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Bionic
Oct 12, 2015 11:38:50 GMT -6
Post by R.A. Picking on Oct 12, 2015 11:38:50 GMT -6
Update.
I'm working on the new pilot episode(s) and I'm hoping to finalize this baby soon. It's hard having several people looking at my stuff because I'm getting different comments about the episode coming at it from different angles. It's hard as a writer to look at comments and to know what is the RIGHT direction to go. I guess you kind of take everything and make it what YOU want it to be.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Oct 12, 2015 6:04:28 GMT -6
Interesting.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Oct 3, 2015 19:06:56 GMT -6
More reworking on Bionic 101 and this is even before feedback. I'm personally not happy with it. I've been considering things about the way I script. I've noticed that every time I write an episode I introduce a character as if I have to convey their age and looks. I guess that is what a character profile is about or is that okay in pilot episode? But you don't have to do it every episode. I'm learning small things on my own from reading. Lol.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 28, 2015 6:50:03 GMT -6
Sounds interesting. I would definitely check this out.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 26, 2015 15:42:29 GMT -6
Okay. The new pilot episode is complete and I'm having a few people look it over and then I will be sending it off to the higher ups to take a look and I want to hear their grief first before putting it out there for anyone else. I'm now moving on to episode 102 and hopefully in the next couple of weeks I will be getting a good word. Fingers crossed. Don't forget to check out my production blog for everything and anything related to Spyder Comics - spydercomics.blogspot.com - this is where I will be communicating the most about everything SC.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 25, 2015 6:07:30 GMT -6
Wow. Did you say you're doing this and that the pilot episode is going to be ready before I go on vacation? Just kidding. I really think this would be awesome to see done and I hope that you actually get busy doing this. LOL.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 24, 2015 8:52:55 GMT -6
That's a cool idea there. You can develop the main characters as far as servers during the day and during the night - BOOM - Awesome idea.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 23, 2015 13:44:16 GMT -6
Not to answer for the higher ups but probably through email and they would upload. You can always attach a pilot episode to the original post when it's available.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 23, 2015 11:37:54 GMT -6
I like the idea as far as angel and spiritual warfare type of stuff. I always thought about doing a 'walking dead' type of show but instead of zombies there are demons infecting people and turning them into monsters and predators of the human race.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 23, 2015 11:36:03 GMT -6
This sounds interesting can't wait to see more from this.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 12, 2015 19:38:05 GMT -6
 PROMO PITCH - I'm working on a new pitch for a show that I'm working on for a show in 2016. I'm hoping to have the pitch up in the next couple of days. Yes I know it's probably not good to run two shows at once but it's going to be an alternating schedule. More information when I post the pitch - Plus more information will be coming to my production blog. |
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 10, 2015 19:11:41 GMT -6
1x01: Fade In
Enter two interesting characters from the beginning. The two main characters are definitely ones that I want to know more about because the beginning has me asking a lot of questions. Like the whole situation with the people coming out of the bedroom. My mind can only imagine that someone goes both ways and had a very strange evening, while his partner in crime - his room mate was sleeping on his laptop.
I get from the situation involving their loud neighbor that they have an intimidated side - they don't wanna die - but also they seem afraid to adventure forward in their new career and I'm not sure if both of them are Screenwriters or the one is just hanging on for a free right and maybe - just maybe there's something going on between both of them? I know that sometimes I question my own theories on shows and everything and sometimes I get it completely wrong and maybe if I would just shut up and read the rest of the season now I would understand completely. My apologies if I read too much into things - I tend to do that.
I'm excited to see what happens when they go to this party hopefully we didn't miss it and wondering what these partners will be getting themselves into. Well my next couple of Thursday nights just got busy with checking out a unique and curious tale of the Screenwriters Paradise.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 9, 2015 6:28:07 GMT -6
So you don't like the off site link? You would rather it be on this site? If so I can copy and paste on to here when I write one up. Sorry for the play on ideas. I wasn't necessarily saying those things were going to happen I was just playing with ideas in my own head when I was reviewing. I will try to stick to the point of the review from now on. As I've said before I'm not a great reviewer but I'm trying.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 8, 2015 18:50:46 GMT -6
1x01: It's Not the End of the World. It's High School
Welcome to Serenity High and the life of Hayley, the YouTube girl that mistakenly posted the wrong video on her homework page. She created a video that was to her future self and no one was to really see the video, but of course to make this journey even more fun - she ended up posting that video so that everyone could see.
The beginning of the journey is a wonderful start to the series. Each characters were introduced rather well and you can't help but feel something for each of these characters. From Hayley, the main character who posted the wrong video and started this catastrophic adventure. Where exactly could this video lead us? I'm excited to see where else these students lead us.
From characters like Danny and what exactly his connection is to Hayley? Is he going to be a boyfriend or just a good friend that doesn't feel comfortable getting that close. And what about Tatum? The gay guy. The one that probably could be interested in Danny also. Maybe it'll cause a love triangle between Hayley and Danny? Lol, or maybe not. Maybe I'm just overthinking on the first episode.
Okay and we can't forget about the bumbling three b's that like to chomp on gum. Doesn't every school have three girls just like that. Those blonde bimbos - sorry to all the blondes that are out there and aren't like these b's - but I have to think that we're going to see a lot of fun stuff with them. They are truly a great add to the story.
All that to say, I think all the characters have proven to be a great at to the series and I can't wait to see where it's going.
Lastly - Maureen. I really think this was the key direction for me in the series the one that is going to focus Hayley and get her on the right path. I'll probably be wrong and I'll come back to this.
I have to really say that I like the celebrity that are portraying the characters and I think they fit.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 8, 2015 12:31:25 GMT -6
Working on Bionic 101 - I'm excited about the first sequence and I'm hoping to get the first sequence done before my vacation at the end of the month or at least close to it.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 7, 2015 6:17:23 GMT -6
Are you still doing this? I would be interested in seeing this happen.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Sept 5, 2015 19:06:26 GMT -6
Thinking through a title - Paradox or Time Paradox - Sounds like a good idea and I will definitely like to check out the pilot some time in the future. Keep pushing.
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Post by R.A. Picking on Aug 23, 2015 10:26:32 GMT -6
I was working on a third project that I would actually like to see startup in 2016. If Bionic were to get picked up and this I think I could run two. They're webisodes it's almost like part of a whole episode. Lol. Anyways I'm excited about the notes I got so far in one day.
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