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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 25, 2011 18:08:32 GMT -6
XD Awesome! I can't wait to see what you think of them, Jack!
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 23, 2011 22:17:12 GMT -6
Constructive Criticism A form of feedback where the reader offers suggestions on ways to improve the story - polite and helpful are the keywords here. Now from what I could tell, the Summers person has done just that. Correct me if I am wrong, but doesn't, "I feel the episode should have ended after Kristen and Jean's hug. The scene with Melanie and MJ seemed unnecessary, as well as the scene with Euphoria and Charles earlier in the episode.", provide a way to improve the story. Also your argument that you used, and provided this quote "This doesn't work, because in a world where humans can fly and shoot lazer beams from their eyes, they cannot have lighting fast reflexes," was not said by Summers anywhere in her review. Therefore your argument may be officially annouced as invalid. I do apologise sincerely if you have felt that my statements have been articulated in a harsh or rude tone, this was not my intent. I merely believe that the argument that appears to have continued on here for far too long over something that seems hardly worth arguing about. Now I ask that if you would liek to continue our discussion then perhaps we should take this to the private messages as I no longer wish to use up valuable space on this discussion threat. That I am sure had the original function of being a place where people may allocate a review for this very skilled writer's episode. Reviews that should be both glorify and critcize, even if isn't constructive as that is what critics usually provide, for this piece of art. Sincerely A-Person-Who-Believes-In-You Alright. That's it. I'm not being quiet anymore. Yes. This was constructive. However I may disagree because the Euphoria and Charles scene was actually very important. Regardless, that was the only "constructive" thing in the review. The rest could have been seen, quite easily, as bashing. The important stuff was overlooked, and there was a lot of nitpicking on things that actually didn't matter that much, in all honesty. And actually, Monica's line was in fact very valid. Humans flying and people shooting beams from their eyes kind of negates anything about lightning fast reflexes being impossible or hard to come by. That, and a mob of other things. And, I should also point out that a lot of the things that Rachel mentioned in her post were things that...well, look at it this way. If you want to get technical about it, Jean could have telekinetically knocked everyone out. Kristen could have blasted everyone to hell and back, and back to hell again. Iceman could have frozen everything. Sometimes things have to be done in order to advance the plot in a reasonable manner. I should point out that what Jack said previously is true. If you don't wish to be disagreed with, don't post your reviews or comments where others can see them. DISCUSSION means DISCUSSION. People will talk regardless. It should also be noted that it can be seen that personal views play a HUGE role in her reviews, as we all know her stance on Mary-Jane and it has come out in every review that's been written by her. So, yes, there was a lot of room for discussion on that review and the comments in particular. But, anyways. I think that's all I have to say on this. Next time, before you respond and act this way to my writers and readers (and friends: Jack, Monica, Reyna, etc.) please make sure that you have your facts straight and your information is correct. And, as Monica said, you obviously made the account to argue so...I can't take any of your "apologies" sincerely. Thank you, Aimee. |
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 23, 2011 21:32:28 GMT -6
I'm more a Spurs fan...oh wait. Football. Oops. XD MIAMI DOLPHINS FOR THE WIN!
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 23, 2011 19:57:15 GMT -6
I want to say that I agree with parts of what everyone has said, and while I do have a few thoughts of my own on this entire thing, I'm going to keep my mouth shut so that it doesn't create another problem. What I think doesn't matter right now.
In the future, please discuss POLITELY with each other and I'm not just talking about Robearsoul's response to Rachel's review. This goes for every situation ever. Alright? I do, however, appreciate her "shedding light" on a few things that I also personally feel were apparent in the episode but were somehow or another overlooked. But that's not really the point anymore, so, I'll cut this short.
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 23, 2011 12:37:48 GMT -6
Exclusive: What To Expect When "The Outcasts" Returns [/size]  [/center] With the hiatus official underway, VSGuide has gotten the scoop from producers on what to expect when "The Outcasts" returns next month. RISE OF THE GOBLINS | Norman Osborn, better known as the Green Goblin, makes a full recovery with the help of his two children, Haylee and Harry who are both extremely resentful of Spider-Girl for what they believe she did to their father. With fantasies of revenge dancing in the minds of the Osborn family, Spider-Girl could be in for wilder ride than she could ever imagine and this time the X-MEN could be in danger too. A DAY IN THE SUN | A carnival has come to town for a weekend, and our heroes want a little time to relax and live the lives of normal teenagers for the first time since their enrollment in the Xavier Institute for Gifted Youngsters. Hormones will rage and egos will flare. With all the jealousy, the attitude, and the tension, the results are bound to be explosive. A BLAST FROM THE PAST | A look into the uncertain pasts of two key characters in the series. We will see how heroes were born and molded, and discovers deep secrets long kept hidden under lock and key. When two people from her past visit one of our heroes, it will test her will, her strength, and force her to make a decision that has the potential to do more harm than good. Other things to look forward to:- The return of Olivia Wilde as Jonnie Storm. - Heightened tension between the X-MEN and the Brotherhood. - Two new mutants joining "The Outcasts". Discuss your theories, thoughts and speculations below, and stay tuned for news on when "The Outcasts" will return to finish out its first season! |
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 23, 2011 12:10:13 GMT -6
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 23, 2011 6:04:53 GMT -6
Oh wow. XD I wasn't quite expecting a review so quickly after it aired, rofl. But I appreciate it! I can't respond right now, though. I'm taking a much needed break for a couple hours, and then I'll get right on to my response! However, thanks for reviewing (in advance XD) And, Robearsoul, I appreciate your views (and "corrections" to Rachel's review), but I feel like you might have been a little rude and harsh. I do appreciate you clearing things up for her (it saves me some time  ) but next time, please tone it down a little. I don't want any fights/arguments started in here. Thanks ^^ Also, for the record, Mary-Jane is hardly a "cheating slut" XD And besides, Jean has been hitting on Kristen since the episode she got on there XD Jean is just as bad, in a way. |
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 23, 2011 2:55:02 GMT -6
 Airdate: July 23rd, 2011 Guest Star(s): Shannen Doherty as Jill Stacy, Ian McKellen as Erik Lensherr, James Franco as Harry Osborn and Hayden Panettiere as Haylee Osborn, and Isaiah Mustafa as President Barack Obama The VPN's Official Description: THE GAMES ARE OVER. THE LEGACY HAS BEGUN. The Green Goblin (Willem Dafoe) executes his plan to seek revenge on Spider-Girl (Missy Peregrym) while the X-MEN are occupied elsewhere with a new threat that as emerged: Magneto (Ian McKellen). The first showdown between the X-MEN and the Brotherhood wages on as Spider-Girl fights for Mary-Jane's (Kirsten Dunst) life, and maybe even her own. Link: theoutcasts-vs.weebly.com/uploads/7/0/5/3/7053905/1x08_-_legacy_part_two_-_fixed.pdfWriter(s): Aimee Nicole, Maddie Funderburg, Monica Patterson, Miranda Kilgore "Legacy (Part One)" and "Legacy (Part Two)" are two parts to ONE EPISODE that will air on two different days. These episodes are not to be viewed as separate episodes, but as one special two-hour event.
"THE OUTCASTS" is now officially on hiatus. Check the "S1 Spoilers and Speculation" thread for updates on when the show will return! |
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 22, 2011 22:18:35 GMT -6
Isn't it? ROFL. XD I love people's sense of humor sometimes.
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 22, 2011 21:41:10 GMT -6
Okay, this cracked me the hell up XD  |
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 22, 2011 17:20:03 GMT -6
"Legacy (Part Two)" is FINISHED. It has to undergone editing, and it will be posted TONIGHT. So, so sorry for the wait. Lots of technical difficulties that needed to be worked out.
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 21, 2011 13:54:10 GMT -6
Hey! Don't talk about me like that! >.>
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 21, 2011 12:08:58 GMT -6
It's almost over...almost. Over. XD
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 20, 2011 19:05:43 GMT -6
Alright guys. "Legacy (Part Two)" will be out sometime tonight/early tomorrow. There were some delays, but it's almost finished and ready to go!
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 19, 2011 4:38:35 GMT -6
MJ, I fully intended to read and review your first episode, I just haven't been able to actually sit and read it yet. But expect a review sometime in the week after Outcasts goes on hiatus! ^^ I just wanted to let you know that my review is coming and that I'm excited for this show!
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 19, 2011 4:35:33 GMT -6
Thanks!
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 18, 2011 22:05:53 GMT -6
Another image promo for "Legacy", this time for "Part Two".  [Click image to enlarge] |
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Post by Aimee Nicole on Jul 18, 2011 18:03:16 GMT -6
I just want to say that Verizon Wireless is the Dell of the cell phone world. I'm about ready to destroy them just as badly as I'm going to one day destroy Dell. XD
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) but next time, please tone it down a little. I don't want any fights/arguments started in here. Thanks ^^ 