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I'd probably chose the witches/warlocks - but have your own twist on them, pagan witches maybe? Only because the idea of "necromancy" around vampires just screams at me. That could cause a bit of a stir, maybe? Just me? :-P

Holy hell! Please send my love, and I hope he makes a brilliant recovery quickly!! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

Hayden, with little respect – who are you to judge? We've all been there, we've all thought of a good idea and just haven't figured out how to make it completely original or develop it into something we can call our own. I do have to agree with Aimee, the pitch is undeveloped, and could be a little "samey", but improvement is what your ideas and our ideas are for.

I personally like the fact that more and more British actor/tresses are being introduced on this website, most frequent the EastEnders cast members, ie. Lacey, Charlie and Scott – however, this pitch could have promise. But the first thing I would work on, is to develop this into your own pitch, because we've all seen the "vampire and hunter falls in love" before – but I definitely feel this has a good potential.

Good luck with it – and just ignore Hayden, that was immature and rude.

As I've said in previous feeds that you have posted, I do like this idea, but I just think it lacks in something. I just feel like there is something missing. I understand it's your own piece and seems to be original to me, and obviously something you're passionate about, I just cannot help looking at it and feeling something is missing.

For starters, I would probably run this through a quick Microsoft Word to sort out a few spelling mistakes, like "telekinesis", and as Brady pointed out, "Molecular Combustion" would sound far more professional, rather than "blows things up". Secondly, I would derive my full attention to the basis of your descriptions and your characters -- they seem to be well thought out, though they do lack in solidness. They don't seem to do anything, and if they were in the series on television, it would seem as if they would just be standing there, rather than interacting or doing much really.

Thirdly, I feel you have generated your idea from "Charmed", definitely, and that is an all-time favourite show of mine, so congratulations to you for coming up with this idea, however what I don't quite understand is, how are the three sister witches actually witches? What is their origin, and if they are on Earth, and not from where Mali is, then what makes Mali so special? -- I would also consider changing Sophie Summers from being a care-free mother, to an a believable mother with a solid structure, because at the moment, it seems like she's just allowing a young, unknown girl stay with her and her SON (where anything could happen -- if you know what I mean) which probably wouldn't be allowed now a-days.

And finally, I would definitely go away and review what you've posted, and tweek some things, and PLEASE, PLEASE focus your attention on this, because it does sound like a very good supernatural teen-drama show, and sounds like something we would see on Disney or Nickelodeon.

Overall, I think you have a good idea, however there are specific things that would be better changed -- and with all due respect, I completely agree with what Brady has said, make sure you wait patiently after you've posted on the VPN because everybody here are really busy, patience is a virtue!

But I send the very best of luck to you, and I do hope you write this and it gets pitched, because it's a very tight and good idea you have here!

Well done, mstwprod!

P.S. -- I would probably change a few episode names:

Episode 9 - No-One Mourns The Wicca

Episode 10 - Once a Witch, Always A Witch.

Because they're real episode names of a fanfiction series by ShiningAllure on YouTube, and may be copyrighted, just a friendly warning! And again, very best of luck!!

I'm from England as you all know - and I watched this when it first came out, and it was amazing! My favourite by far was Alisha - such a slag, but then I grew to enjoy Kelly - and her now power is such irony to who she is xD.

Thank you so much Aimee xD. What I wanted was a character-driven series that focused more on them, rather than the actual genre of the show -- similar to BTVS and Angel -- but I wanted real elements to be placed within it too, but not like a soap opera. So the "cousin" thing was just the first step , get ready for some more darker tales similar xD.

I'm so wicked -evil cackle. Thanks again Aimee, it means a lot for the kind words. I'm still writing the first episode now, but I do hope you enjoy it -- actually, I might put together a teaser for you all first -- see what happens, thanks!

Something big** btw, not something bit xDD

Have you ever snapped? Have you ever broken a glass when you were angry. Have you ever hit somebody when you were angry? There is a darkened soul deep inside of everyone, it just takes the right thing to pull it out…

SEQUENCE ONE PREMISE: Four friends. Four mistakes. Four reunite. Jeremy Baldwin, Stacey Holmes and Didi Andrews went to college and university together – but after that, nothing. No contact, nothing. After a quick little browse on the internet, anything can be found, and that thing for Didi was her old friends – Match.com.

After contacting them, it was time to meet – but just when things were going well, something will happen, something big – something illegal. And this something will bring the group closer than ever before, so they truly are… In this together.


JASON HUGHES as:
Jeremy Baldwin
Jeremy is a ruthless business man who routinely manipulates his customers into his own perverse plans for their business. Little is known about his past; however it is obvious he tries to cover it up all of the time. He is married, with children, and comes across as a "family man", with a warm personality, though he has tendencies to turn cold – fiery at times. He has a doting crush on Didi and admits he always has done since their time together in college.

CHRISTINA HENDRICKS as:
Stacey Holmes
Stacey is a supermodel and a former journalist – after leaving college and her friends, she trained as an actress, but when that didn't go to plan, she decided to use her looks for what she wanted. She is an uptight work-aholic and likes nothing more than settling down after a long hard day of work with a glass of wine and some chocolates. She has a warm demeanour, but can spark off at any moment, and since she's three months pregnant, unbeknownst to her, she must be careful of what she drinks…

STERLING BEAUMON as:
Harry Holmes
Harry is the younger cousin of actress/journalist/supermodel Stacey Holmes – his parents died in a car crash, and he does nothing but follow Stacey around like a lost puppy. He has a terrible crush on her, but won't ever admit it. His feelings toward boys are starting to grow and he doesn't know what's quite happening. Harry is a caring boy, but like the others, his anger sometimes gets the better of him, though he doesn't like to use it, and there is a sense of guilt around him, his shyness is his fallback.

AUTUMN REESER as:
Didi Andrews
Didi is an eccentric and vibrant young lesbian. She knows her own taste and her own style and doesn't care what anybody else thinks. She tried very hard to conceal her past as a thief when she was younger, but it's always good to talk about things. Didi is a computer hacker, and has been for some time, which makes it easy for her when she is in a pickle online. She is very cool and chilled out, likes a good party, and normally questions her beauty. She is quirky, fun-loving and pretty.

MORE CHARACTERS WILL BE ADDED SOON! – DON'T WORRY.

1.01 | To Our Graves - Part 1/2
Old college and university friends, Didi Anderson, Jeremy Baldwin, Stacey Holmes and her younger cousin, Harry all decide it's time to meet up, and where better to go than splash the cash and book yourselves the whole "Ritz" hotel? Sounds like a good plan! Their reunion is going fine, until an old classmate, who vowed to seek Didi out and socially destroy her is there -- things soon turn sour – in more ways than one and the gang are forced to limit their contacts and combine together to form something of a criminal gang…

1.02 | The Aftermath
Waking up to a horrific crime is one thing, but waking up and not remembering anything about the night before is another -- it's the Hangover all over again -- but at least for the gang of four, they haven't got to find their missing friend, they have to conceal a dirty crime committed by their drunken selves. Meanwhile, its make or break for Jeremy and his business – he's on the end of his tether and he can only just imagine what life would be like with Didi – but are things turning more sexual than romantic for him?

1.03 | Didi
An episode purely based on Didi Andrews and her fractured past. Working as a boring shop assistant from London, she is noticed by a very rich and handsome male -- who swears to keep her safe, treat her like a princess, and give her everything she's ever wanted -- but unbeknownst to her, the real world she is about to enter, is a lot more splintered than she once anticipated.

1.04 – Jeremy
1.05 – Unlocked
1.06 – Harry
1.07 – Stacey
1.08 – Family

The next sequence should premier more episodes – but I'm unsure on how many at the moment.

(Thanks guys for reading - hope you like it)