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Post by louise on Dec 11, 2012 6:02:08 GMT -6
 Teen Wolf! Fantastic show that wasn't nearly as corny as I though it was going to be. I've realised after my recasting that this is most likely to be a British reboot of the American series  Thanks MJ for making me watch both seasons as well as helping me with image formatting. Scott McCall Before: Tyler Posey After: Darren Criss  Allison Argent Before: Crystal Reed After: Kaya Scodelario  Derek Hale Before: Tyler Hoechlin After: Ian Somerhalder  Stiles Stilinski Before: Dylan O'Brien After: Joey Richter  Lydia Martin Before: Holland Roden After: Karen Gillan  Jackson Whittemore Before: Colton Haynes After: Brando Eaton  Peter Hale Before: Ian Bohen After: David Boreanaz  Sheriff Stilinski Before: Linden Ashby After: Nathan Fillion  Bobby Finstock Before: Orny Adams After: Dylan Moran  |
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Post by louise on Jan 24, 2012 19:55:13 GMT -6
Wow good job on the trailer, sounds fantastic
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Post by louise on Oct 3, 2011 20:24:44 GMT -6
Why'd you think I described it as horrible? Besides you can edit it for me for a change |
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Post by louise on Sept 25, 2011 23:02:06 GMT -6
Hey MJ, Just saying I know you're busy with uni and all but the sooner you finish season 1 the sooner you get to read horrible fanfiction |
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Post by louise on Jul 16, 2011 2:54:51 GMT -6
I think that your first episode is fantastic. Each of the characters seem like they've been well developed so that you can see each of their individual personalities from the beginning.
You've created a suspenseful mystery which makes me what to read the next episode, to find out both what the deal is with the demon chasing after Victoria as well as leaving us on a cliffhanger.
Your story has good flow and I like the set up of both the world and characters you've created. Overall I think you've made a good start and I'm looking forward to seeing where your series progresses to, Good luck.
8/10
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Post by louise on Mar 14, 2011 23:51:46 GMT -6
At least you now have motivation and incentive to get the first season aired |
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Post by louise on Feb 24, 2011 4:20:32 GMT -6
Yeah definitely be awesome to see a dark twisted relationship there. I suppose it would have to be more of a suggested relationship, what with their roles on opposite sides of the law and all
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Post by louise on Feb 24, 2011 4:04:47 GMT -6
I agree with Amin Caluk, you need some of their lives included in the episodes.
I'd totally ship Vincent and Tori.
Adam and Cassie wouldn't be too bad as a pairing either.
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Post by louise on Aug 30, 2010 7:34:27 GMT -6
How about 40min episodes? not too long not too short
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Post by louise on Aug 18, 2010 0:56:34 GMT -6
Yeah, could be just cause i don't know yet where you're going with the series but not sure on the casting choices for Greed and Pride. They don't seem to match the physical characteristics i imagine when i think of those vices, however as i pointed out i'm not sure on the dynamics you've planed out.
So long as you're up to juggling two series and life this'll be awesome. Going for your usual humour or something a bit more light hearted?
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Post by louise on Aug 17, 2010 6:24:28 GMT -6
Like the way the stories sounding, looks like fun and hilarity will ensue. Really love some of the casting, Lust, Wrath and Envy look perfect for their roles. Looking forward to hearing what you plan on doing with this idea.
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Post by louise on Aug 16, 2010 6:02:16 GMT -6
I like the feel of this story, the theme sounds pretty awesome and I think the characters have potential. I feel though that you may have rushed through some of the themes a bit fast such as Lilys decision to hunt down a professional killer and Chief Mars's corruption being a little too obvious, he doesn't seem to try hide it much at all.
You also need to do some editing of your script, especially look over the times you've used for when Lily looks at the clock (7:48) before watching the 9o'clock news and Jack picking her up at 7:32.
I like the character Hatty best, she defends people though she seems to almost be a bad as the criminals in her tactics.
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Post by louise on Jul 20, 2010 4:33:11 GMT -6
Hey MJ,
Love the concept of your story and the amount of effort you're putting into planing out a storyline with ideas that will carry over seasons.
I'm also impressed with your characters personalities. Can tell from their descriptions theres going to be a nice bit of humour to balance out the darker aspects of the story.
Can't wait to read it and hope it doesn't take you too long to premier your series.
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Thanks MJ for making me watch both seasons as well as helping me with image formatting.