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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 14, 2013 19:27:27 GMT -6
Dang!!! Now I don't know what you are talking about. I was talking about David and he almost fell like he was having a medical situation. Um beat up scenes. Of course yes. But if you want to know a good idea. Let his friend stand up for him once. Lol. Maybe Jordan could be a punching bag and then Angela could step on him. But you can also let Jordan get a shot but Alex and David will always win (wink).
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 14, 2013 19:02:35 GMT -6
Episode 202 - I'm starting to see possibilities with this episode and I'm hoping that I misread the moment with David at the end. I hope there really isn't any major problem. I see Alex and David as good friends and I really think they are the best. And Jordan I hope that Alex gets a second chance to beat the crap out of him but I also see the opportunity for someone else to come along and beat him down. Good job as always. 8/10
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 14, 2013 17:59:13 GMT -6
No problem Chris. I know I'm vague because people have told me that in the past. And I see people with great pitches and shows. It makes me crazy. Lol. I'm very excited to see this become a reality so I definitely will be interested in knowing any feedback.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 13, 2013 15:51:38 GMT -6
Not any feedback and that's quite understandable without a pilot. Right now I'm focused on getting a show up and running on TEN and I should stay focused on that. IF someone would like to co-run this with me please send me a pm at your convenience. It will remain an idea that is always wanting to be done. I may do a pilot some day if my other show gets picked up.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 11, 2013 16:06:00 GMT -6
Bacon
Monday's or Friday's
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 10, 2013 15:44:43 GMT -6
"Mirror Mirror" - High school wrestler and bully Devon Bradley and a couple of his friends travel home after a match and Bradley suffers a panic attack because he thinks that he sees a dark traveler on a deserted road in the middle of the night. They stumble upon an old house where Devon saw the shadow enter and they follow it only to find something tormenting them from inside the mirrors. They finally decide to leave the house but something leaves with them.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 9, 2013 20:39:51 GMT -6
At the most beautiful beach resort on the east coast, Sara Baxter (Ally Walker) is a single mother of two boys that are her life and joy. She divorced her husband and did everything possible to keep her kids from their abusive father. Her oldest son, Seth Baxter (Zac Efron), graduated from college and got a job in the mayor’s office. He became the stud in the office around all the older women and men in the office. Her youngest son, Cody Baxter (Jake T. Austin), is a senior in high school and a somewhat popular kid but only has two good friends that he does almost everything. Growing up, Cody needed something to relieve some of his stress and he took up the hobby of surfing and became quite good – with trophies and pictures to show for it.
Now in North Point… Cody starts his last year of high school and to make it to graduation and to leave the resort and start a new life for himself. Cody tries to hang in there throughout the year and his friends and family are his only support. Seth is about to get a promotion at his job and could be the thing he needs to move into a nice place and have his girlfriend move in but when his duties take a unethical turn, Seth has to decide between the job and his moral ethics.
Sara struggles to keep her life in order with everything that has happened in her past but when she receives an unwanted phone call and a threat from her ex-husband, she considers running again but her boys are older now and there is nowhere to run.
From your normal school drama to a series of intense moments, North Point guarantees to be a dark journey.
North Point is a webisode drama set in the beautiful resort of North Point. It focuses on the Baxter family and the people in the lives. From friends to a scandalous mayor that seems to be hiding something.Main Characters:Sara Baxter (Ally Walker/52) is a single mother of two boys and a police detective on the North Point police force. She is divorced from her abusive husband, left him, and moved to North Point when her kids were younger. She dates a few men from time to time but nothing serious and then meets a young man new to the area the ends up being a pastor at the local church. It’s not anything serious but they go on their romantic dates and spend time together from time to time. her job keeps her busy and her boys keep her attention focused. Seth Baxter (Zac Efron/26) is the oldest of the Baxter boys and a graduate of Business College. He stayed in North Point and works at the mayor’s office. A job that his mother helped him get he tries to do his best by making his mother proud but yet trying to be the best he can be in the office. Seth is the hot stud in the office since most of the employees are older women or men. It sometimes can be uncomfortable with those older women hitting on him. Seth has a girlfriend but they seem to be rocky now because of his job and some of the hours that he keeps. Seth hung out with rough characters and he tries to keep his distance from them as much as possible. Cody Baxter (Jake T. Austin/18) is the youngest of the Baxter boys and a senior in high school and skater in his free time. Cody has two good friends since he moved to North Point and has been his source of comfort through all the up and down situations that his family has been through. He keeps to himself for the most part and does not seem to get into trouble. He hangs out with his two good friends and makes the best of every moment. He doesn’t want to stay in North Point after he graduates like his brother did and has big plans of moving over to the west coast. Megan Bishop (Jessica Amlee/17) is the daughter of mayor of North Point (Franklin Bishop) and is Cody’s best friend. You would think at times that they were in a relationship but for the most part, it is the bond that they have that keeps them that close. She has a good relationship with her father but is blind to all the rumors and gossip that she overhears. Megan feels controlled by her father and knows that he does not like the relationship that she does have with Cody since he is a police detective’s son. Max Porter (Luke Bilyk/18) is Cody’s other best friend but not around as much as Megan. Max comes from a broken and abusive family and tries to find a way to get his younger sister out as much as possible. He stays out as much as he can but sometimes he feels he has to be there for her. Max is also ready to graduate but his future is quite unclear. He wants to move with Cody but then someone needs to be there for his sister. Max is a troublemaker but on average a nice and good person. Franklin Bishop (Jeff Kober/60) is the mayor of North Point and a man with so many secrets. He tries to keep his name as clean as possible but most people give him a bad label no matter what. Franklin keeps a close eye on a certain employee in his office (Seth Baxter) since he is a police detective’s son. Franklin catches himself in a difficult situation when it comes to bringing extra money into North Point and he must decide what to do without anyone knowing. READ THE PILOT <--- Check it out here! Seth has been working in the mayor’s office as a runner for about 6 months and now today is his first day in a new position. He now works close to Franklin, and he soon learns that Franklin is very secretive about things and causes Seth to curiously check things out without getting caught. Cody spends some time on the waves to free his head from some of the stress that he is feeling. Max meets up with Cody after he gets out of the ocean and shares about the bad night he had and is worried about his young sister and needs his help. 102—Outside of NormalStruggling with knowing what the right answer is, Cody helps Max solve his problem to the best of his ability but soon Megan reminds Cody that getting involved may cause a problem that he can’t handle. Seth discovers a document that does not make sense and shows it to someone else in the office who tells Seth to let it go but Seth has a problem with covering things up if the mistake was on purpose. 103—Working LateSeth has to prove that he is a good worker and decides to work late but unknown to everyone else is that his working late has a second purpose and that is to get a look at a journal entry inside of Franklin’s office but will he have time. Cody gets a firsthand view of Max’s situation. Max leaves with Cody and spends the night out of the house. 104—Special DeliveryFranklin gives Seth a package to deliver and it has to be there by noon. He starts out on this journey with good intentions but then curiosity gets in the way and he tries to figure out what is in the package and is torn about opening it up. Max shares a good time with his friends Cody and Megan, and Max shares about something from his past and Cody doesn’t know what to say. 105—Get Out Now!Max desperately tries to get his sister out of the house but his father has other plans. His father pushes Max to the breaking point. Cody goes out to lunch with Megan and she shares something with Cody that confuses him but he tries to make the best of it. Seth sees an opportunity to look in Franklin’s office and he sneaks in even when a fellow employee tries to get him to reconsider. 106—Dead Weight107—Domestic Problems 108—Secrets 109—Inside Out 110—Breaking In 111—Bad Influence 112—OwnershipNotes:North Point (obviously) has been a story that has been with me for a couple of months and I have updated the story a little and decided to post on here. I am currently involved with a separate project at this time and this is currently just for feedback. Depending on what kind of feedback that I get I will be pushing forward on this in my spare time to at least write the first two episodes.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 9, 2013 12:09:21 GMT -6
Heading out to see "21 and Over" this afternoon! I think it looks funny!!!
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 7, 2013 21:12:16 GMT -6
Episode 201 - Good Sequence Premiere!! I thought you picked up the new sequence in a good place. I'm glad for the guest spot (wink) with Alisha and it made me sad that she was only there through a phone call. Oh by the way I don't know what the rule is with spoilers but hopefully no one gets mad! I too like the David character. He was a good addition in the last sequence and to see that he's going to possibly be a main addition in this one (smiles) good to hear! Again, Paula you crack me up! She better never leave the show because you'll lose points (wink) just kidding but not really (lol). The Jordan scene (high five) great job! Finally he gets what he deserves! I felt bad for Alex because of what happened in the S1 Finale but I must say that everything worked itself out. Oh! And there wasn't a magic trick, that was disappointing (wink). Okay, now how long do I have to wait for the next episode? (lol) Maybe now I can venture into the world of the Super Teens! Great Job! Impressed! 9/10 I'm starting you out high!
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 7, 2013 13:22:03 GMT -6
Episode 112 - Wow what a shocker of an episode. I was not expecting that but I guess Alex helped make her decision with his little whatever moment. I personally don't think this is the end but I guess I will have to wait and find out. This whole sequence has been a great read and someone good stories. I do like the David and Alisha relationship and I hope everything works out. I'm excited to start the next season! You definitely created a fan! 8/10 Sequence One Rating: 9/10
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 6, 2013 21:33:26 GMT -6
Episode 107 - The part I mainly liked about this episode is seeing Jordan and Angela so upset about Alex and Alisha actually doing something before they did. That was great! Loved it! The James Davenport character has a lot of negative for me, not in the bad way but in the way that I don't like him as a person. Man he can be a jerk! I would have to say that again this was a good episode. 8/10
Episode 108 - I loved the car scene with Paula! You have to love Paula! The key of the show's humor. And Michael. I loved the part about him screaming like a girl. Hilarious! Angela needs to drop Jordan and I think she would turn into a nice person. She seems to be carrying a little more weight than she needs too - Jordan! Enter the newbie - David! A good character and a good add. I think he flows with the story and I will be interested in seeing where you take him in the next sequence (if he's there). 7/10
Halloween Special - Loved it! I thought it was your normal dress up party, Halloween episode. I would say the two parts that stuck out for me was first, Paula and Michael's movie night. I think that was a cool part to the episode. The next one was the competition and seeing the Jordan and Angela tricks of the trade trying to get the prize in a bad way and then to see the ultimate winner! Excellent! Good episode! Once again! Oh yeah, I loved Jordan getting the punch in the face! Priceless. 8/10
Episode 109 - Obviously I don't want to see Alisha leave and I don't know how to forecast the finale before I read it but I guess I can assume that it will be a good choice. (hmm?) I can understand the mothers request but I can also see it as she is eighteen and can make the decision for herself. If she wants to stay...then stay! I think she would miss Alex and of course her (cough!) new person situation. If she leaves I'm going to bring down the score on future episodes (wink) just kidding! Good episode and hoping for the right outcome. 8/10
Episode 110 - Great job Michael, way to be a father figure to Alisha. I really sense the decision that she's going to make because I would stay in California. Having a best friend and someone to be a father figure to me. I completely understand. But I do understand that the mother wants to see her daughter, but if she goes back home she's going to be in college so she's not really going to see her anyways! And the promo of the dance! Cool! What could possibly be at this dance? Good episode! Centered on one thing, consoling Alisha and that was a good thing to do. 7/10
Episode 111 - Dance, Dance Revolution (that is all I heard during this episode) (wink) No really this was a good school dance episode. All the key characters in their best attire and the newbie with his Star Wars references (you get a bump for that since I love Star Wars - wink). I didn't understand the sneaking into the teachers office and finding the book? I thought maybe we were going to get a new arc or a new angle of some sort but for the funny side that was cool also. Enter James Davenport once again - Ugh! - But thanks to Michael for saving the day even thought it seemed that he was going to have a heart attack. I still think Michael and Paula...hint hint...could possibly find a...maybe a chance to...you know (wink). David and Alisha (hmm?) Nice romantic scene! You can feel the love tonight (cue the Lion King love song). The song...again that was a long experience but it was okay. So with my bump for Star Wars but the one scene has me with a question mark (scratching head to consider) I'm going to bring you to my score! Good episode overall. 8/10
Well I didn't make it but hopefully I will be able to finish the sequence before the end of the week! (lol)
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 6, 2013 19:41:19 GMT -6
I always look at graphics that other people do and I always get defeated. But these are awesome. Good job.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 5, 2013 21:14:47 GMT -6
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 5, 2013 20:33:21 GMT -6
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 5, 2013 19:12:12 GMT -6
I've got a few more episodes! Hmm? Can I make it? Ahhh! Maybe.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 5, 2013 11:21:34 GMT -6
Episodes 106 - Good Episodes! I really liked the ending! Anyways. Paula again is a great personality to make you smile. I can see her jumping up and down on her bed. Hilarious! I enjoy the bond between Alex and Alisha. I think it's cool how they are good friends. I first thought they were brother and sister but I think I read where they were friends. Hmmm? When Alex was backing out, I was like you better not...and then like I said I really liked the end. Good job! I'm trying to find something I don't like, really I am!! 8/10
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 1, 2013 22:37:44 GMT -6
Episode 105 - This episode felt short for a reason. It was interesting to see the intimidated Alisha. It was Alisha that shined in the previous episode but Alex got to shine in this one. I'm really feeling something for Alex and hoping that everything works out for him. I don't know where Jordan and Angela are going to go in the storyline but I'm hoping that Alex and Alisha will be able to prove that they are better than Jordan and Angela. I thought the part where it seemed that Jordan was crying in his acting part, that was funny. Paula coming into the house at 5am I didn't quite understand why she did that but it was a good sense of how much she is working to get these kids where they need to be. 7/10
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 1, 2013 8:30:26 GMT -6
Anybody can do these right? I might try this next month but I SUCK at pitches
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