Post by H. Jordan Fisher on Aug 28, 2011 1:24:00 GMT -6
oh my god, thank you Chris! Im glad you feel the way you do about my pitch. Ok, well theres alot stuff that I still need to fix here. About the all female cast ... I think the male characters in the recurring cast are just as important as some of the females in the main cast. They just dont get the spotlight right away. If the show is picked up one day, the characters placements will more than likely change.
I think that the characters in a show are what makes the show good so im working my butt off to flesh out all the characters as much as i can. hopefully they'll be interesting and unique in their own rights. As for the episodes, thanks alot!
The maturity for this wont be too over the top. I want it to seem realistic but keep it to a chill level, you know? so, the mature concepts for the show wont get too out of hand.
now for your questions:
Do you have a plan for future seasons, after the first? Yes, i haven't written anything down for post-season 1, but i do have ideas for expanding the show in my head. lots of them so, if you want me to send you a message with a few of my ideas, i can.
dammit - i cant believe you found that out already. i was hoping it would be a surprise. well, maybe others wont know what you're talking about. i'm crossing my fingers! hahaha
thanks again for reading and liking the pitch! i'm so excited about getting the pilot finished.
Post by H. Jordan Fisher on Aug 26, 2011 12:30:24 GMT -6
That first episode was great! I wasn't a huge fan of Lana getting powers and I sort of disliked her when she came back to Smallville in season eight, but she seems different here. More mature, and more of a "hero" type. So, I'm gonna keep reading to see what else has changed about her. Quentin was my favorite in this episode. I'm really hoping that him and Lana get to be dating some time this season, or in season two cause they look way too awesome as a pair. anyway im gonna read more soon and post my thoughts. Now i gotta go read the first episode of Watchtower!
Post by H. Jordan Fisher on Aug 25, 2011 20:50:50 GMT -6
2010. New York City.
When a college student, and aspiring film actress named Lily Moore is forced to file bankruptcy, she decides to turn to exotic dancing to help her pay for her bills.
When she gets a spot as a stripper at a downtown club called Club Infinity, she finds out how competitive the business is. As she aspires to dance her way to the top in hopes to get her old life back, she discovers a dark secret about Club Infinity and its dancers... the fact that they are creatures, not of this world, that have been involved with the murders of dozens of their clientele.
Now as the other dancers attempt to make Lily one of them, she must put together a force to destroy Club Infinity, from the inside, before she too becomes a killer.
Lily Moore, aka Isis (Summer Glau)
Lily Moore has known who she was since the age of five. While other girls her age dreamed about becoming fairy princesses, she dreamed that one day she would walk across the red carpet as an award-winning actress. President of the drama club at her high school, and now majoring in Screen Acting at one of the most influential Acting Colleges in the state of New York, she is suddenly shocked to discover that her father, a partner in a world wide clock making company has died, leaving his legacy to her. Some would think this to be a gift, aside from her loss, but she soon discovers her father has lied and cheated his way through life, by stealing from his company. Now, burdened to pay for it all, Lily must drop out of school and find a solution to the problem, in hopes to restore the family's name. When her acting career proves nonexistent, Lily turns to the only other business she can think of... Stripping. As she establishes herself at a club named Infinity, she slowly discovers that her fellow "dancers" are something more, something "inhuman and dangerous." Lily must now take down the club from the inside, without being turned into one of them.
Mia Turner, aka Razor (Sophia Bush) Currently an exotic dancer at Club Infinity, Mia was "number one," until Lily took her spot. The other girls look up to Mia, as their leader and they often follow her around outside of the workplace. We soon find out that Mia is the head of a group of creatures that prey on the male clientele that visit the club, and they're looking to add Lily to their cult.
Eva Langely, aka Baby Doll (Dilshad Vadsaria) Born and raised in New York, Eva seems to have a level head inside her work setting. Eva proves to be Lily's one and only friend at Club Infinity, who often turns to her for help when dealing with the struggles of her new job. After Lily comes closer to discovering the secret behind the club, Eva is the only one she can trust. But, how can she be certain that Eva isn't connected to the killers within the club.
Courtney Walker (Elizabeth Mitchell) The owner of Club Infinity. Courtney is a cold, violent and greedy woman who only cares about one thing... her club. We don't know much about her past, but Lily can't help but suspect that Courtney is a part of the twisted club activities.
Whitney Moore (Juliet Landau) Lily's estranged mother, who has been following her since her ex-husband's death. Whitney's relationship with her daughter is very strained, seeing as she left her when she was six years old. The two haven't spoken in over a decade and when she suddenly returns to Lily's life, warning her about the club, Lily does everything in her power to go against her warning, which proves to be the wrong move. Whitney's mysterious nature comes from her dark and tormented past, which has a deep connection to the club and its owner.
Jesse Jones (Cam Gigandet) A male stripper, that works upstairs on the second floor. His past is a complicated one, as him and Lily's situation is quite similar.
Mark Halloway (Michael Copon) A male dancer, who prefers to dance for male clientele. He is Jesse's close friend and one of the most popular male dancers at the club. He is one of the only male dancers to befriend Lily in her time at the club.
Aurelia Basset, aka Tinnie (Tiffany Hines) Another stripper at Club Infinity. She starts her job on the same night as Lily.
Hector Benz (Jeremy Piven) Manager of the male strip club, above the main floor of Club Infinity. He has off and on relationships with club owner, Courtney Walker, though their relationship is based solely off of sex.
#01 - Welcome to Club Infinity, part 1 When a screen acting major learns of her father's death, she is burdened with a life long debt that she must pay back, or face federal charges. To help, she decides to take up a job as an exotic dancer at a club called INFINITY. There, she meets new friends and enemies, and soon is exposed to an unknown, dark history behind the club, and it's dancers.
#02 - Welcome to Club Infinity, part 2 As Lily digs deeper into the club's dark secrets, she receives a visit from her estranged mother, who warns her to get out while she can. Meanwhile, Eva and her followers look for their next victim.
#03 - Stripper Down When a stripper is found dead in the dumpster behind the club, the club employees are questioned by federal detectives that seem to have a history with club owner, Courtney Walker.
#04 - Mama Mia! A regular customer of Mia's becomes violent when he follows her home. But when he turns up dead, Lily's suspects that there is something off about Mia.
#05 - Forgive Me Father, For I Have Sinned When Mark is attacked by a homophobic man at the club, he quits his job and decides to clean up his life. After turning to his family, friends and God, he unknowingly discovers a secret about the club that could change everything.
#06 - I Know What You Are Lily gets a message from Mark telling her to meet him to discuss what he's discovered about Club Infinity, but all changes when she is kidnapped.
#07 - Going Through the Motions
#08 - Reflections in the Mirror's Edge
#09 - Look, But Don't Touch...
#10 - Just Another Day in Hell
#11 - It's that Killer Instinct
#12 - Conversion
Creators note - Okay, this is my very first pitch ever so, I hope you all can get something from this. I'd love feedback, good or bad... everything helps and I just want to say that I can't wait to finish the first episode.
"Infinity" is supposed to be a pretty "mature" show. Think of this being like an HBO series, but I won't make it too crazy, if VPN doesn't like it
--ALSO - More character pictures coming soon. Photoshop decided to crash on me.
Post by H. Jordan Fisher on Feb 21, 2011 18:41:12 GMT -6
Music is another one of my passions. I can't live without it. Seriously, i'd more than likely kill myself.
What kind of music are you most fond of? Who's your favorite singer/band(s)? Favorite songs? Let's get a music discussion started...I'll start.
Favorite music genres: Rock, Pop, Hip Hop, REMIXES, RIMIXES, REMIXES and...Movie Scores. Favorite Rock Band: Breaking Benjamin Favorite Pop Artist: Katy Perry Favorite Rapper: Emimen Favorite Singer: Beyonce Favorite song (at the moment): Lights by Ellie Goulding Favorite Movie Score: Mind Heist (Inception)
Post by H. Jordan Fisher on Feb 21, 2011 18:31:02 GMT -6
I read this pitch a while back but forgot to comment! I love this! It seems like you're heading away from the "modern" vampire mythos and going back to the original vampire lure, while still keeping the movie up to date, modern and fresh. The plot is pretty cool and you're making this movie in 3 parts?? sounds promising. cant wait for more info on the characters though
Post by H. Jordan Fisher on Feb 21, 2011 17:35:14 GMT -6
Favorite Season: 3 Least Favorite Season: 6 Favorite Character(s): Prue Halliwell, Piper Halliwell and Cole Turner Least Favorite Character(s): Chris and Billie Favorite Episode: All Hell Breaks Loose (Definitely the BEST Episode of Charmed ever)
Post by H. Jordan Fisher on Feb 13, 2011 16:34:44 GMT -6
Woooow! Why isn't this show on Starz or HBO or something! Really, it looks that good!
I like the idea of just two characters. Supernatural did that and it turned out great! Just proves that a show doesn't have to have a shit load of characters to be interesting. Its about the quality of the characters, not the quantity and for this show, i think you've got 2 very different and complex characters! Great job on that
the episodes so far are awesome! i love that they're traveling all over the world. This is a really wide ranged show!
the overall plot is Great. better than most shows on tv today! Serious i ask, why haven't you been picked up by someone yet!? i cannot wait to see it written up!!
Post by H. Jordan Fisher on Feb 13, 2011 16:24:44 GMT -6
This is very cool! The title is a nice one, and I really love the survival aspect of this. your character seem to work well together and the cast is brilliant. Loved Ben in the OC and Fran Kranz from Dollhouse. I'm think that's the electricity chick from Angel. Gwen? but...I'm not sure Either way, she looks awesome!