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Post by R.A. Picking on Jun 5, 2013 20:06:30 GMT -6
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Post by R.A. Picking on Jun 4, 2013 11:51:28 GMT -6
Thanks David. I appreciate that. This is something I would really - really like to do in full VS form BUT right now I'm working on two other projects that are taking up my time but it is still on the back burner. I also have redesigned the whole idea and it's more of police drama mixed with the lives of the main detectives sons. In my free time I may do a new pilot just for the heck of it. Thanks again!
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Post by R.A. Picking on May 10, 2013 14:08:28 GMT -6
Finally I'm going to see Iron Man 3 this weekend. I'm hoping also that it's not a waste of money, but I haven't been disappointed with the first two. The first one being the best probably and then the second one wasn't as good but I've heard some things about this one so I'm really anticipating see it. I'm also a preview person so I'm hoping that I get some good ones during this since it's a big feature.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Apr 26, 2013 20:24:09 GMT -6
I find myself drawing comics and playing around with a comic that I would like to do some day. Right now though as much time as I can put towards writing that is what I do.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Apr 18, 2013 13:17:03 GMT -6
No problem. I was just looking for a show to write on and I just realized that this place had a staff wanted page. lol. Dumb me for not seeing it sooner. Maybe something will pop up!!!
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Post by R.A. Picking on Apr 12, 2013 13:12:30 GMT -6
If something is still open I would love a chance also! I've been trying to find something to work on to get some experience I just assumed that this was old and wasn't open.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Apr 12, 2013 8:46:49 GMT -6
Episode 206 - I really did like the episode. I thought it was a cool way to end the first part but watch out for the second half, because I'm sure that Jordon and Angela are going to come back with a vengeance. I was glad that Jordon and Angela were the first ones to think of doing something because Alex and David are too good for that (lol). Paula!! Hysterical! Crazy! Wonderful! You write her so good. I can actually see this crazy multi-jointed personality jumping and dancing around and landing in pencil stance! Wow! And Cassandra Braun? Again a character that is just hilarious - I like her and I think I read where she is portrayed by the woman on "Glee"! Fun-ny! And the end? Awesome! Good sign?!?! Or maybe not. I guess we'll have to wait until the second arc starts to see what happens (getting into a praying stance)!!! 8.5/10 (LOL) Also, hopefully it's not toooo long or the ratings will go down (just kidding)!
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Post by R.A. Picking on Apr 8, 2013 20:55:53 GMT -6
Dang. Good posters. I'm slowly realizing that I suck at everything. Rofl. I will probably come to you guys for graphics. I'm quite jealous of these. Good job.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Apr 5, 2013 16:32:38 GMT -6
Episode 205 - I'm literally wondering what world this Jordan and Angela are living in? I know it's fiction (lol) but seriously how childish can you be? I'm almost thinking that Angela doesn't deserve my pity anymore but then again I think she's just doing it to keep Jordan happy because if Jordan's not happy, no one is going to be happy. Again, I'm thinking that some mysterious accident might be good for Jordan or better yet I've got it - the sequence finale will have Jordan hanging on to his life by a thread (emotion, emotion) and right after the end song plays, Angela walks in and pulls the plug (Ahh)! I know it's not that realistic but you know...(lol). Sorry, all kidding aside I do think that Jordan and Angela is a good arc. I probably wouldn't feel it sometimes for the story IF the tension wasn't there. I do have to say that David is becoming a favorite character for me (for some reason) I guess it's because I like the bond between these two guys and it seems that David is there for him - good job with that! Paula, what can I say? I can't really say anything that I haven't said already - she is the icing on the cake, the jelly in the in jam! Watching her jump into Michael's arms and Cassandra...wowser! I can see that! I can see her character, this crazy woman (lol). Paula, you might have your work cut out for you as far as the humor! Okay, I can't stand the fact that I have to wait a whole week now - UGH! But - good job! 7/10
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Post by R.A. Picking on Apr 5, 2013 16:09:00 GMT -6
Episode 204 - I don't know what I was doing for the last week but I finally got back into my groove. I liked the episode but it wasn't the best I've seen. I did however like the comedy with the scene they were trying to think of and seeing Alex and David trying to work on the dialogue and coming up with "Hey" - that was priceless if you ask me! I think the Rose character is going to be a wedge in this male friendship. I get this feeling that she is going to fall for one of the them and the other one is going to be interested in her as well OR maybe something else (wink). The Jordan character, some might say that they should just have him walk in front of a car and let Angela there to scream out in terror but then to discover in some special video footage from a security camera that Angela actually pushed him in front of the car. Anyways, I think that the Jordan and Angela story line is going to be something to see in the story as well. I think if I make a wild stab at some spoiler possibilities, I could see Angela falling for one of the boys and that causing friction even more with Jordan. It's like Angela is his prize and no one can have her. Even though this wasn't the best episode, it is still a good episode and for that it's not going to be a big drop! 7/10 PS - If you would have had David or even Rose punch Jordan in the face, I would have given you some extra points for that (lol). Oh yeah, came back in here to comment on the Michael and Paula thing. I did think it was cool that we got see WHY Michael was so broken in the last episode and to understand about his wife.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Apr 3, 2013 18:29:55 GMT -6
Thanks to everyone that checked this out and even though it sucked - thanks! - The admin team can remove this pitch because I think all the stars are aligning and it seems that I keep getting the same comments about the way I right and no matter how much I try to make it better - I think my brain is unplugged! It's like when I read my scripts they seem okay and then I get the subtle truth which is fine because that is what I need to hear!!! Thanks! IF someone has some spare time and a desire for this....I would love to have a ghost writer j/k of course!!
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Post by R.A. Picking on Apr 2, 2013 18:18:47 GMT -6
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Post by R.A. Picking on Apr 2, 2013 14:07:22 GMT -6
I was going to say. Nothing beats a funny cat video Seriously
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Post by R.A. Picking on Apr 1, 2013 9:44:19 GMT -6
No problem Brady! You're not the only person that says this and this is not the only time I have heard it. I'm starting to think that I'm not cut out for it but I will try a redraft some time in the near future. I would like to have my own show but it seems less and less every time I have someone give me feedback Thanks again!
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 29, 2013 18:13:24 GMT -6
Pilot now available in the original post!
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 27, 2013 9:55:39 GMT -6
^ That looks awesome! I had to watch it with no sound. What is it with destroying the white house lately (LOL). First we had - "Olympus has Fallen" - and now this. I must say that the effects don't look fake on this one. I had a complaint about Olympus because one of the scenes really looked FAKE!!!!
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 26, 2013 13:18:10 GMT -6
That sounds awesome! What would really be cool but it may take a lot of work is actually put in magazine form online! Create like a web page and each page is a page of the magazine! I know I'm crazy for saying this but if this is something you're interested in doing and need help putting the page together. I would volunteer my expertise in web stuf! If you're interested you can send me a PM. It would basically be someone to create the pictures and then I can cut and paste that into a design template, etc... Just food for thought. If not, that's fine.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Mar 25, 2013 12:06:00 GMT -6
Episode 101 - I started reading Winchester today at lunch and I have to say that I'm quite interested in it. I like stories/shows that are around high school or college students and such. I thought it had an interesting start with "Warren" incident at the beginning and the fact that Blake was there to help him and he had to be transferred to another college...I was like, this might be interesting (can I say interested one more time). All the characters seem likable so far (or not so much...Paul). I like the blossom of a relationship between Maya and Shane they have a cool but awkward feeling...lol! I think Blake is going to get mixed up with starting to have feeling for someone that might get him into trouble or it will be his roommate! Anyways, I just wanted to let you know that you have a new reader and I will be checking this out! 8/10
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