Post by R.A. Picking on Feb 28, 2013 9:05:48 GMT -6
Episode 104 - Again. Good job. This was a good part to the story. I think Paula is really energetic and if I was Michael I would be getting tired of that. I really liked Alex when he was freaking about singing and then he doesn't even get paired up with Alisha. I could feel that moment because singing would not be a strong avenue for me either. You played out the whole song! That was different and unique but the fact that the teacher liked it and they clapped for them I was thinking - Oh they bonded! - The ending and seeing the reaction from Jordan...Wow! And so it gets a little more intense. 8/10
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Post by R.A. Picking on Feb 27, 2013 16:10:48 GMT -6
Episode 103 - Yet another good episode. I liked how Paula showed up early to tell the kids that they had an acting class early in the morning. I felt the mood coming through on Alex and the excitement on Paula was priceless. I can really say that this was a nice mix and then to meet the new kids and to see how rude they are. I'm sure they're going to be a nice/bad mix to the storyline. Well, this was nice entertainment today. I think there are some connections being built in the background (of course) between Paula and Michael and that will be interesting to see where that goes. Good Job! 8/10
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Post by R.A. Picking on Feb 27, 2013 13:09:51 GMT -6
Episode 102 - I'm on to the next episode in the story and I have to say that you kept my attention through this one as well. We continue to see the struggle of getting Alex and Alisha to the place of stardom. I feel bad for Michael because I know that he lost someone in his life and he wants the best for his child. I'm hoping that things work out and probably the only way I'm going to find out is keep going. It's a nice experience that doesn't take me two hours to get through and it still holds my attention like a two hour experience. I could say that my favorite characters right now are Alex and Alisha. I like Paula because it really seems that she is trying and she is going to be there for the experience. I also see this as a sign that I'm suppose to be reading this because my avatar is the lead character. Keep it up and obviously you have. 8/10
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Post by R.A. Picking on Feb 27, 2013 8:29:52 GMT -6
Episode 101 - I started the show Audition and I have to say that I really enjoy it. I know it's only the first episode but I really like it. I really liked the line - This is starting to get on my nerves. All of them keep saying we need more experience. Well, give us a chance for some experience, people! - Because that is the complete truth. People want experience but how are you suppose to get experience? (lol) All the characters seem enjoyable and I'm sure there is plenty of good entertainment along the way. I like the angle of the mother and the fact that it's an emotional situation and probably he's going to hit it off with someone else possibly. This is a good start and really look forward to continuing. 8/10
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Post by R.A. Picking on Jun 22, 2011 11:55:04 GMT -6
Favorite Scream Movie:Scream (of course) I think the original in this case is probably the best one for me. Least Favorite Scream Movie: I don't know if I have one that I really would say is the least, but I would say - Scream 3 Favorite Scream Character: Sydney Prescott (all the way!!) Least Favorite Scream Character: Billy Lumis' mother
I loved the Scream franchise, and I was so excited when Scre4m came out. I kept thinking how the heck they were going to keep this going, and was pleasantly surprised. It's one of those type of movies that you can never really get sick of. One of those movies that made you feel a certain way when you left.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Jun 2, 2011 13:56:20 GMT -6
I understand what you're going through. I've been there, done that. I would write 8 or 10 pages and when I read back over it, I feel like it's not good enough or like everyone else...so I don't ever show it to anybody, or I delete it. The advice I usually get is, keep practicing, keep writing and don't give up! It really is good advice.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Jun 2, 2011 13:52:17 GMT -6
This sounds very promising or something that would be fun to do. I love drama, but I like to make it interesting enough that those that don't like drama...may like it. OAKDALE would be a cool thing to do.
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