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Post by Brady Brown on Jul 18, 2015 11:52:12 GMT -6
4.05 "Let's Go Out"Alisha/Rose interaction! F-CK YEAH! I just love it when the girls together. Can we just stop to talk about the female characters in this show. Like one.... there are so many of them. And two, they're so different from one another and equally as interesting and it's just amazing. Love love LOVE your female characters. But back to Alisha and Rose. Upon going to this mixer, we meet the lovely Kelsey Marks for the first time. A character who I was sooo excited for and she's finally here! Really loved the awkward moment between her and Alisha. I think their relationship can go soo many interesting places and I'm so here for it, you don't understand! haha! I'm hoping to squeeze more Rose/Alisha in arc 2! I really love them together. And awww thank you! That really means a lot to me to know that you enjoy all of them and find them all so different. Yes! So glad you're here for Kelsey haha I think David and Mia have a really nice relationship that was pretty much founded on horrific events. They're definitely going to develop over the course of this sequence, and I can't wait to see whether you like them or not! HAHAHA! You know, you know. You knew before erryone! Thanks again, Chris! Your thoughts are always appreciated
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Post by Jack Malone on Sept 3, 2015 23:06:21 GMT -6
"Weedy Comfort" Review Audition is back, baby! The mid-sequence premiere was everything I needed and more for these characters, and the ever evolving nature of the show. Mia and David stepped back into the spotlight with a really interesting examination of the latter's behaviour since he was shot. The growing dynamic between Alisha and Kelsey had a little focus, as well as Michael's recent arc regarding his passion for screenwriting, and there was even time for some Robbie/Rose goodness that you know I adore (on my own because apparently I don't ship the couples that actually get together). A little moment for my tears, and lets start the review! First off, I have to talk about Mia and David. They share a really interesting dynamic. The two of us have talked a lot about certain couples on television that are forced or feel like they take away from the story, and so I have to mention just how incredible this dynamic is between Mia and David because of how it is birthed from moving the story forward, and moving these two characters forward as opposed to some "oh my god I ship it" dynamic that would blow up on Twitter or Tumblr, should this be a real, actualised Television Series. I think its a perfect example of what relationships should do on television, and whether fans like the idea of them together or not, it's extremely organic and beneficial to the show and these two characters which is why I'm such a fan of their scenes together. Mia and David don't necessarily have the pre-established chemistry or fanbase behind them but their interactions have serviced the story, and the greater themes of this season which have explores things like identity and figuring yourself out. This episode showcased that perfectly, and I'm so glad we finally got to see David open up about his recent choices, and his recent mindset after what happened. It's important that we know David isn't being "influenced" by Mia, and he isn't being lead astray -- this is his life, and his choices and what he wants to do and I'm so appreciative of this sequence following up on that and exploring that because that has been one of my favourite aspects of the show this year. In regards to Mia, I feel like she does lead this double life, almost, in that she's not necessarily a different person with David but we see a different side of her. In looking toward the future, I want to see these identities meet in the middle somewhere. I want to see if it is this front she holds up to protect herself when it comes to her interactions with Alisha, or Alex, or anyone who isn't David. It's just interesting to see that difference between Mia sharing a scene with David to Mia sharing a scene with someone else, you know? I hope we get something in regards to that later Moving on, the scene between Alisha and Kelsey was a lot of fun. I really like how there is this seamless transition from their first encounter to now where they have this back and forth and have a nice little banter with one another. I definitely felt like the subtlety of their dynamic was a little lost in the action which included a lot of "winks" or "smiles" or "playful" moments where it felt like a little too much, but on the other hand, Kelsey is a very charming character, and has a very flirtatious side to her that we've seen as early as her first episode so it's not out of character or anything. I just found the dialogue captured their dynamic well and their chemistry well that I was a bit conflicted with the action involved in that scene, but it's all well and good. I love their scenes together, and I like how Alisha has slowly transitioned from this state of questioning herself and her feelings to now exploring them a little. I mean, she's not making out with a girl or anything, but she is -- you know -- gravitating towards this book on bisexuality, and grabbing it and it's a step further from a quick google search, or a quick glance that she ignores. A step that feels gradual and organic and I like that you didn't tackle this arc in MTV fashion where a character makes out with someone of the same sex and THEN figures out what their situation is or what they're going through or how they feel, etc. Speaking of potential romances, I really do have to say that I adore the Rose/Robbie interactions. I'm not pushing for them to be together, and I'm trying to get out of this whole "shipping" mindset but I do think they have a nice dynamic. I like that their worlds collide a little here, and Robbie is kind of pushing for Rose to embrace what she wants to do for a living, and not let her give up. It was paralleled really nicely with the Michael and Alex scene that resulted in this "deal" between the two. Speaking of which, I just realised why I like this development for Michael. He's pretty much been "the father" of the show. And that's it. He hasn't had much of a life outside of it and the second he finds this passion, we start learning things about him that we never knew (writing for the newspaper) and we start seeing these interactions with him and Alex that we never could have had before because this new passion, and new drive for this passion has created a perspective for him that opens up not just the possibilities of his character and the relationships he shares with other characters, but it also opens up more for Alex, and Alisha, and so on and so forth. We saw that in Michael discussing how he feels about writing, and then we can see how Alex must feel about acting, and how Rose must feel about singing, and it just does a lot for the show, and like I said, whenever things can work in a way that delivers on character and story, then it's finding gold in my opinion. So, this was a fantastic episode on that front. The only problem I had with this episode was formatting and SPAG. I don't often talk about stuff like that anymore, but it was just weird to notice anything related to those topics with Audition. Just a quick read over will fix it, though, so it's not too serious. With the formatting, I've always been taught that there's only two types of "time" and that's "DAY" or "NIGHT," and I'm not sure why, but for the entire episode they've been omitted from the script with "AFTERNOON" as the only one used at the start of the script. Lastly, the scene with David had a repetitive use of "beat." I think, for the most part, an audience can tell when someone is going to take a pause, so using "beat" in that instance is a bit distracting when it's used for that sole purpose. When I use a "beat" it's more of a pre-cursor to a shift in tone, so it worked after he said "I don't know" because he started to open up after that and it contained that shift, but then he was on the same page for the rest of the speech so the "beat" didn't feel warranted. I don't know. Honestly, it's nothing serious. I don't like getting technical in reviews, but it was just something different from past scripts that I noticed and wanted to bring up. All in all, this was one of the best episodes of the sequence, hands down. Overall, I can say this has been the best sequence so far purely based on how each and every episode has offered a tremendous amount of growth and character development that makes coming back for the next episode something to look forward to each week. I genuinely can't see a new episode air from this sequence on theVPN and go "oh, I'll read that right after I do this." I have to read it. I love the characters, and they're all getting their fair share of focus and spotlight, and so I couldn't be happier with the way this sequence has gone and I couldn't be more excited for the back end of it. Well done, and good luck with the rest of the sequence!
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Post by Jamison on Sept 4, 2015 18:05:19 GMT -6
REVIEW: 4.11 - "Weedy Comfort"
We're back!! After seven weeks, Audition has finally returned and I couldn't be happier with this mid-sequence premiere! We got so much in this episode from the FOUR plots in this episode. David and Mia were definitely the highlights of this episode for me. Their relationship isn't one I expected to love in the beginning, but you've managed to create this really strong, interesting dynamic that sort of just works for whatever reason. Their scenes are always a pleasure to read because it gives them both a chance to be seen in a different light. We're getting to see a softer, more genuine side of Mia. And David has decided to put himself first, which I completely love. I know that came at the end of the episode, but David in that scene really touched me and I just want the best for him. He's one of my favorite characters on the show and his friendship with Mia is definitely helping the both of grow in a lot of ways. That scene in the end gave me all sorts of feels. David being able to reflect on what he's been going through, both physically and emotionally. So many feelings about Alisha's betrayal, getting shot, and feeling like he's some kind of doormat come rushing to the surface and Mia was right there to support him. Such an important and necessary scene. Loved it! Perhaps one of my favorite arcs of the series so far, is Alisha arc this sequence. We're getting to see what it means to question your sexuality and explore the ins and outs of yourself in a very realistic, personal and familiar way. You're taking her journey of self discovery quite slow and treating it with care, which I really appreciate and commend you for. As her friendship with Kelsey grows, she's noticing things about herself and growing more and more curious and I'm really interested to see where this all leads to. Whether or not Alisha and Kelsey form a romantic dynamic as a result of all this, I'm still hoping they remain close because Kelsey seems like a really good friend to have. I enjoyed the little bit of Alex/Rose we got in this episode. Even if it was just a cute text, which led into a scene between Rose and Robbie. Their dynamic this sequence is moving along and I'm still not too sure what to make of it. I definitely like the idea of them going out and pursuing their careers, so hopefully so good can come out of this. Probably one of my favorite things in the episode was the scene between Alex and Michael. I just adore their relationship and the love they have for each other. The way they support each other is amazing and exactly what a father and son relationship should be. It's great that Alex's love for acting and Michael's love for writing is another way they can relate and bond, just through their passions. I don't know. It was just a really heartfelt and well written scene and I loved every moment of it. So, Audition's return definitely did not disappoint! It's so good to be back and I can't wait to see what else you've got in store for us!
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Post by Brady Brown on Sept 4, 2015 19:31:07 GMT -6
"Weedy Comfort" Review Audition is back, baby! The mid-sequence premiere was everything I needed and more for these characters, and the ever evolving nature of the show. Mia and David stepped back into the spotlight with a really interesting examination of the latter's behaviour since he was shot. The growing dynamic between Alisha and Kelsey had a little focus, as well as Michael's recent arc regarding his passion for screenwriting, and there was even time for some Robbie/Rose goodness that you know I adore (on my own because apparently I don't ship the couples that actually get together). A little moment for my tears, and lets start the review! Yay! It's great to be back to such positive reception. I thought this episode was much needed because we hadn't seen David in the past four episodes, and his role and storyline is very crucial for this sequence given the circumstances we saw him in at the beginning. This is really the arc of David, so I can't want to see what you think. But despite that, I still wanted to focus on the other storylines that are currently happening, so it's great to know you enjoyed those as well. I always say that Mia and David are a relationship pushed together by unfortunate situations. Mia definitely had some guilt for David getting shot, and their dynamic has grown from so much more than that. I'm really glad they're getting positive feedback, because I was nervous about putting them together seeing as how drastically different their personalities are. I try and make everything on this show as organic as possible, so thank you for that! David and Mia are building moments as they go along, because, you're right, they have no history. That's what they're making. That's what David is trying to make especially. This episode was a huge step for him as we're seeing him break away from the funny guy that he's been since sequence one and becoming his own person that isn't dependent on anyone, but has people in his life he cares about. Him taking the blunt was extremely symbolic of his starting to make his own choices. Mia didn't pressure him; he wanted to smoke it, so he did. I'm just really excited to see what you think of David's future, since he's one of your favorite characters. For Mia, there will be an episode that focuses on her towards the end of the sequence, and why she puts up this front and why she feels like she doesn't need to do so around David, etc. Kelsey definitely opens up a lot of doors for Alisha, not necessarily in sexuality but in confidence. They're polar opposites in pretty much everything, so I think Alisha spending time with her is not only expanding on her sexual orientation but also on her demeanor and how she acts in certain situations. I didn't really intend for there to be any subtlety in that scene, because as far as Kelsey is concerned, Alisha is not interested in her. She respects that and anything she does is purely her character and her personality. I went back through the script and only really saw one "wink," two "smiles" (although, one was forced because of Alisha tryna be real slick), and one "playful" for when Kelsey rolled her eyes. So, like you mentioned, Kelsey is naturally flirtatious and charming, and I think it would be reinforced more if we was her interact with more characters, but for now she's sticking with Alisha haha. Anyway, Alisha will continue her sexuality, and the next episode has a huge moment for her and her continuous search, so hopefully you end up enjoy that. I really like writing Rose and Robbie scenes, because of how they're pretty much determined on their dream. There's nothing else to talk about, they just want to make it happen, and I think that's a nice contrast for the show where all of the other relationships have emotional and tender moments about real life things. Robbie is definitely more eager than Rose, and that may or may not get him into some conflict, but you'll just have to wait and see about that. In regards to Michael, I'm loving his reception this sequence! He's really stepping outside of the supportive father role and embracing what he wants to do, but he also has struggles that he has to try and overcome which is highlighted in the next episode. His scene with Alex was really important for both parties in gaining acceptance in what they want to do with their lives. Glad you're liking all of this! Sorry for the SPAG. Thought I caught most of it. For the formatting, my bad on the "AFTERNOON" one, but I didn't find it necessary to repeatedly bring up what time of day it was in the scene heading if the time of day didn't change. The "AFTERNOON," while incorrect, set the time for the entire episode, and I didn't see any point in reverberating that if it didn't really affect anything. In regards to "beats," the way I've always written my dialogue is that I write it exactly as the actor would say it. I know it's used for tonal shift, but I've also read from several screenwriting sites that it is also used for brief pauses within dialogue. I probably went a little heavy handed with them, but I thought David's monologue flowed better with having those pauses. Thank youuuu! So glad you've enjoyed it, and I always love hearing your thoughts. This sequence has been extremely fun to write, and having such positive feedback has literally made it all worth while. There's plenty of more to come, so strap on in! Can't wait to see what you think
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Post by Brady Brown on Sept 4, 2015 19:53:09 GMT -6
REVIEW: 4.11 - "Weedy Comfort"
We're back!! After seven weeks, Audition has finally returned and I couldn't be happier with this mid-sequence premiere! We got so much in this episode from the FOUR plots in this episode. David and Mia were definitely the highlights of this episode for me. Their relationship isn't one I expected to love in the beginning, but you've managed to create this really strong, interesting dynamic that sort of just works for whatever reason. Their scenes are always a pleasure to read because it gives them both a chance to be seen in a different light. We're getting to see a softer, more genuine side of Mia. And David has decided to put himself first, which I completely love. I know that came at the end of the episode, but David in that scene really touched me and I just want the best for him. He's one of my favorite characters on the show and his friendship with Mia is definitely helping the both of grow in a lot of ways. That scene in the end gave me all sorts of feels. David being able to reflect on what he's been going through, both physically and emotionally. So many feelings about Alisha's betrayal, getting shot, and feeling like he's some kind of doormat come rushing to the surface and Mia was right there to support him. Such an important and necessary scene. Loved it! Yay! David and Mia are really interesting and fun to write. They've come together in such an odd and unfortunate way, and with David's newfound agenda, it's all just crazy and yet they find solace and happiness with one another and I think that's a really beautiful thing. I'm so glad you enjoy them! David's arc is really about breaking away from this mold everyone has placed him in since sequence one and doing what he wants to do when he wants to do it. The smoking scene was really symbolic for him in the sense that he's finally doing things for him and no one else. You're right, important and necessary. I'm soooo excited to go ahead and get the rest of the sequence out so people can see! Alisha is going through so much with her sexuality, and I only hope I can do such a hard, struggling journey justice. She's going to grow so much, and I'm excited to see what you think Hahaha! Glad you ship Rolex. As for Rose and Robbie, they're just trying to accomplish they're dream. They've got a goal, and they're got a mutual respect for one another that they think will carry them far. The Michael and Alex scene was really important for both of those men to get back on track with their mission of achieving their goals in life. They're gonna be the best father/son duo in Hollywood! haha!! Thank you soo mucchhh! Can't wait to hear your thoughts on the rest of the sequence
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Post by Brian Melanson on Sept 4, 2015 22:04:27 GMT -6
REVIEW: 4x11 Weedy Comfort (I'm sorry but you knew this would happen)
Thank god, this is back. I mean what was I going to read while this was away. (Screenwriters Paradise. Thursdays on theVPN) Okay now that, that is out of the way! Let's move onto this review! I personally, LOVED this episode. Might be one of the best episodes of Audition written. I loved how after we got two episodes that were set to really introduce us to Screenwriters Paradise, I loved how you took this episode to really focus on your characters. It also seemed like a great way to set up the rest of the season. For instance, Alisha picking up the book, which is a great title btw. It's going to be a very interesting storyline for her character, and something I think you're going to tackle perfectly!
I also enjoyed the scene between Michael and Alex. Those Father/Son moments are always the touching moments of the show and it's always the son saying to his Dad "This is my dream" and so on. But it was a nice spin to see it be Michael this time and him saying to Alex that it was his time to find his dream. It's interesting to see how Michael will progress now that he has found his drive. It also really opens up for SP crossovers, which I cannot wait to see.
Now Robbie and Rose, I ship them as friends and only friends. But I am VERY excited to see how you develop that further, especially with them now getting gigs and such. If that means them singing some more, then I am here for it 100%. It's really a great way to set up their story for this season. But overall, this episode was a great way to set things up, even though I've already said that...I'm just gonna move along.
NOW THE BEST PART OF THIS WHOLE EPISODE! Like seriously, the aspect I didn't think I would enjoy as much. Mia and David. But mainly David. FINALLY, he's standing up and going to become more than that witty guy with the nerd references, and one liners. He's standing up, and most importantly, standing up for himself. This dude was really handed the bad end of the stick (I didn't want to swear, but you got what I meant) in S3, from losing his girlfriend and then getting shot. All in one episode...still not over that btw. But it still made him think, because almost dying does that to you. It really seems developed and not forced at all, which is what I love. And also, what is it with you and Chris with the "weed" episode titles. And most importantly, I'm disappointed you didn't do 4x20 as a weed episode title...you had a chance and you blew it.
But aside from all of that, this is one of the best episodes of this fantastic Sequence. Overall, you're kicking it up a notch this year and really toning down all the craziness that is, and using this time to focus on the characters you have. But I'm really excited to see what you have coming up for future episodes, and what twist and turns you have for these characters. But if you try to kill someone again, I swear, I will not be happy...and I'm not adding JK to that. I will be angry.........
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST OF THE SEASON!!!!!!!!
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Post by Brady Brown on Sept 6, 2015 17:45:32 GMT -6
REVIEW: 4x11 Weedy Comfort (I'm sorry but you knew this would happen)Thank god, this is back. I mean what was I going to read while this was away. (Screenwriters Paradise. Thursdays on theVPN) Okay now that, that is out of the way! Let's move onto this review! I personally, LOVED this episode. Might be one of the best episodes of Audition written. I loved how after we got two episodes that were set to really introduce us to Screenwriters Paradise, I loved how you took this episode to really focus on your characters. It also seemed like a great way to set up the rest of the season. For instance, Alisha picking up the book, which is a great title btw. It's going to be a very interesting storyline for her character, and something I think you're going to tackle perfectly! Haha, it's good to be back! Glad people seem to be enjoying the episode, it was a really fun, important one to write. We really needed to get back to David and how he's still recovering from leaving the hospital. I also needed to show that Alisha has finally accepted that something is going on with her sexuality, and even though she's still questioning every little thing she's doing, she's still trying to subconsciously push that aspect away from her. This scene was really important, because the last time we saw Michael and Alex, they weren't necessarily happy with where they were at, the latter tremendously more than the former. So, their "deal" was really to put them both back on track and allow them to truly realize that they're doing fine, and that they can still accomplish their dreams. Michael will continue to try and break into the scriptwriting world, but he will also have struggles just like everyone else in Hollywood. Rose and Robbie came together for a common goal, and they're going to stop at nothing to achieve that goal. They've built a relationship on mutual respect and professionalism, yet they're also wildly differing on how they're going to go about their next step. Robbie is very impatient and wants to get everything done yesterday, whereas Rose is more calm and going with the flow because of how we saw her last sequence when she rushed into trying to get a record deal. That may cause some problems, or it may not. You'll just have to stay tuned! I'm so thrilled people are enjoying David and Mia together! They're not really a couple, and they might not become one, but they've been pushed together in light of unfortunate situations, and I just love that about their relationship. This episode was a real milestone for David in a sense of he's breaking this mold that he's been in since sequence one, and is going to attempt to change how people perceive him. His previous relationship with Alisha and getting shot are still well on his mind, and he's very confused and sad and mad as to why the universe has done so much to him in such a short period of time. So he's rebuilding himself in a new light. Glad you're enjoying him! Also, sorry about the 4x20 thing. I have failed, I know. Thanks, Brian! Glad you're enjoying the sequence so far, and extra glad that this was a stand out episode! This has been more of an emotional ride, so hopefully you enjoy what else is coming you're way!
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Post by Jack Malone on Sept 13, 2015 15:34:38 GMT -6
"Never Have I Ever" Review
Things begin to escalate in this next installment of Audition Sequence Four, and you can already feel things bubbling towards an exciting climax towards sequence's end. In this episode, Alisha continues in her struggle to understand these new feelings which take physical form when she's presented with an all-too-tempting kiss from Kelsey; David gets roped into a fifth-wheel dinner with his parents, Alex and Rose; and Paula helps show us why she would be the perfect "bestie" to have in life (Michael is a lucky man, ya'll).
First up, I have to talk about Alisha. She's come a long way this sequence, and it's nice to see the leading lady receive such a massive storyline. I definitely like how you conveyed this frustration, and this tiresome effort to figure herself out. I'm not sure if Alisha is someone who wants to label herself, if she's battling with the idea of being bisexual or just can't seem to identify herself as that as sexuality fits on a rather large spectrum and so there might be a "label" out there that she best identifies with that she hasn't stumbled across yet and maybe it's more complex than just being attracted to males and females. Either way, it's been an extremely interesting development and the way you've gone about this particular storyline has given you nothing but praise from me so I'm glad to see it take a pretty big focus in this particular episode.
This brings me to the "almost" hook-up between Kelsey and Alisha. Kelsey has been a nice contrast to Alisha since the very beginning. She's very confident, and flirtatious and self-aware of what she wants whereas Alisha is insecure, and confused, and struggling to figure herself out so putting the two of them together really enhances those qualities and those differences. I think Kelsey has the potential to be an extremely good friend to lean on, or something more, given Alisha figures herself out and becomes more confident in exploring a relationship with a female. The latter seems more likely but I guess what I'm trying to say is that Kelsey has been a really nice supporting character for Alisha and her storyline, and I think could be extremely beneficial in Alisha coming to a level of acceptance and understanding of herself whether she and Kelsey get together or stay friends.
Speaking of friendships, David felt strangely off in the beginning of this episode in his interactions with Alex and Rose. I was really confused about how irritated he was at the idea of having dinner, or the idea of running into them, but I guess most people -- myself included -- hate spontaneous run-ins with people, or when someone shows up unannounced. Either way, his attitude towards them was short-lived and the hilarity and general awesomeness of his character resumed in both his attempts to get everyone to read these comics, and his reactions to their feedback at the actual dinner.
Quote of the episode: "I loooooved Batman! Like holy crap dude. Holy crap." - Alex | "Right? Oh my god. I love you." - David.
This is like every interaction between us about comics, or TV Shows and with Chris and Brian, too. It just made me laugh so much because nothing is really being said in terms of specifics but they just know. They just know exactly what they're talking about, haha!
Anyway, this dinner ended in quite a surprising turn of events. I genuinely harbor a lot of love for this show and for you and your writing because you do the one thing that I feel is what makes a great television show and it's something I even struggle to do in my own writing and that is you juice a storyline for everything its worth and you don't let anything go unnoticed or leave anything out. When I talked to one of my best friends about Breaking Bad, he told me it's such a great show because every little thing has a consequence and it will always be explored, and I think that's what television shows have the opportunity to do that movies don't and you really take advantage of it with "Audition." We're twelve episodes in from the shooting, and there's still another consequence to explore from it, and there's still new direction to take off from it and I love it, and I love your writing and I'm just... always finding new reasons why I'm a fan of you and the show, so I had to bring this up. Definitely looking forward to what he does with the cash and how much there is. At this point, as much as I love David, I wouldn't be surprised if he leaves us for a little bit to go on vacation -- lord knows he deserves it.
Finally, the episode had a nice Paula and Michael moment that I'll talk about briefly because this review is so damn long. They have a really beautiful friendship and I like how this scene was more or less about how far they've come, both individually but especially as friends, and I think it's easy to identify chemistry between two characters and jump at the opportunity to pair them together but I actually like that this wasn't the case for these two. It's about growth, and this scene just made me remember back to how hostile Michael was towards her originally, and how he did want to fire her and it's like... there's just a lot of development in this show that I think has brought you to a point where seeing a "what if" episode, or two-parter would be amazing because so many relationships and dynamics have changed over the sequences, and I'm a killer for "what if" kind of scenarios. Either way, I like the support Paula gave, and I like that she's kind of the only one who understands or at least can understand where Michael is coming from in all facets of his world. I mean, Alex has known him longer, and I won't dispute knowing your father, but Paula has had all these different dynamics, and has seen him as a father, and has seen him as a friend, and can relate to him through their work and experiences, etc, it's just nice to see Michael have Paula in his life, and for him to acknowledge that was 13508710185% of growth since the first sequence. *golf claps for Michael*
All in all, another stand-out episode. This sequence has been full of perfect episodes, and this one definitely adds to the collection. As I said in my intro, you get the feeling that things are bubbling towards an interesting climax and probably a more emotional one than a huge event occurring. With eight episodes left, I can't wait to see where these characters are going, and how Audition will wrap its best sequence yet!
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Post by Brady Brown on Sept 13, 2015 19:01:45 GMT -6
"Never Have I Ever" ReviewThings begin to escalate in this next installment of Audition Sequence Four, and you can already feel things bubbling towards an exciting climax towards sequence's end. In this episode, Alisha continues in her struggle to understand these new feelings which take physical form when she's presented with an all-too-tempting kiss from Kelsey; David gets roped into a fifth-wheel dinner with his parents, Alex and Rose; and Paula helps show us why she would be the perfect "bestie" to have in life (Michael is a lucky man, ya'll). This episode was definitely a game changer for a lot of the characters. We saw Alisha actually more towards these feelings she's having (no matter how subtle they were); we saw David receive this money; and we saw Michael and Paula's relationship grow. I try and make each episode this sequence have a huge impact on the characters, so it's awesome to know that you've enjoyed this sequence so much. Yeah, Alisha has probably had the most growth in this sequence. I've been saying this is the Alisha sequence, where next sequence will have a lot of focus on Alex. A lot of her experiences are being built on personal, real-life situations, while other moments have obviously been exaggerated for dramatic effect. As of right now, her problem is mainly with realizing what exactly is going on with her sexuality and these feelings she obviously feels towards Kelsey. She basically has no idea with what's going on, and "bisexual" seems to be the way she thinks she needs to go. I'm so happy you're enjoying this, and that you think I'm giving it justice! i really wanted to create the contrast you mentioned between Kelsey and Alisha. Whether or not they end of together, Kelsey is definitely had an impact on Alisha, and has really helped her grow from where she was at the beginning of the sequence. I don't want to say too much more, so you're just going to have to wait and see He was definitely acting that way because his Moms-filled, scheduled, comic book day had been interrupted unexpectedly by Alex and Rose haha. Apologies if that created some sort of strange. Hopefully that doesn't happen again - I'll try and keep a better eye. Besides that, it's great to know you found their interaction funny, because that's something I always strive for in this series. Hahaha! Yes! Definitely one of those moments That's such a compliment and means so much to me. I'm glad I'm able to continuously surprise you with this show, and the "every action has a consequence" aspect is something I definitely try and achieve for this series. Thank you so much! What David does with that money - or, a large aspect of that money - will be revealed in due time "will talk about briefly" *is the longest paragraph in the review* LMAO Yay! I'm always happy to satisfy your Michael/Paula needs! I love their relationship, and they continue to develop in ways that surprise me even! I really wanted to sort of throwback to how they originally started, with Michael wanting her fired because he thought she was going to get Alex and Alisha now where, to now where he can go to her for advice and they can hug and they can talk about how thankful they are for one another. The "what if" idea is interesting, and may happen sometime soon, but you'll just have to wait and see! But what I can tell you is, stay tuned for more Maula moments this sequence! Thanks for the review, Jack! This response is terrible and I'm sorry. I'm just so happy you're loving these episodes, so know that! And I hope you love the rest of the sequence
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Post by Jack Malone on Sept 23, 2015 18:42:43 GMT -6
"WTF" Review
This was one of the most laid back episodes of the season, which came at a time where you could really appreciate it after the hectic, drama-packed instalments of the previous few episodes. In this outing, Rose and Robbie latch onto a huge opportunity that could advance their singing careers, Alex and David have a bros day out, and Alisha becomes the person I like least of all: the one who doesn't text back.
First I have to talk about Rose and Robbie. I've recently gotten obsessed with the show called Nashville, and their duet together just reminds me of a dynamic on the show that I love (Scarlett and Gunner) and I'm projecting my love of that ship into this because it has similar qualities that add a new insight onto these guys and that I loved in the episode. Alex and Rose are dating, but I think there's a connection in music that only Rose and Robbie will share. They don't necessarily have to grow together in a romantic sense, but I would like to see if this connection is going to create problems, and if this first step turns into writing songs together, and potentially even becoming a duo. Either way, I think this direction so far adds a lot of tension to be explored, furthers the development of these two characters, and gives us something exciting to look forward to and, of course, I loved that they received so much attention in this episode.
Moving on, the bros day between Alex and David was the best part of this whole episode. I adore their friendship, and I like how real their interactions felt in how Alex would step over the line without realising it was a touchy subject because of how close they were, and because of certain other circumstances (being best friends with Alisha). It's just normal conversation to him. I like that you found an organic way to discuss the "cheque" they received in the mail, and David's new interactions with Mia. It didn't feel like you had notes jotted down to be like "this needs to happen, and this needs to be said so that THIS can happen," etc. It played very organically and I appreciated that because of how the opposite of organic is very jarring and off-putting. Their scenes bring me to my quote of the episode-
Quote of the episode: "Are Oliver Queen and Dinah Lance soulmates?"
Finally, we come to Alisha, who took a back seat in this episode. As always, I love how you're tackling her storyline. My "least favourite person" joke is just me expressing my huge distaste for people who never text back. But in circumstances like this, it's completely understandable. The crazy thing is -- in my opinion -- is how much Kelsey has been texting and calling. It seems a bit much and a bit obsessive. She doesn't seem like that kind of character, but I guess when things happen and things that are important to us, we don't really have a filter of "oh okay, I need to give that person space" until we often cross the line. Kelsey is just reacting in a way that confuses me and I wish she would give Alisha space. *forms protective bubble around Alisha forever*
Anyway, it was a really nice episode. Sorry it's taken so long to review, I had a ten day trip back home with my family where I was without my computer, and then when I did finally touch down in Melbourne, I had assignment after assignment to prepare for within the first three days back. First day off in a while, and I couldn't think of anything better than to start the day with a new episode of Audition, so I hope my review isn't complete garbage. Like I said, I liked the more laid back approach for this week, and it was nice to sort of take a breath after all the chaotic, dramatic events that transpired before this particular episode, and I'm sure the crazy pace will pick up sooner rather than later!
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Post by Brady Brown on Sept 25, 2015 18:43:49 GMT -6
"WTF" Review This was one of the most laid back episodes of the season, which came at a time where you could really appreciate it after the hectic, drama-packed instalments of the previous few episodes. In this outing, Rose and Robbie latch onto a huge opportunity that could advance their singing careers, Alex and David have a bros day out, and Alisha becomes the person I like least of all: the one who doesn't text back. Yeah, I definitely thought a much laid back episode was needed after the intense ending of the last episode Rose and Robbie's new music relationship is definitely going to hit its bumps, but when I don't want to say haha. They've got a long way to go, so this story is going to roll over into sequence five where you may just get to see those things you were talking about! Yay! I love Alex and David's relationship so much, and I love putting them together whenever I have the opportunity too. Hearing that their interactions came across as real is a huge compliment, as that's what I really strive for in my dialogue. I'm hoping to get more of them together by the end of sequence and in the next one! David's got some more story left to tell this sequence, so I hope you enjoy it! Kelsey was mainly just trying to save the friendship between her and Alisha. Nothing really obsessive about it haha so sorry if it came across that way! It was pretty much "Oh shit, I just probably ruined a really good friendship with someone and I need to make sure that I didn't right now" type of deal. Thanks so much for the review, Jack! Sorry for this late and horrible reply haha, but the next episode definitely picks up the intensity as it's the 50TH EPISODE THAT BRINGS BACK ANGELA AND JORDAN! So I hope you enjoy that, and I hope you enjoy the remainder of the sequence!
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Post by Jack Malone on Oct 3, 2015 15:12:22 GMT -6
"Monster Trial (50th Episode)" Review! Angela and Jordan are back for the milestone episode that finally deals with the latter's trial against charges of assault and battery against his former girlfriend, and it happens to gather the cast in a way that tackles the past, present and future (which is a perfect approach to the fifty episode milestone that Audition just hit). First and foremost, this episode kind of felt like it was closing the door on the first chapter of this series, and opening one to the next. I mean, Audition began with an adorable friendship between Alisha and Alex, who were ready to take on the world, but their main source of conflict appeared to be these extremely unlikeable teenagers, Angela and Jordan. Over time, things developed, bratty teenagers became more complex, their relationship became more layered, and the show took a pretty serious turn. But since then, it's opened up in a way that this episode made really evident. It's not just Alisha and Alex's little world, and big dream anymore. We have David, and we have Rose, and Alisha's world has expanded, and looking back at this past sequence, there's a huge focus on Michael and his world, and the show has just -- for a lack of a better word -- blossomed into something that started out with these two friends, and became something bigger. I mean, as it should. The concept hasn't changed, and the focus on Alisha and Alex and their journey hasn't changed, but the world of Audition just feels larger, and it's found a way to explore more than just a united dream of acting, it's got singing with Rose and Robbie, and screenwriting with Michael. In bringing back Angela, and closing the case on Jordan, and having interactions between Angela and Alisha that shows much they've grown up and evolved... it's just a testament to great writing, and great, organic character development that this show has always nailed, and I'm glad it's showcased in an episode that celebrates such a milestone. Speaking of Angela, I kind of like the fact that we're reintroduced to her and she isn't one hundred percent healed. It felt more real, and it allowed for a dynamic between Alisha and Angela that I'm not entirely sure would have worked if one or the other were in this perfect place of clarity. I liked that Alisha was able to understand and sympathise with Angela. I kind of hope that Angela resurfaces a little, and we can kind of see her future and see her worked back into the story. It definitely felt like the show could bring her back into the fold, and like I said, it's something I'd like to see if it could be worked in organically. I mean, Mia and Robbie had a similar vibe last sequence where it felt like they could be written off after delivering on the conflict they created, but they're still around and have grown into really interesting characters. It would be nice seeing that for Angela, or at least catching up with her from time to time In terms of the 'present,' we had the conflict between Alisha and Kelsey resurface. I felt like their scene could have been cut, and their conflict could have been handled in another episode. Her desire to get advice from Kelsey felt like it came out of nowhere, and it was uber awkward considering she had been ignoring all her calls and texts, and Kelsey kind of went from "this is not okay and you could have texted me back just once" to "all's good" at the drop of a hat. But what I did like about it was that there was a subtle kind of examination of the past with Angela and Jordan, whilst maintaining what the storylines were for the present, and then a nod to the future with Alex and Alisha at the end of the episode. Speaking of the end, it brought us right back to the beginning. This whole episode was about closing the door on an issue that put these two through a lot of stress, and a lot of pain. And they made it out. And they still have each other. I feel like that is their friendship right there. They can go though hell and back, and you just know when all is said and done, they're going to laugh it off, share a hug, and leave it behind them. I love the line of action, "They continue to walk, not even bothering to glance at what's behind them, because all they have to do is look forward." It really makes me happy that Alisha came back after the sequence one finale, and it makes me really happy that Alex and Alisha are still friends, and I think as long as that is still there, the show can go in whatever direction it pleases and still be "Audition." Finally, there's an end scene that was hilariously thrown on at the end of the episode with Michael and Paula that gave me life. I'm not a huge fan of "breaking the fourth wall," but it's just so them. The scene was just a perfect Michael/Paula scene that I'm glad was included, and it was the perfect way to end the episode. All in all, a perfect way to celebrate fifty episodes of Audition that managed to explore the past, present and future of the series. Here's to the next (four hundred and) fifty episodes!
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Post by Jack Malone on Oct 3, 2015 16:14:34 GMT -6
"K-I-S-S-I-N-G" Review God, I love this show so much. Seriously, there are times when I get caught up in Uni work, projects I'm working on, or just life in general where I miss out on reviewing this show weekly, and whenever I do sit down to read and review, it just makes me happy. Reading two episodes in a day has forced me to start the review with a generic "I love this show so much" but whatever. It's true. So let's get started. First up, let's talk about David. I feel like he's slowly overtaking Alisha on the storyline front. I really like how the money is starting to affect him a little, and it's such a strange, new aspect of his life that he's day dreaming about throwing it around everywhere, and I feel like he's not too happy with having it. I feel like he's trying to almost get rid of it all because it makes him so uncomfortable. But aside from that, he has one of the best scenes of the series alongside Mia, where he opens up about why comic books are so important to him and it just made so much sense. I particularly like the fact that he relates to these heroes, and relates to this world within comics and isn't escaping into them because he's ashamed of these aspects in his life that make him different, you know? It was just a really beautiful scene. And god dammit, I adore his relationship with Mia. I need her to open up her shell a little more, and be less stand offish around others, but in terms of her relationship with David... it's perfect. Onto ships that aren't perfect, let's talk about Rose and Alex. Ha! I kid, I kid. I do have to say -- without knowing you and having trust and faith in you as a writer -- I thought for a second we were about to be subjected to an "Olicity," five minute sex scene, but luckily that wasn't the case. Instead, we got a nice scene between the couple where Alex admits to being a virgin and admits to some hesitancy about their planned night together, and Rose reassures him in a really sweet way that he has nothing to worry about. It's nice to see her with someone who I know will treat her right. I would like to see more of these two because I still feel like their momentum to get together wasn't maintained, and now that they are together, they kind of weave in and out of focus, whereas the focus on Alisha and Kelsey and David and Mia feels more sustained. Does that make sense? I mean, I feel like we need more Alex and Rose moments, and scenes, and storylines together in order for me to get used to them together and start enjoying their relationship more. Or I need to go back and reread. It's probably the latter. But I mean, this was a huge step forward for these two, so maybe the back end of the sequence will deliver on the Alex/Rose front. Either way, they had really nice scenes in this episode. The last two elements of the episode focused on a set-up for Michael and Paula (individually, not together). Michael introduced us to the characters of Tabbi and Yana, who seem to have an idea for a project that requires the mind of a writer -- hello 'something to add to your portfolio,' Michael! And Paula shared a really nice scene with Alisha where the war paint came off, and Paula admitted to feeling something other than okay, now that Jace Riordan's trial has been televised and she seems to find his face every time she turns on the TV. Personally, I'm really excited for these developments. Alisha suggests finding closure, which I think will bring Paula to a very interesting place in the next episode alongside Jace, and it's been a while since Paula has stepped into the limelight so I'm excited for that, and in regards to Michael, it's nice to see him working for it, you know? I expressed fears early on in the sequence that Michael would get a free pass, and would all of a sudden be a writer, and be working on funded projects, and leap into fame and fortune and success. I'm really glad that Michael is taking it a step at a time, and we get to see this journey play out. It's not that I don't trust you, or have faith in you and your writing, it's just that it had the makings for Michael to go from A to Z at the time, and I'm just glad that we have gone on this journey, and we are being introduced to new characters, and seeing him on this path. I'm excited. All in all, another great episode. I really don't have anything else to say -- I loved it!
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Post by Brady Brown on Oct 10, 2015 13:35:47 GMT -6
"Monster Trial (50th Episode)" Review! Angela and Jordan are back for the milestone episode that finally deals with the latter's trial against charges of assault and battery against his former girlfriend, and it happens to gather the cast in a way that tackles the past, present and future (which is a perfect approach to the fifty episode milestone that Audition just hit). This is such a late reply, but nonetheless THANK YOUUUU! I'm so happy you enjoyed this milestone episode, because it was a anxious process because it was the fifty episode. But anyway, YAAY! I definitely wanted this feeling to come across. This was an episode built upon letting the past go, much like this entire sequence has been. We saw Alisha cope with her mistakes, we saw David step out of his background persona, we saw Michael follow his dream, we've seen a lot of things. So, I wanted the theme of the past to be prevalent not only in this episode but throughout the entire sequence. Anyway, back on topic—you're absolutely right. Jordan and Angela started this show as the conflict, and they're finally leaving with resolution. I needed that to happen. They have been, and still are, so important to the show and their lasting impressions are still seen. But thank you so much for all of those compliments I think one of the main things I try and accomplish on this show is natural progression. Angela was in this relationship for over 2 years, and she's scarred. No one knows when she'll be 100% okay, but she's on the right path now and that's what's important. I love Alisha's relationship with Angela, because it grew from bitterness, to a cry for help, and now to genuine friendship. I have a possible idea for Angela to resurface, but it all just depends on if the story calls for it, and if I can work it in The main reason for their scene was to mainly give Alisha an outlet to be able to help Angela, while resolving her tension with Kelsey in the process. I do apologize if it felt awkward, though. I thought it would be interesting that Alisha managed to remember that Kelsey talked about her uncle's trial during one of their first hangouts, and was able to tie that back into helping an old friend. And Kelsey has mentioned before that she doesn't have that many friends, so that was my reasoning for her being forgiving. Well, that, and I'm sure she has a pretty good idea of what Alisha is going through. So yeah, das why all of that happened. You hit the nail on the head! Chapter 1 of Audition is officially closed. Jordan is going to jail; Angela can officially begin to heal; and Alex and Alisha aren't looking back. It's interesting that you say "they can go through hell and back" *laughs maniacally* But anyway, I loved writing that last line, because it's just such a testament to where they are. I was so nervous about this scene haha!! So I'm glad you liked it. YAAAY THANK YOU AGAAAAIN!!!
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Post by Brady Brown on Oct 10, 2015 13:49:21 GMT -6
"K-I-S-S-I-N-G" Review God, I love this show so much. Seriously, there are times when I get caught up in Uni work, projects I'm working on, or just life in general where I miss out on reviewing this show weekly, and whenever I do sit down to read and review, it just makes me happy. Reading two episodes in a day has forced me to start the review with a generic "I love this show so much" but whatever. It's true. So let's get started. I'm so happy that this makes you happy! I shall finally proclaim this sequence as the David/Alisha sequence! haha Alisha very much had the focus at the beginning, but - you're right - David is slowly taking over, but hopefully at the end there will be an equal focus on both storylines. David is honestly just confused about this money. He has no idea what to do with it, so he's spending a little at a time. The money is going to be a very prevalent thing, but when that is I shall not say haha. I'm so happy I was finally able to write that David/Mia scene. It's definitely one of my top 5 scenes to write in the entire series. I'm so happy you loved it. Mia, however, is a harder shell to crack. You'll definitely be frustrated with her before she finally truly opens up haha. THE SHAAAAADEEE! LMAO, I'm kidding. It's completely fine that you don't ship them. Sex, I believe, is a very important aspect of human life, and can be such a deep an emotional connection that I wanted to showcase that between Alex and Rose, because the last time we saw Rose in a sexual situation was back in S3. I think their entire relationship is built on admiration and respect for one another, where they can both go "okay, I'm going to work on my dream while still having affection for you," because I think that's so important. The reason Alex and Rose haven't had a prominent storyline together this sequence is because it just... didn't work out that way, if that makes sense? I mean, Alisha and Kelsey have been forced together to open up Alisha's sexuality; Mia and David were forced together because of the shooting; nothing's really happened that's made Alex and Rose need those intense scenes. They had that, sort of, last sequence when Rose opened up to him and he told her that he was going to help her through that tough time of her life. I think, next sequence, the Rose/Alex dynamic will be amped up due to a certain storyline that has yet to come into play, so we'll wait and see about that haha This is sort of a mini Michael arc that will go for the next few episodes. I had a lot of fun writing it, because Michael comes out of this experience feeling a certain way. As for Paula, she's been set up for the next episode where she really takes the focus. Judy's back next episode to help her sister, and a reunion between Paula and Jace will take place, so I can't wait to see what you think about that. Back on Michael, like I said, this will last a few episodes - so don't worry, no free pass for him! haha THANKS AGAAAAAAIN JACCCKKK!! YOU DA BEST
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Post by Jack Malone on Oct 16, 2015 5:50:15 GMT -6
"INMATE #230529" REVIEW
First off, my brain is a bit fried right now so I'm sorry if this review isn't great, but I need to catch up. I'm so thankful Uni is almost finished, so I won't be so behind for the final few episodes of this sequence. But anyway, onto this episode.
I really liked it. I think -- and I've always said this about the show -- you always manage to follow through with things, even on elements that the audience would probably just sweep under the rug, or think it's been done and dusted. I mean, this episode dealt with the return of Jace, but not in some big, "broken out of prison" kind of way. It's simplistic, and offers closure. I like that Paula decided on her own to visit him, and I like that she's the kind of person that doesn't like things to be left unsaid, and doesn't like things to be left open ended. I feel like that's a great quality to have and something I admire about her. So, you can probably tell that I loved this episode for her. I especially loved her interactions with Judy, and I do hope Judy resurfaces from time to time. She's a lot of fun, and a nice character to have Paula interact with because it does feel like a very organic sisterly relationship. I particularly liked the fact that Judy helped Paula with what to say to Jace. Speaking of Jace, he's officially cracked, haha! It's crazy how things turned out for him, and it went hand in hand with Audition's taste for the unpredictable, and so this episode delivered not just on finding closure for Paula, but also -- in a lot of ways -- on the whirlwind of events that spiralled out since last sequence. This sequence is definitely shaped by last sequence's finale, and it very much is the aftermath of it, and I like that vibe. I like that something so traumatic has been given a full sequence of dealing with what comes next. So, on this particular storyline, I definitely have to applaud you, even though I feel like I say this in every review, lmao!
Next up, I wanted to talk about Rose and Robbie (*swoons*). I really do appreciate their friendship and their partnership in trying to fulfil their dreams. I felt like Rose was completely out of line in what she said but then I scrolled down to the next page and she took her words back. I kinda love it, though. I like that she reacts, and then takes a second to realise what she's said in the heat of the moment. I think its warranted, though. Robbie messed up, and I think because they are so fresh and they are starting out that it was a little out of line to ask for money but I understand that component too. That's good conflict and that's good drama, when you are able to have two characters who clash but can justify their actions in a way that makes the audience feel just as conflicted, and not be able to choose a side of who did this, or who did that right.
On the topic of Rose, I kind of wish you just left David out for this episode. I think, as I said in probably the last review or the one before, Rose and Alex need some momentum. I mean, I don't know what's planned for the rest of the sequence, whether they're headed towards one way or the other, but I think for this particular scene, you could have taken advantage of their growing relationship, and have it be a movie night between the two of them, and a cute little date. It's not so much about shipping or not shipping or what have you, but I just feel like Rose and Alex are suffering from a lack of exposure, and I do love the idea of them and how they're both independent and have their own thing going on, but I feel like we need to see more of just the two of them in the same way we'd have heaps of Mia/David scenes, or Alisha/Kelsey scenes. As much as I love David, I felt it was a missed opportunity to have him there for that scene. Not a big deal, didn't take anything away from the episode, but was just a thought I had when reading back over it.
Speaking of Alex and Kelsey, I kind of actually hope they stay friends rather than explore a romantic relationship. I don't know. I mean, both definitely work out for the story, and both make complete sense, but I feel like Kelsey would be a great support unit for her in figuring herself out, and trying to understand her sexuality a little better, rather than be someone to explore that with, if that makes any sense. I mean, I'm totally down for either direction, but I like Kelsey and I'm worried things will end in flames for those too, haha. But then, she would be the best person to have a romantic relationship with and be comfortable with. Gah. This is hard. You suck, Brady Brown, haha! I'm so conflicted. Either way, I liked their reconciliation scene. I just need them to stop with the awkwardness, either take that next step in opening up and being honest, or accept the friendship and move forward (*jack shouts at every couple on television ever*) But no, you're obviously doing a wonderful job with these two, and like I've said, Alisha has been a standout this sequence, for sure!
Lastly, there's Michael. On the surface, I was trying to figure out if I liked Tabbi / Yana, but then I realised how crucial they would be for Michael's arc, and how they are quite different to the characters we've seen on the show. His storyline, with these two characters, does feel a bit disjointed, and does almost kind of feel like a different show (in this particular episode), but like I said back on the 50th episode, Alisha and Alex ground it, and those characters and their friendship, keeps it as "Audition" so it's not like shockingly different. I think it was just the tone, maybe. I don't know. But I love the fact that Michael has a project he's working on. These two new characters are quite free, and wild spirits -- if I'm right in saying so after their brief role in the sequence so far -- and it's a nice contrast to Michael, and I think it'll allow him to be more creative, and not put so many limitations on his writing, and on his ideas. So in digging further into their roles and these characters, and that dynamic, I'm really excited for what they have to offer.
All in all, another great episode. I'll be reading the most recent episode soon, and leaving a review for that, and hopefully I'll be back on track with this. This sequence continues to be the best of the series so far, and I can't wait to see what the final few episodes will be about.
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Post by Jack Malone on Oct 16, 2015 9:15:21 GMT -6
"AWKO TACO" REVIEW
Dude. This episode was sooo good, holy shit. I don't even know how to preface this interview other than to say it was perfect.
First up, I have to talk about Alisha and Kelsey. Throughout this sequence, it's been hard to watch as Alisha struggles to figure herself out, because I really love this character and I don't like to see her suffer, and being confused, and fighting her feelings, and all of that is a form of suffering. Internal suffering. I wish she could just go for it, and I wish she had clarity, and I can't wait for the moment that she does and I know it's a long journey but it'll totally be worth it. This episode kind of had shades of Kelsey that I didn't quite like, and it almost felt aggressive towards the end of their dance. I'm not sure if its on purpose or not, but Kelsey kind of goes from understanding to putting so much pressure on Alisha and making it more about her. It's like Alisha's journey of self discovery is inconvenient for Kelsey, and instead of being sympathetic, and instead of being understanding, she's starting to become pushy, and starting to have expectations that she wants to see fulfilled. I don't want Alisha to feel rushed. If Alisha feels uncomfortable, she's allowed to feel uncomfortable. And I'm starting to wish Kelsey would just back off altogether, but it's not like Alisha doesn't have feelings for her. And it's not like Kelsey is a horrible human being. I'm just seriously conflicted about it, especially these past two episodes. It's like the tension is rising, and I'm worried for what might come in the last three episodes of the sequence.
Next up, Alex and Rose also attended this party, and I genuinely really liked their interactions. This is kind of exactly what I wanted. It's not hard to go from not liking a couple, to liking them. It's all in the writing, imo. At least for me. I'm not close minded when it comes to characters or relationships or storylines or television in general, and I definitely liked the writing for them in this episode. I particularly loved the "I'm the lead" line -- it cracked me up! And I like how their interaction directly related to the coming conflict in David and Mia joining the party. That was a really clever, and organic set up for the episode.
Speaking of David and Mia, we finally had a moment of complete revelation for the character of Mia that gave us some more context as to her treatment towards Alisha last sequence. I can't believe I didn't even think of Mia having the hots for David since day dot. It also makes sense why she's still hostile towards Alisha, because she's still jealous, and knowing she had David, and they do have that whole "first love" thing, it's not something that will go away so easily. Another thing that made me flip out was the almost slip-up of using the word "boyfriend" on Mia's end. It was just a nice little bonus for this episode, and like I said in regards to Alisha/Kelsey, it feels like things are ramping up for those final few episodes. I'm really nervous. I hope these guys can stick it out, and I hope things become more official. They've seriously been my favourite part of this sequence, hands down.
Last, but certainly not least, there's the Yana/Tabbi subplot. Michael brought Paula around to his new friends' apartment, where his hilariously weird drafts for this project were talked about, and probably the most shocking yet-to-be-explained plot twist occurred: the police are on their doorstep?! What is going on, man? I'm going to be honest, I didn't even realise we were at episode 17 here, and there were only 3 more to go, and just knowing that has made everything on edge for me. So everything may seem more serious than it is, but I am freaking out on all counts.
All in all, another great episode. The writing was just perfect in this one, and the tension is starting to rise. I'm looking forward to David and Alisha's reunion next week. I need to know what the hell the police are doing at Tabbi/Yana's apartment. And I'm dead. Throw me in the lazarus pit so I can enjoy the rest of the sequence, please.
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Post by Jamison on Oct 16, 2015 9:54:20 GMT -6
REVIEW: 4.12 - Never Have I EverI love that we're getting Alisha questioning her sexuality and doing research and really trying to understand this new thing she's discovering about herself. It's such a relatable storyline and the way you've put it together has been so realistic and respectful to anyone who's gone through the same or similar experience! I just love it. It's probably one of my favorite storylines of this sequence! Alex and Rose holding hands, talking about video games. Perfect ship is perfect! I've always really loved their relationship and even though it's gone to some new heights this sequence, they're still the same Rose and Alex I came to love three sequences ago. Which probably means one or both of them will get their heart broken pretty soon and I'm really not ready for that. But whatever happens, I'm sure it'll be well written and compelling, so I can't really complain much for something that hasn't and may not even happen. Still nervous though. I always appreciate the scenes we get with David and his moms. They have such a nice family dynamic that's really fun to read, with David seeming to constantly be embarrassed by them, and them eager or at least willing to love the things David loves and get into comics to have something in common with him. It's just really sweet and I loved reading that. Now we get to Michael and Paula, who always have such amazing scenes together and this is no different. The Nikita and Battlestar Galactica mentions were amazing. And Paula not saying the name correctly literally had me in tears. I just love their relationship soo much! But you already knew that. I love it when Paula gets all wise and insightful. It's gives her character more dimension and really shows how much she's grown, while still being the same old Paula. Her words for Michael really touched me. I don't know what either of them would do without the other. The dinner scene and them talking about comics and superheroes the whole time was great. David was so great here. He seemed so excited about Alex loving Batman. I've said this before, but their friendship is a highlight for me every week. I've started to like them together maybe a bit too much. haha But I can't really help it. Then Alex gets that money, which should lead to some interesting stuff in the next episodes. I'm saying this like I haven't already read them. lmao NOW onto the scene I've been waiting for. Every time you get to put Alisha and Kelsey together, I get a little tense, weak in the knees and excited all at the same time. They have such a nice, fluid relationship that just reads very naturally. Kelsey's such a cool character. And for some reason they decide to play Never Have I Ever, which always seems to end badly, but I loved it. Anyway, it ends with an "almost" kiss and Alisha running for the hills in confusion. I'm really feeling this arc, Brady! I feel it in my bones! Looking forward to seeing how things pick up in the next episode.
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