at the Beretta’s for a while because that will lead to some funny moments. 10/10
3.06: Forceful Nature
I knew it, that Brian is such a perv, I just hop that wasn’t really rose walking in at the end. Poor David being stood up, is it bad that I actually like Alisha and Robbie together though? Damn Mia’s a frisky one, I wonder if she’s really mad or resume the chase, we’ll see. 10/10
3.07: Explanation
Haha Paula has a sister? And she pretty crazy too! That was funny when she just plants one on Michael. Lol. I wonder how long Alisha will last before she tells David about Robbie. Sad there was no Mia this episode, I would love to see what she does next when she see’s Alex. So it was Rose * sad face * I can’t believe she went through with that. 10/10
3.08: I’ll Carry You
I have to say I absolutely love Mia as the new foe. Poor Alisha always gets it worse though, with Angela and Mia. But now that Jordan and Angela are gone you’ve done a great job of introducing a new ‘bad guy’ if you will. I’m glad Rose didn’t keep that to herself for ages and that she just came straight out and told Alex what happened it will make for some nice scenes together and give some more depth to their relationship, go Rolex. Michael sure has his hands full with Judy, they will be fun to watch, she’s a feisty one. 10/10
3.09: Mommy Dearest
Oh I feel a storm brewing especially with Alisha and Mia. This episode never had as much LOL moments as the rest of the series but it was nice to see more of Paula’s family. 9/10
3.10: Ruined
I knew it! Damn you Mia! I’m not looking forward to seeing what David does next, poor boy. Go Rose finally standing up toe Brian! Its hard to see Paula unhappy, bring back fun Paula. Jace seems to be turning out a bit possessive, lay off her Jace. I can see all these little hints throughout the past couple of episodes that lead be to believe that this qequence finale is going to be explosive. 10/10
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Post by Brady Brown on Apr 23, 2015 15:35:42 GMT -6
Seeing as I wanted to get back into reading, I thought I'd catch up on the only show I read on theVPN before I jump into others. So here's my reviews of the first 10 episodes. I will most likely read and review the final 2 tomorrow. But for now I leave you with this. Yeah, my main goal for sequence 4 is to try and get back to the light and funny Audition that a lot of people fell in love with, but I felt like this dark sequence was needed to develop the characters in a certain way. Glad you liked it though! Jordan and Angela will always have a possibility of coming back, so you will see them again sometime, but when I don't know. Jordan is very unstable; he's always had this anger problem and was used to being leads in things, but when he was constantly rejected, something in him snapped and, in his own mental and confused way, he thought killing Angela would save her from him, because if he killed himself all she would do was mourn him. Yeah, pretty sick, I know haha. Also, tons of Michael/Paula to come! Yeah, definitely getting back to the roots with this one. Haha! And Paula's always gotta be that comic relief factor, and David is slowly joining her in that role lmao. I wanted to capture the relationship between Alex and Michael because it's not really showcased as much as I would like it to be. I'm trying to shove them into more scenes just between them haha. Yay for more Paula love! Hopefully Jace grows on you lmao. And no! You read nothing! Nooootthhhinnngg!!! D: *runs away* I really love doing these holiday specials, so I'm glad you enjoyed it and its craziness Yeah, I don't think I've ever had a David/Michael scene before, so that was a fun thing to experiment with. #Don'tTrustBrian bc he shady af. I make them cute because I AM EVIL. All I'll say is that shower scene was my favorite thing to write of all time, I was literally cracking up in the process. #KillBrian2K15 So much drama stems from this episode, it makes me wanna cry. Yes! Judy will be in more eps to follow Also, I'm really glad you like Mia! Was totally not expecting that when I was writing, but I'll take it! Yay for more Mia love! She'll be in S4 I think the biggest thing about this sequence was that I need to introduce someone who was better than Jordan and Angela, and I don't mean in terms of character, but someone who could progress the plot by themselves. and yASSSS SOMEONE SHIPS ROLEX!! *cries* I love Alex and Rose together haha. Yeah, this was definitely a more serious episode. And yes! Alisha and Mia will be butting heads even more with the episodes to come haha. David will definitely be a new person in the next episode. It hits him pretty hard, and it makes me sad thinking about it haha. I really liked Rose's arc this season, ending with her standing up to Brian. I'm so proud of her, haha. Yes, the finale will be veeerrry explosive. Thank you sooo much for these reviews, Jay!! Good to have you back! Hopefully you enjoy the final two episodes |
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she's very pushy and all though Maula is another story I'm still looking forward to, I still can't understand why Michael puts up with her lol. I like to think part of it is that Michael is to nice to say anything to her and the other part is that I'm sure he sees that she has a BIG heart. Now it's really just about getting Michael to look past all the annoying parts of her to see that heart. It's kind of like Elena looking past Damon being a serial killer.. lmao. But I'm willing to wait 
