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Post by Kat Q on Apr 4, 2012 18:04:54 GMT -6
Whenever I watched Buffy, I would just skip to the Willow parts xD. She and Tara were my favourites! I've read the first few acts of this pilot, and man is it good! Well done  . Can't wait to see it evolve! |
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Post by Kat Q on Apr 4, 2012 17:23:34 GMT -6
Oooh, this looks very interesting -- I was a fan of the original Power Rangers television series, and I hope I like this one too! It definitely sounds very good x'D. I like the fact that you've put a female in the 'red costume' rather than a male, and the 'female' colours for males, (though no colour is male/female, I know XD).
But it sounds MEGA.
Well done!
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Post by Kat Q on Apr 4, 2012 17:18:43 GMT -6
Oh, Brady, you're so welcome! I honestly think it's going to go well -- and if you manage to turn it into an intriguing VS, I would be more than happy to read it! I really think you'll do very well. |
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Post by Kat Q on Apr 4, 2012 15:12:19 GMT -6
I personally like this - and the reason behind that is because you could go anywhere with this - you wouldn't have to follow any storyline, you could swap and change the whole thing, because it's supernatural/crime. I really like the concept, I think it's very solid and thought out, the characters -- Riley Evans being my favourite -- are brilliant too, they sort of pop when you're reading through them.
In terms of the whole idea, I don't think you should/need to change anything, however I really like the slight changes you've made. I think you have again, a solid piece to work with here. You should be proud,
Very well done!
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Post by Kat Q on Apr 4, 2012 15:06:39 GMT -6
I think this series looks promising. You've clearly thought it out well, and the character names just stand out the most to me, let alone the titles name, 'Eden' -- it's not every day you come across a series titled after a beautiful, mythical place, so it sounds very interesting.
I think Hadox is going to be my favourite - she looks very ballsy, brash and honest, her eye patch is sexy too xD. 'They have strong voices and even powerful beliefs' - that just sums it all up for me.
I've quickly read through the pilot teaser, and it looks great. I think your style of writing is well written, and your imagination works well for this -- I actually cannot wait to read the pilot episode when it's completed/posted up. I think this series will do well!
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Post by Kat Q on Apr 4, 2012 15:02:27 GMT -6
I really like this, and I like it because you wouldn't normally pitch something like this on the VPN, because all you normally see is supernatural things -- not basic, normal dramas and dilemmas faced by the characters -- I really like Josh Hutcherson, he's a mervellous actor, and works well, and as for Alyson Stoner - I really like the idea, and how you haven't just planned it as one whole series, you're breaking it down, that would then give the reader a chance to feel the drama over a long time period.
I think you've got a good, honest story going on here xD.
Keep it up! Well done!
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Post by Kat Q on Apr 4, 2012 14:57:44 GMT -6
I actually am in love with this pitch! I love J.J. so much, and Jamie Bell - phwoaaarrr! I can see you've really thought this out, and it's a very good concept, and very solid.
You should be proud of yourself!
Well done.
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Post by Kat Q on Apr 4, 2012 13:25:47 GMT -6
Whoa Darrin, this looks really good -- I'm into all the TVD and Charmed, and BTVS and all of those awesome supernatural shows, this caught my eye, and I like your characters.
Well done.
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Post by Kat Q on Apr 4, 2012 13:10:24 GMT -6
Definitely the X-Men, though you do have Thor who is a god, however I don't think he'd be as bad-ass as Storm -- she'd nail his ass with hailstones xD. And they have Wolverine, with rapid heeling, so I doubt they'd win. The X-Men normally handle things efficiently and smoothly anyway, so we'll have to find out soon! But, I do agree with what khurdjr17 said about the Avengers, they haven't seemed to get involved before, and the X-Men seemed to handle the Phoenix well in the past -- the Avengers just need to get outta town. So, I'm sticking with the X-Men on this one, but we may be surprised.
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. Can't wait to see it evolve!