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There are four episodes left and they haven’t announced the name of the finale so I’m hoping they’ve had time to wrap it up. But seeing as I’m already watching this season, I’ll let you know if it’s worth watching. 

Thank you, Jamison. It's always nerve-wracking putting these episodes out there without me being the only one reading jokes and the punchlines. So hearing that you are enjoying them and that the timing is working for you and generating real laughter is such a delight. 

It's funny, that was not what I was going for originally between Ron and Dylan but it happened naturally and I'm glad it did because it makes for some nice/funny moments later in the series. You'll find out more about Dylan and his relationship with his father during the second half of the 1st season, it really shaped him to be the straight-laced guy we know today. Haha yeah, he was so hopeful before meeting Tanya. 

Dylan's reasoning to hold back the truth from Leila stems from him always wanting to be able to impress her. He has this college life now and she looks at him in a different way, rather than the nerdy kid next door. It will come out eventually of course but I'll let you keep reading to find out if that leads to any fallout or not. Yes, this was another one of those moments where I was like, comedies like these can have those eye-roll moments but when you add in an employee masturbating in the bathroom and him getting the job being tied into the joke, maybe it's just enough to work. Lol. 

Thanks again for another review. I'm so happy you're enjoying the series so far. 

Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts, Darrin. I really appreciate it. 

Dylan and Riff are totally opposite but they work. Similar to you, I have had friends whose personalities conflict with mine off the bat, but they turn into great friendships. Down the line, we will get to see the origins of Dylan and Riff but for now, we will see how they navigate life as adult friends and if that contrast will hold up as they've grown. 

The number of versions I had of those cut scenes. I must have scripts kicking about with lots of different scenarios. I'm happy you liked it as it was one of the hardest parts of the script to decide on. Especially the drunken phone call. 

I'm also a fan of movies that do that, so I thought a slomo, voice-over monologue was the best way to end it. 

Haha! Yeah Riff is the instigator and I don't think he means to be the bad influence but this does lead to him having to console his best friend with a movie quote pep talk, which you'll find is his speciality throughout the series. 

The banner scene always gets great feedback and I'm quite fond of it myself. I still chuckle thinking about it. Thank you, that's a huge compliment. Although this is primarily a comedy, I never find myself getting into comedies that don't involve a hint of drama throughout. I feel like pulling in these real-life elements can make for some sweet moments which stops it from becoming sketch-like. I'm chuffed that you appreciate the contrast and the cuts are working well.

Yeah, she's totally a one-off character. It was supposed to be a running theme that Dylan would meet these one-off characters that push him forward in his journey. So in episode three, he'll have another encounter but I didn't quite manage to squeeze one into episode 4. But both Leila and Riff get more screentime in that one so it was worth it. It's nice to see that the guest star appearances have you laughing also. 

Thanks again, Darrin. I can't wait to hear your thoughts on the next bunch of episodes. 

I have been slacking in the movie watching department this year. Now that cinema's have reopened I have booked tickets to see A Quiet Place II this coming weekend, so it's nice to see some of you enjoyed it. I'm a massive fan of the first one. I feel like I have been waiting forever for the sequel.

1.03 "Everyone's on Strings" - Review

An episode with some answers. Over the past couple of episodes, Asher has come to the forefront of the series and I really enjoy diving into his storyline. His interactions with Miles was what I found most interesting about the episode and the approach taken to help Asher come to grips with magic. We find out more about Asher's back story and his life outside of this new world and Miles really breaks it down for him why that may be holding him back. It was nice to see Miles properly mentor rather than asking them to do things and offered a new dynamic that I'm interested in exploring. We're already on episode three and Asher is finding himself at a crossroads, is learning magic really for him? The passion is there but he's lacking where his peers are excelling which is causing doubts. It's nice to see that he can still turn to Meredith even if she does know the whole truth.

Although only a short scene, I'm excited to have learned more about Link, a personal trainer with a passion for photography. It plays into Miles conversation with Asher as both Link and Evie are creatives, they are already wired differently. As usual, Evie is a blast to read and it's funny to see her just dive headfirst to learning magic on her own and expand on what she has already learned. Although I feel like may cause some issues when it comes to going out on the field. She comes across as cocky at times and overconfidence might bite her in the ass. She's definitely a firey character which I love, it's a nice contrast to the quieter Link.

With taking the advice from Miles he finally takes a step forward with his magic, even if it isn't as impressive as he thinks, Miles will continue to lead him down the right path. This leads to Miles coming clean about what the Guild is and why they have been chosen. It's enough information to be given at this time as we have already been exposed to some of this at the beginning of the series, but there is still so much left to learn which has me excited.

The ending was perfect I can only imagine what you have in store for us.

1.01 "Team Magic" - Review. 

I remember falling in love with this pitch originally but I wasn't as active as much on the site when it started airing so I never got around to reading and reviewing it. But we're here now and I'm excited to get stuck in. 

Going back over the pilot I know there were some tweaks that you made at the beginning which was a suggestion from Jack. I feel like reading the pilot this time around it felt more rounded. Giving us that glimpse into the Guild of Sorcery at the beginning adds a whole lot of mystery and raises a bunch of questions which I'm sure you'll soon answer in the coming episodes and having Miles show up at the end connecting us with the three protagonists really pays off and ends as a perfect catalyst of this adventure. 

I have to say your character introductions are fantastic. The personality of these characters jump right out of the page and I immediately get a sense of who they are without you having to really tell me much. Evie seems like a badass and an instant favourite, Link is very relatable and Asher may have the most complicated time as he's introduced to be in this serious relationship but at the same time having to cover up his new hobby. Just from the dialogue and settings for each of your characters, you got to convey a lot in such a short amount of time and it's really impressive. 

I'm really excited to see where you take this series and finding out about who the Guild are? Why they need these new recruits? An what is their role is within this world? 

Overall great first episode. Your writing flows really well and very easy to envision this on screen. I'm already a fan. Expect more reviews coming soon. 

WARNING: SPOILERS!

1.01 | Town of Darkness

I spent tonight reading your updated draft of episode one and you really did a great job tightening this up and bringing down the page count. The story felt more concise by taking away the witch parts and unnecessary little scenes and solely focusing on saving Harper, the conflict between the sisters and Shannon's dynamic with her new friends.

I've not much more to add to what I've already said about the pilot. It's a great start to a supernatural series and poses lots of questions whilst hinting at larger mythology so I'm excited to dive right on in. Shannon is a standout and Emily is a fast favourite. I can't wait to find out more about these characters.


1.02 | Wolf Moon

My first taste of more Beacon Hallows and it's a good one.

We open on episode 2 shortly after the end of episode 1. Mrs Potts is dead and a sombre Shannon saying her goodbyes. Not gonna lie but the fact that Mrs Potts has the same episode count as Chad and Thad pisses me off...

I am so happy you moved the dream sequence from the pilot to the beginning of this one. It made for a rounder story. Although it was interesting in the pilot, it pushed the story of this episode forward more and ultimately paid off from a quick switcheroo. This episode felt like it was Emily and Shannon's story. They both take centre stage in this one and it was a nice balance between friends who technically should be on opposite sides. I've mentioned how Emily has become a quick favourite of mine and this episode only proves that fact. The scenic visions which introduced Aemilia, an ancestor of Emily who is here to guide her along with a sea of people who have come before them, read incredibly well and I could picture every moment of it. Right down to the dead rising from the cracks of the earth. But this was the catalyst for Emily's story this episode and it's what introduced us to her mother Violet, who in my option had the best line of dialogue in the whole episode - "I’m sure this isn’t the first gun you’ve seen, Cujo." - She will be the driving force between conflict amongst what she believes to be a good and bad and possible conflict between our new-found besties down the line. I cant say I'm a fan of Voilet given the ending but we'll get to that shortly.

It was nice to see Shannon succumb to the full moon. She's not your usual werewolf, she's immortal and has been around a hell of a lot longer than your average wolf so I wasn't sure if a full moon would affect her or even be a weakness. But this poses a few questions? Why hasn't she got this under control yet? Is there more to the story. From her brief interactions with her sister it is mentioned that she has tried to live a normal life, so does that have something to do with it? Has she pushed this side of herself so far back that it controls her and not the other way about. Shannon essentially became out big bad of the episode which wasn't what I was expecting at all. It was nice to see Isobel take a back seat with a few flash appearances because you know that with all of Shannon's issues keeping them busy she is planning something even bigger. Sadly, Harper became the victim yet again but this time of the other sister. Which she seemingly thinks makes them even considering she stabbed Shannon. I guess she's right as neither of them really had control over what they were doing. It was also nice to find out a bit more about Isobel's powers of compulsion and how she controls this.

Matt seems likes a solid guy so far but there are a few things that irk me about him. I feel like I need just a little bit more from him. He is certainly coming out of his shell especially taking all of these new revelations head on whilst being on hand to shoot Shannon anytime she needs to be. Lol. He seems a good friend to Emily, even keeping a secret from her mum as if he knew that he should keep it from her. I think that was a good call. The only parts of Matt that took me out of the story was when he asked Shannon at the lunch table about Vampire blood. It did seem out of the blue and not something I'd expect him to bring up knowing nothing about vampires yet. I think maybe having him mention how strange it was that Harper is making such a miraculous recovery which the doctors can't explain and then Shannon filling in the banks would have made the most sense as she is in the know. The part after this when Shannon is stabbed by Harper and he has her calm down by breathing took me out of it a little bit. You recovered this by having him explain how he knew to do it in the next act, which was nice because I began calling him the wolf whisperer. I think I would have maybe liked to see him take a panic attack earlier on or something that showed me him taking control of his breathing so I could have put two and two together as soon as I saw it instead of it being explained afterwards. It wasn't a big deal though just some food for thought. I do like how comfortable he has been with his weapons in the past two episodes, it seems to run in the family.

Justin's really came into his own in this episode with his one-liners. I'm really looking forward to him getting more screen time and delving into his story. Not too much to say about him right now other than he is a load of fun to read.

With help from Voilet, our gang have devised a plan to trap Shannon before her full moon rampage leads to her killing someone. I enjoyed learning more about the witches and the mythology around this with the bullet, the wolfsbane and hellfire ash and it came together nicely with their plan-- the bait, the witch, the shot, the trap. A well-executed plan which turned out nicely and left for a lovely ending with our core characters and nice backing track. That is until you know what... I mentioned it earlier and I knew I didn't like her. I'm very interested in seeing how this plays out and what type of strain this puts on Emily's relationships. And the teacher is involved?

A great episode, Matthew, so well done. I look forward to reading some more in the coming weeks. Consider me a fan.